SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 )

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res my jaan
Unres...

Nita...Talia dearest🤗

What a start...awesome prologue.Thanks dear..Really happy to know you liked the prologue 😃.

I was very angry why swara choosen family over sanky..why cant doo what his love is asking for...i m literally fed up with her behana n family pyaar...love sanky though..he also loves his family n will help them too ..but taking everything under control n he keep confidante too I am very angry with show Swara..So i wrote this OS and made her choose differently😳..Read the OS ..You wont be angry with this version of Swara 😆

..not taking impulsive decisions...this was indeed matter of debate whether swara was wrong or sanky...both were wrong some way...I get Sanskar a little better than Swara.. And i would think he was bit right than Swara too but that just my pov 😳

i think a person could sometime be selfish...rather than selfless all the time n getting insulted n humiliated...like swasan...sanky took selfish step..n thought about himself once...which was right but swara did not approve of it n didnot agree with him on this...result seperation temporary...but...your...prologue looks awesome .And i agree with you..Swara forgives everyone but blames only Sanskar doenst leave me happy 😆... I am selfish..And i want Swasan to be selfish at times too..Too much selflessness is not gonna make me happy 😆.

will wait for full os...swasan are both pinning for each other n somewhere regretting their decision...enjoyed it...hoping for powerpacked reunion..Finally updated Talia dear.. Let me know what you think😳

Love u
Talia

Lots of love

Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Nita ..
Unres @3

Talia

Finally gotten around to reply back Talia dearest😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: StarySKY
I am not going to use that 3 letters ..
Will come later , I am tired and sleepy I had a very long day ..

Nita .. 🤗

I am in a good mood today .. well I am having my day off today ( I was sleeping all day long ) , so I can work on my Un-Res .. 😃

This OS turend out so beautifully ..

You did present the SwaSan we know ..

The conversation they had in your story is the one they needed before they start their " We have no realtion .. " thing 🤢 ( I was hell angry on them that time 😡) ..

But still I would be happy if It was about teaching Swara a lesson , I want her to suffer 😈( I think I am going a little overboard 😆, I am hell angry on her especially after yesterday episode 😡 .. I think I should demand an OS from someone not quit sure from who )

The OS ..

I really loved it ..

So swara didn't choose the family over Sanskar ..

The thing that they are not perfect and accepting the other person with his/her faults ..

Actually I can't find words to describe how I feel ..

So let me just say ..

It turned out more beautiful than I imagined it to be ..

I really love it .. 😳

Thank you Nita ..

Love

Khushi

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Guys i am super touched by your lovely comment. Thanks for the lovely comments guys..I will try to reply back asap

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Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

nice update Nita dear. How r u dear?
loved swasan moments their convo I wish like this swara choose sanskar once in the show.
waiting for u next creation & update.
Bye.

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

My doll...😊

My my my..what should i say...im not sure if swasan are perfect or not but i can guarantee youthat this OS was perfect..im speechless...😃

Well i must say conversation comes so easy n natural to you..i told you before i just love this way (conversation) to solve misunderstanding..it felt like two mature person talking their heart out...both left their egos ..n talk what they felt...hurt..disappointed...i reread again to get that feel...two people clearing everthing..coz their relation is important to them..then anything else inthis world...it was magical...👏

Wished cvs have point % of your thinking n writing capabilities😕..swaragini drama would be on top.😊..but alas...i just loved your version of swasan😊..their own reason to be parted.😭.sanky purposely n swara unknowingly..😉.but its good they united finally...im soo glad now...last part made me all laughing..😆.family finally got reason to stop them again from leaving...enjoyed their convo in end🤣..thank you for this masterpiece...👍🏼

Love you to moon n back..🤗

Talia

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nupur_5

So sweet of you Nita :)
Bt some awesome stories like Yours, Nynu's, Saku's, Lucky's, Viji's, Shru's deserve a comment for these beautiful masterpieces of you guys Bt I'm so lazy when it comes to reply, on top of that bad health, classes+exams & works! And I'm so sorry for that! Bt trying to change my bad habit 😛

You & Nynu were discussing how many pending Res you have? Guys you have no idea how many pending Res I have 😭 Actually I myself forgot my Res list!

Bt I wish to unres soon!

Well Res list..Welcome to the club of people who just worry about the res..We already got four in our group now.With you it will be 5.. 😆😆... So as i said i get you..Dont worry about res or unres.Just read the stories you like ,well that what i am doing for now...I will get to the unres asap..I keep saying that too myself 😆

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: showrav24
nice prologue Nita dear.
let see what u give us cuz in the show I don't like swara now & her attitude like she didn't do any thing wrong still her concern only her sister. if cvs don't give proper finishing in swara character I don't think I will ever connect swara again . sorry for my blabbering I m full on diappointed that I lost some level of ott on swasan which I don't like. i want like sanskar put efforts in swasan swara also do like that but alas till now I didn't get it.

Hi Showrav,

Well you think i do 😆..I am furious with Swara on the show too 😡... And i get you Showrav.. i do.. This OS idea was around the time she broke his promise.. I felt this was enough at that time but dont ask me to write about the present swara ..I cant connect with her 😕...

I know how you feel.. I am lamenting about the same..Swara choosing behna over Sanskar 🤢... We all want swara to put efforts but she wont or i dont think she will 😡... Show is ruining the SwaSan but i am happy for writers in the forum their stories are keeping SwaSan alive for me at least..So i totally get you Showrav

With love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice start.. Update soon

Thanks Sneha dearest🤗.. Really happy to know you liked it..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Showrav,

Well you think i do 😆..I am furious with Swara on the show too 😡... And i get you Showrav.. i do.. This OS idea was around the time she broke his promise.. I felt this was enough at that time but dont ask me to write about the present swara ..I cant connect with her 😕...

I know how you feel.. I am lamenting about the same..Swara choosing behna over Sanskar 🤢... We all want swara to put efforts but she wont or i dont think she will 😡... Show is ruining the SwaSan but i am happy for writers in the forum their stories are keeping SwaSan alive for me at least..So i totally get you Showrav

With love

Nita

Absolutely agree with u Nita dearest forum writers like u keep swasan alive & i m loving it too😉😃