SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 ) - Page 4

Originally posted by: StarySKY

I am not going to use that 3 letters ..

Will come later , I am tired and sleepy I had a very long day ..

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Will not use that THREE LETTER WORD - it is haunting me😭

Will read and get back

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Sushma98999

Its amazing no doubt, Sanskar character is same as per my thinking he haven't change either it is case of Ragini, kavita, Adarsh or Lakshay when something comes on his loved ones after a limit he loses self control. But similarly if they point him he can't bear that also.

Although it is said watever sanskar did is wrong, but if u consider by seeing a normal persone similar thing happened.

But i like your concept lets see wat will Sanskar do

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Hey mate,

First of all I am Pikachu. U can call me by any name. I have various. Now about the OS, Superb mate👏. Beautifully written, nice plot, enhancing the characters' POV's very well. I really loved the prologue. I thought that Swara was wrong all throughout from uniting the family without telling him to leaving him. It was just my POv but u changed it mate. Now I can somewhere find Sanskar to be wrong as well. U write really well. Bahut acchi tarah potray karein hain characters ko that v r forced to feel what they are feeling.

I would love to read the OS. Please update asap. I can't wait more.

P.S.plz Pm me when u update it.