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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kashaf789

Nice part
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Originally posted by: Nivijo

Kavya ka to pata nahi lekin main zarur suspence ke maare marne wali hoon. So much suspence about the past. But the chapter which you gave, I forgive you for not revealing the past. Ragini and laksh have become cupid in swasan's friendship-love story 😳. This ragini and laksh are much better than the serial ones 😆. Waiting for the story to unfold. Enjoying every teeny-weeny bit of it.

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Hehehe... kyunki suspense bhi jarrori hota hai😛 thanks for forgiving... it's nothing like cupid right know... but yaa ragu can't see her sister upset and same goes for lakshya😳


Bro n sis are like this only...not like our sr one😆


Yes enjoy a little happiness for 2-3 parts more...baad me shock pe shock lagega😛


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Kavyas reaction loved it

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Originally posted by: anika2

I really like this kavya in ur ff. Nice chapter loved it and plzz reveal the past soon i'm very curious to know about there past life. Update soon with thoda sa past revealation 😳

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Well can't promise of past revelation in next part... but it will be revealed soon😊



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Awesome..raglak are so cool..
Swara's nightmare is confusing me...
What's the mystery???

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Mystery will be revealed soon😊



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Chapter 6

{The trip}



There are winds of destiny that blow when we least expect them.



There laughing session got a break when professor Tyagi entered in class. Everyone in the class hurried to get their seat.



"So... Good morning class how is everyone doing" professor asked cheering everyone up

"It's going well sir..." students replied in a monotonous manner

"Oh! Everybody's is sounding so cool...I guess you guys don't need a break... a trip to raigarh forests" professor said waiting for their reactions with a mischievous smile

"No sir we don't...what..." everyone said in shock

"Yes students...our principal whom you all call princy has announced a trip to raigarh forests for all 1st year students where they will come close to nature and can get a relaxing period after whole tiring year" professor said

"But sir...we are second year students"someone said from back

"Hmmm... I know till yesterday it was only for first year students but now it's for second year students also"professor said cheering everyone

"Are you serious sir" kavya asked with open mouth

"Yes...miss sharma...now close your mouth" professor said embarrassing kavya

"Now who all are interested can submit their names and thousand rupees till Friday as we will board our buses on Saturday evening if everything went well we will reach there on Sunday afternoon and return on Thursday"professor informed everyone

"Please bring this consent back with your parents signature and the amount also before Friday"professor said distributing consent forms to everyone






"Di...trip wow"ragini said hugging and rotating swara in canteen

"Ragu control your emotions we are still in canteen"swara said calming ragini down

"Oh...di you are so boring don't tell me you are going to leave your chooti in that hideous jungle alone" ragini said making silly faces which left everyone laughing

"Ragini...why are you fearing...I think none of the animals are as dangerous as you...after seeing you they will fear more"lakshya said in return of which he got a dead glare from ragini which made lakshya alert

"You... leave it don't want to spoil my mood...di tell me are you coming"ragini asked

"Only if kavya will also come along"swara said looking straight at kavya

"But...swara mom is not well I don't feel like going"kavya said with a sad face

"Kavya...I know that's why I am saying it"swara said assuring kavya that things will settle down soon

"Hmmm will tell you tomorrow morning about it"kavya said

"Sanskaar... what about you and lakshya"swara asked

"Well... I can't tell you about it now but I am sure lucky has made his mood... isn't it"sanskaar replied

"Yes...I am not boring like you guys... I am going"lakshya said

"But lakshya we have enough monkeys in jungle... there's no need of one more"ragini said making everyone laugh like maniac

"Bhai...see this girl always behind me"lakshya said making a crying baby face

"Ragini... don't call him monkey... it's not good to call a donkey... monkey"sanskaar said which left lakshya more embarrassed

"Right"ragini said giving hi-fi to sanskaar

"Ufff...stop all this right now...ok fine then we will meet tomorrow and discuss about this"swara said to everyone...then everyone said goodbye to each other




After attending there 3-4 classes all of them went back to their home



At dinning table

"So...how was your day shona...ragu..."sharmishtha asked

"Fantastic mom...you know our college has arranged a trip to raigarh forests"ragu said with excitement

"That's fantastic...so you guys going"sharmishtha asked looking at swara's sad face

"No mom di is not going so I am also not going"ragini said with a pale face

"But why...what happened shona"sharmishtha asked

"Mom kavya's mom is sick...so she is not going and don't want to go alone"swara said with a sad face

"Hmmm...so that's real problem don't worry I will handle it"sharmishtha said assuring swara

"But how..."swara looked at sharmishtha in shock

"Beta... you don't worry you just go and enjoy with your friends...a little fresh air would be good for you all"sharmishtha said feeding kheer to swara and ragini

"Oh mom you are the best"ragini said kissing sharmishtha on her cheeks

"Now you guys go have rest"sharmishtha said

"Ok mom...good night"swara and ragini said in union

"Swara you wait for a second...ragu you go I want to talk with shona"sharmishtha said kissing ragu on forehead

"Ok mom"ragini said and left for her room

"Shona...are you alright...I mean your dreams are they still"sharmishtha asked looking nervously at swara

"No mom they are not...they are coming frequently to me...but you only told me not to think about them"swara said

"What happened mom...is everything alright"swara enquired seeing sharmishtha's nervousness

"Nothing... nothing dear just a little headache...go and sleep"sharmishtha said changing the topic

"Ok mom"seeing that sharmishtha doesn't want to tell swara moved towards her room when sharmishtha stopped her

"Swara... promise me that you won't let those dreams get heavy on you"sharmishtha said caressing swara

"Hmmm...ok mom I promise"swara said assuring sharmishtha

"Good night shona"sharmishtha said

"Good night mom"swara replied and walked to her room





I know shona...you must be thinking why I am hiding the truth from you but believe me shona it's not the right time to know the truth I know those dreams have made your life difficult but after knowing the truth which have been buried in the past will make your life next to hell... those days still haunt me as nightmare...I don't want to push you in that darkness again... I don't want to loose my family again...I have to talk to her as soon as possible only she can help me in this situation where are you.


Sharmishta was busy in her thoughts when she heard her phone vibrating..it was a message * I am returning in 7 days stay positive and have faith in God*


The message gave her strength to fight the upcoming tsunami with a determined face she walked to her room




She was tossing in her bed thinking about what happened downstairs...Swara knew her mom was not like other women who cry and get upset about every single thing...she knew there was something which was bothering sharmishtha and she was not sharing it with anyone...she also knew if she will ask about it... sharmishtha will get hurt so she has no other way than to wait till sharmishtha tells her everything






Next morning at college swara and ragini entered the main gate and saw kavya waiting for them



"Swara..."kavya hugged swara tightly with teary eyes

"What happened kavya...is everything alright"swara asked seeing tears in her eyes

"Swara you are really my guardian angel"kavya said wiping her tears

"Di...but how"ragini asked getting confused. "Guys what's happening here... kavya di can you just explain and why are you crying"ragini said

"Ragini mom and I had an argument about trip...I said that I am not going anywhere as I can't leave her alone...and she was getting stubborn for sending me on the trip then in morning...



"Mom... what's all this...why is your bag packed"kavya asked her mom seeing the suitcase near the door "Are you going somewhere"

"Yes...if you are stubborn than I am your mom"suchitra said

"Mom... please"before she could complete her sentence the doorbell rang

"So...she is here...you stay here I will open the door"suchitra said opening the door

"sharmishtha you came..."suchitra hugged and welcomed sharmishta inside the house

"Aunty...what happened you here...is everything alright"kavya asked worrying

"Offo...beta everything's alright you and shona both are same always trying to be granny"sharmishtha said hugging kavya

"Aunty..."kavya said making a puppy face

"Yeah sharmishtha...let them be grannies we will enjoy...come let's go my bag is ready"suchitra said pointing towards the bag

"What...where are you two going"kavya asked getting confused

"Now see...you don't want to enjoy with your friends...but we want"suchitra said making kavya more confused

"Beta...I know you also want to go with your friends and why not these are the days to enjoy life without any tensions"suchitra said caressing kavya

"But maa... leaving you alone in this condition"kavya said

"That's the reason why I am here...see now you all will go and enjoy and we're going to miss you...to complete that vacuum we will stay together until you guys return"sharmishtha said clearing all the clouds

"Hmmm and here is your money and consent"suchitra handed both the things to kavya

"Aunty...maa you are the best thing happened to my life"kavya said hugging both of them

"We know...now go or else you will be late"sharmishtha said

"And remember you have to return with shona only"suchitra said

"Ok mom...bye" kavya said hurrying




"I see where was mom's temple"ragini said hugging kavya and swara tightly

"Ok...guys come on let's go...or else we will be late"swara said parting from the hug




In the class...

"Hi swara...and kavya"sanskaar wished both of them

"Good morning"kavya and swara replied

"So who all are going"sanskaar asked

"Well...we both are going"kavya said happily. "And what about you"

"Well I didn't wanted to go...but you see badi maa thinks I should go out with everyone and make friends and when I denied she forced me in name of accompanying lakshya seeing his stubbornness to go with me"sanskaar said taking her consent out of his bag

"But I don't have consent and money..."swara stopped in between seeing her phone vibrating

"Guess what... It's mom she texted that she has kept the consent and money in my bag only"swara said searching for form and money in bag

"Well... they are our mom's always know how to surprise us"kavya said




After this... everything went right whole day and they all parted to go back their home



"So how was the day"sharmishtha said welcoming them

"Mom... I didn't knew about the new temple in kavya di house"ragini said giggling

"Hmmm...it was temple only from where I got my daughter's happiness"sharmishtha said

"Awww... Mom"ragini said hugging sharmishtha

"Where is kavya"suchitra asked seeing swara and ragini on gate

"Aunty...she is still fighting with auto driver for change"swara said pointing towards kavya who was still busy in her fights. "Wait aunty I'll bring her"

"Bhaiya...here take your change...kavya let's go na yaar... aunty is waiting for you"swara said dragging kavya from there

"Oohoo...swara why did you drag me I would have handle him..."kavya said arguing with swara

"Here aunty"swara said... handing kavya proudly to suchitra. Everything moved at pace...after eating lunch everyone headed to their bedrooms




"Wow...di I am so excited"ragini said seating on bed

"Me too... swara you must be super excited isn't it"kavya said grinning

"What do you mean"swara said getting no point

"Sanskaar...is also coming"kavya said giving extra effort on saying sanskaar

"Kavya...you"swara said picking the pillow,started beating her

"I also want to join"ragini said

"Find your pillow"swara said and started beating both kavya and ragini...soon after this fierce battle they retired to sleep




On other side


"Bhai...I am so excited"lakshya said going in his dream work

"For trip...or spending time with ragini"sanskaar said with naughty smile on his face

"Haaa bhai...bhai...no I am not excited for ragini"lakshya said going red

"Hayee...my bro know to blush also"sanskaar teased him

"Bhai..."lakshya said getting angry...since he didn't found anything else so he also attacked sanskaar with pillow which ultimately led to boy's pillow fight



Bhai has changed so much after meeting swara... I can't believe he started eating lunch with us...started showing his emotions... started making friends...the laugh which was far apart from you... all these years I have made myself a joker just to see you smile now I think I don't need to worry about you more... thanks to you swara for giving my bro new life...





Friends... relation... everything has fallen in it's place... everyone is happy not knowing about the upcoming blunder...how long will these happiness last


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Posted: 8 years ago
So guys done with part 6😳 next update after my exams go over
This part is all about their bond with each other... 😊

Coming to past and revelation point...will give you all teaser releasing some secrets🤗 soon


Love...betrayal...deaths... secrets and many more things are in the pipe...😊


But guys...if you all feel that it has become boring or you guys are not liking it then you all free to share your views😳 then I will end it revealing the secrets😵


Waiting for your comments...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice and wonderful update

Tani partner

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