' Moksha' a swasan story chapter NOTEup @ 24(13/12/17) - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anika2

Nice update... Thank god kavita is sanskar's sis and finally friendship ho gyi ab love bhi jaldi se kra de.


Itni jaldi kya hai...😉 wait n enjoy...😛

Kavi... Sisso😆 mazza aaya na😃


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Finally swasan became friends..
Nice

Thanks...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago




Chapter 5
{Friends... Friend}


Good friends help you find important things when you have lost them... Your smile... your happiness and your hope...




Their moment was broken when they heard someone opening the door..

"Let me check swara... maybe lakshya has come" sanskaar said with a little hope in his eyes... " I will also come" swara said... "Ok.. let's go" sanskaar said...





When they reached at door they saw lakshya and ragini has entered in library... "Di...you okay" ragini said hugging tightly swara... " Yes chooti... don't worry" swara said... "No di you are lying your eyes are telling the whole scenario...wait a minute this jerk..." Ragini said racing towards sanskaar but before she could reach there lakshya came in front of her and start shouting at her... " See... your insane sis has made my bhai cry like kid..." Lakshya said looking at ragini then at swara... "What...my sis...no Mr donkey your bhai has hurted my di... I will kill you today..." Ragini said looking at lakshya and then at sanskaar... "You..." Both said at same time pointing fingers at each other... Before they could do anything further swara dragged ragini at one corner and sanskaar dragged lakshya at other corner... "Di...why did you dragged me I will kill him today..." Ragini said in anger... "Ufff... My angel everything is alright..he has asked me sorry and I have forgiven him..." Swara said... "I knew he can't change... what are you serious..." ragini said checking swara forehead... "yes rago... now go and say sorry to lakshya..." swara said trying to calm the tsunami here...and on other side sanskaar was doing the same... "Bhai...why did you stopped me..." Lakshya said in anger... "Because everything is alright now... I did asked forgiveness and she forgave me...and now we two are friends..." Sanskaar said... "What... are you serious..." Lakshya hugged sanskaar with a huge smile... "Now...I want you too say sorry to ragini be friends with her..." Sanskaar said parting out from hug... "Are you serious bhai... this girl is always ready to kill me...you want me to say sorry..." Lakshya said making silly faces... " Lucky go..." Sanskaar ordered lakshya... "OK fine" lakshya said... He was moving towards ragini when he saw she was also coming towards him... "S... sorry" lakshya said... "It's ok" ragini said with attitude... "Ragini..." Swara said from behind... " Ok fine... I am sorry too..." Ragini said hurriedly... " It's ok... Friends" lakshya said forwarding his hand... "Okay" ragini said half-heartedly shaking hands with lakshya... " Now... let's go...di mom was really worried about you..." Ragini said breaking the shake... " Yeah... I will give lift to you" lakshya said...to which swara and ragini nodded in yes...



In car... Everyone was silent when something struck swara's mind...


" Ragu...how did you come to know about us being here...when none of our phones were working..." Swara enquired... " Wooo...di... Wooo haaa... Lakshya called me asked me about you and sanskaar...so I thought he must be knowing so we come..." Ragini said leaving lakshya in shock and swara in suspicious state... "What...me ooo yaaa..."lakshya said coming out of shock... "Yaaa di I knew sanskaar bhai was in library before college getting over..." Lakshya said... "Well... Bahut didn't informed you about me being in library..." Sanskaar said giving more 440 shock to lakshya... "What's happening here...will you two tell us the truth..." Swasan said at same time... "I guess we are trapped...tell the truth lakshya..." Ragini said in low voice... "Me...why me you tell I don't wanna get butchered here..."lakshya said... "Yes Mr donkey you will tell them as it was your plan..." Ragini shouted at lakshya... "My plan...as if you didn't knew anything..."lakshya said mocking at ragini... "You...donkey" ragini said... "You brain eater..." Lakshya said... "Stop it you two... lakshya drive properly I don't wanna die so soon...and ragu you tell me what's the truth" swara said... "Ok di... Actually di it was all our plan I knew you will remain upset until and unless things get sorted between you two... So I said lakshya to make sanskaar say sorry... lakshya was successful in making sanskaar understand he was wrong but when he came to say sorry to you everything got more complicated so...we decided to make you two spent time with each other..."lakshya said completing ragini... "Brilliant but how you two decided the venue" sanskaar asked giving death glares to lakshya... "Well bhai I heard you talking about some books which you had to burrow from library and I told him that you also liked spending time at library...so" ragini said completing lakshya... "So...kahi unkahi battein' was also a trap...mind blowing..." Swara said giving death glares to ragini... "What about librarian..." Sanskaar asked... "Well...a little bit of bribe" lakshya said making a puppy face... "We are sorry di...n bhai" lakshya and ragini said at once... "Ok...we forgive but never repeat this" swasan said at once



At home...



"Beta...shona you alright..." Shomi asked hugging swara... "Yes maa... I am fine..." Swara said parting from hug... "What happened...why were you this much late..."shomi enquired... "Wo maa... We... I mean me and sanskaar got trapped in library... thanks to rahi n lakshya they saved us..." Swara said rolling her eyes towards ragini... "Isn't it ragini..." Swara said with a grin... "Yes...maa" ragini said... "Maa... I am hungry... let's eat something" swara said seeing ragini sad... Everything went fine now all of them were in their beds try to catch some sleep...



Since she was very tired... after thinking what happened today swara slept with a smile on her face...she was sleeping peacefully when she heard someone shouting...'help' she woke up at once she saw this time someone was shouting out of window...she opened the window and...


"Nooo... somebody help... please he will die... somebody" she saw she was crying near a river cliff shouting for help " no... I can't stay here let you die just stay here... please don't loose hope I will come with help just stay with me..." Nyantara said leaving a man near cliff swara was watching all this hiding behind a tree she tried to see the person's face but all in vain. Swara felt as if that person died she will also die she didn't knew why but a lone tear escaped from her eyes... And then she started sobbing in real also...





"Di... What happened why are you crying is everything well..." Ragini started shaking swara which made swara awake... "Ragini... He was dying and I was watching helplessly" swara said crying hard... "Di...no one is dying it was just a dream forget about it" ragini said hugging swara tightly... "It's ok... don't think about it much... should I call mom..." Ragini said comforting swara... "No... chooti she will get worried it's already 2'O clock...let her sleep" swara said wiping her tears... "Di...you alright na..." Ragini asked... "Yaa I am fine go sleep" swara said... "No... First you sleep..." Ragini said. "Ok baba...see I am sleeping" swara said closing her eyes... After some time both were sleeping peacefully...





At college...

"Good morning shona" kavya said... "Good morning kavya...how is aunty..." Swara enquired... " She is still ill"kavya said with moist eyes... "Kavya... don't worry about her she will be okay soon" swara said hugging kavya tightly... "Yes swara I know..." Kavya said... "Don't worrywe will soon eat biryani from her hand..." Swara said trying to lighten up the environment... "Haan...haan sure...now come or we will get late for the class..." Kavya said smiling... Swara and kavya reached class when they saw only two seats were left... "Swara I am going to sit with rahul you go sit with your dream boy..."kavya said teasing swara... "Aahaan...come with me..." Swara said dragging her to sanskaar's table... "Good morning sanky..." Swara said... "Good morning shona" sanskaar said... " Meet kavya my best friend forever..."swara said looking at sanskaar and then at kavya who was still in shock... "Hello! Kavya" sanskaar said... To check if it was not her dream she pinched swara... " Ouch... kavya why did you pinched me..." Swara said rubbing her hand... " Swara... what's happening here... please tell me before I die in suspense"kavya said making a puppy face... "Well...he asked me sorry yesterday and now we are friends" swara said laughing sweetly... " Oh! I thought I was still in my dream..."


The trio brust out laughing after narrating yesterday library incident...


Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
So guys done with chapter 5...do tell how it came out about past do have some patience and guess what happened to the man...who was that man

This IF has irritated hell out of me in this update😡



Siggi credit as always nivi baccha😳



Tani
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey tani..
Awesome part...try to update quickly..want to know about swasan past story more...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey tani..

Awesome part...try to update quickly..want to know about swasan past story more...

Talia


Talia di...🤗

Well I am trying my best to update regularly but you know I have so much of work to do.

About past life just 2-3 more updates di... don't worry😳


Tani
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part
Do
Continue sooner
😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kavya ka to pata nahi lekin main zarur suspence ke maare marne wali hoon. So much suspence about the past. But the chapter which you gave, I forgive you for not revealing the past. Ragini and laksh have become cupid in swasan's friendship-love story 😳. This ragini and laksh are much better than the serial ones 😆. Waiting for the story to unfold. Enjoying every teeny-weeny bit of it.
Love you
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
I really like this kavya in ur ff. Nice chapter loved it and plzz reveal the past soon i'm very curious to know about there past life. Update soon with thoda sa past revealation 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome..raglak are so cool..
Swara's nightmare is confusing me...
What's the mystery???

Thanks

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