The Crushed Relationship -Part4Updated pg5- PMS sent - Page 2

is it three shots?
becoz in three shots story moves quiet faster.
if it is not then can I say this chap as filler ? cause this chap was nice but this chap didn't make the story move ahead ...it did. show the relationship of jiju saala jiji though
I loved this chapter too...pardon me if am wrong
loved swasan part

ishita

Originally posted by: ishanita

is it three shots?
becoz in three shots story moves quiet faster.
if it is not then can I say this chap as filler ? cause this chap was nice but this chap didn't make the story move ahead ...it did. show the relationship of jiju saala jiji though
I loved this chapter too...pardon me if am wrong
loved swasan part

ishita

Res

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

No Ishu it is not a 3 shot the story is quite long... N I just did some research posts thinking about how much I will write but then left the idea to reserve before handedly...

So no worries

Well glad u liked the update

Yes it didn't move the story any further... It is just the clearing up of the situations n relationships..

The things will move ahead from the next updates

good then
I am a short story lover but when it comes to swasan then ye dil manage more!

buttt
plz no mahaanta by swasan n family by forgiving ap k do laals and that raagini especially... plz I jus want that ap family to suffer suffer n suffer...there r some crimes to which there is no forgiveness! and this is the same situation.
l love swasan suji ramuttu so very much lat them handle their problems on their own and shinning through them...
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love u so much

Originally posted by: ishanita

buttt
plz no mahaanta by swasan n family by forgiving ap k do laals and that raagini especially... plz I jus want that ap family to suffer suffer n suffer...there r some crimes to which there is no forgiveness! and this is the same situation.
l love swasan suji ramuttu so very much lat them handle their problems on their own and shinning through them...
..
..
love u so much

This is amazing..
I so want this to happen in swaragini..

amazing story love it

plz update next part soon

Read...2 n 3 prt... its awsm...

Jaldi update kar😛

wonderful and rest u know my views