SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 )

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: anu012
Awsome story
loved it
update soon

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Thanks Anu dearest🤗..Really happy to know you liked the prologue😃..Os is updated ..

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357159pikachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome one Nita! Really didn't expect it to go this way. I wish CVs were this intelligent too. But koi nahi! Swasan takkar track is also good.

And really Sanskar looked so Sanskar. He is perfect for Swara but that doesnt mean he has to perfect for all. Kudos to you! 👏👏👏. I mean I cant really express it nicely.

And Swara was back to being Swara Maheshwari again, sorry Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. The one whom we saw during the Kavita track. She fought for him against him. That was the Swara i have always wished for and you portrayed the same Swara over here. Really loved it.

And Swaragini serial obvisously has to roam around after the sister's bonding because it shows the love of sister's but I really wanted something on Sanskar's POV. And this is exactly what i wanted to read. Loved it. Do write some more as well if possible.

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: elsanna
It's awesome Nita di🤗
Tani

Thanks Tani dearest🤗. Really happy to know you liked the OS

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb OS.. 👏

Thanks Sneha dearest🤗.. Really happy to know you liked the OS..

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Thanks for the lovely comments guys.. I really loved reading them all and I know I am still behind on replying back.. Will try reply back to them ASAP..

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Nita

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awsome OS
Beautifuly written ... loved it

thnks for pm

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nita .. 🤗Khushi dearest🤗

Nice start .. I can't wait to read the OS .. Thanks dearest..I am happy to know that😃

I am starting to dislike the Swara of this story ..
What the thing about the family, eldest bahu .. ?!!! I hate all this .. and where is the family in all this ?!
Sacrificing Sanskar for her family sake ..I hate that .. 😡Well I hate all of it too 😆😆..That why i didnt let her do it in the OS😉..This was the last straw, last hope of me writing something related to SwaSan mutual reunion in the present track..After that point once leap kicked in i am all angry at Swara..So it gonna be tough writing about them with the present track

Sanskar ..
Initially when I read in spoilers that the next track is going to be SwaSan separation .. I thought that Sanskar is the one who will leave Swara and the family ..
But .. the opposite happened ..Well yeah imagine my surprise when it happened too😆..I was shocked😲///

I am happy that you are writing the story on this concept .. Sorry that i actually didnt write what you were expecting

Waiting ..😉..Posted😆..

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Khushi

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: aamias
hi nita, such a nice start i am sure u will write better than cvs ur soulmate story was so good then mask i am really looking forward to it . a lil busy these days . specially ur potrayal of chars .
I will not write an essay on it i just want to read urs

Thanks Asmita dearest 🤗..Really happy to know you liked the prologue..Well Cvs are messing it all up arent they..😆.. So happy to know you liked both my FF as well .. I know even i am busy 😭😭😭... Already posted the OS.. Might post an another one tonight 😉

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Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Teddy94
Awesome prologue Nita... N interesting too...
I love ur stories particularly the concept n the characters..
Eagerly looking forward for this one...

Thanks dear..Really happy to know you liked the prologue and found it interesting 😃... I am glad to know you like to read my works... Finally gotten around to post the OS..

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aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

hi Nita 🤗

u r such a sweet heart so well spoken I am quite jealous of u. I am not like u dearie I am really frustated with the track specially that MM hypocrites and Sanskar's behaviour with them. U potray the chars so well / Swasan conversation was so good it really touched my heart . I u showd both are imperfect and the way they settle things is so awww .

i liked this story infact i loved this story will u send to honeymoon and