SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 )

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: bhymi
nita its awesome👏👏

loved the way swara missed sanskar. i hope cvs show like this way in our show.
waiting for the next update

Thanks Gayathri dear🤗..Really happy to know you liked it .. Well i dont expect from show, i just write what i want to see now.. Will post it by tonight .

P.S- I have yet to reply back to your lovely comment in my FF..Will try to get back to it asap..

Love

Nita

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

I want to read this as soon as possible... Plz post it soon di...lots of love. 😳

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Another res from me.
Not counting anymore.

love,
Nyna

And you better post it😡

Hi Nyna dear,

Well (insert your huge evil laugh emoticon here 😆😆 ) .. How is my genius plan, i couldnt unres like you so i had to add one more res for you 😉... Well i stopped counting too ..But But Aheli said she got 45 res and i am like well we are not that bad 😆😆

Will post it tonight almost done..I should be unres not typing new Os 😭😭😭

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: StarySKY
I am not going to use that 3 letters ..
Will come later , I am tired and sleepy I had a very long day ..

Okay.😆. I hate that three letter word too 😡.. Take rest Khushi dear.. Dont worry about it ..Read when you get time 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Res Nita dearest. 😳

Take your time Aheli dear.

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Don't want to Res bcoz I may forget to Unres!

Nita, prologue made me interested & you better post the OS soon!

Okay Res for the OS: Hopefully I will Unres!

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nita dear it is very well written...don't mind but after reading I had q huge urge to hate swara but sigh
I think my love for swasan overcame that!

do write more

ishita

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Sushma Yadav

@Limerence

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Its amazing no doubt, Sanskar character is same as per my thinking he haven't change either it is case of Ragini, kavita, Adarsh or Lakshay when something comes on his loved ones after a limit he loses self control. But similarly if they point him he can't bear that also.

Although it is said watever sanskar did is wrong, but if u consider by seeing a normal persone similar thing happened.

But i like your concept lets see wat will Sanskar do

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357159pikachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey mate,

First of all I am Pikachu. U can call me by any name. I have various. Now about the OS, Superb mate👏. Beautifully written, nice plot, enhancing the characters' POV's very well. I really loved the prologue. I thought that Swara was wrong all throughout from uniting the family without telling him to leaving him. It was just my POv but u changed it mate. Now I can somewhere find Sanskar to be wrong as well. U write really well. Bahut acchi tarah potray karein hain characters ko that v r forced to feel what they are feeling.

I would love to read the OS. Please update asap. I can't wait more.

P.S.plz Pm me when u update it.