The Crushed Relationship -Part4Updated pg5- PMS sent - Page 3

Harshu...

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshu...

Part 2 n 3..were outstanding...2 families..one living life in peace n calmness..happiness n others in guilt..despair..pain n sadness...

You emoted both families emotions aptly..loved it...swasan romance was mesmerizing...enjoyed laksh pov..felt bad for them...ram family misses them.im sure but they found happiness in their small world ..away from chaos..while MM wasis still in that sadzone...but im liking this story alot..waiting for both families encounter...

Well im not following show can any one brief what exactly happened between raglak n swasan???i know harshu your story is different from show..but still want to clear some points...

Love

Talia

It's awesome... I so badly wanted someone to write a story on the present track... Continue soon...

Hiii dear.
Where to bring this beautiful concept always ?
Love your all work. Please complete your other ff
Waiting for next part

Harshita it's really awesome dear. One family living happily and other family living in a devasted. Both their emotions were portrayed so beautifully. Loved the everything about the story till now. Plz update soon. Big hugs for the pm.

Awesome loved it

Superb update
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Awsm part...
Read three part in one go...
Happy for swasan but feeling bad for raglak...
Ayush is so cute, his bonding with sanskar is amazing...
Sry yr I am very bad at describing my emotions, I just can say its was beyond awsm
Thnx for pm.,.

Res for part 1,2 and 3 Harshi. 😳 My internet connection is troubling me so much!!! 🤢 That's why I couldn't be online for the last 2 days. 😭 Will try to unres as soon as possible. 😳
Finally able to unres. 😃
Awesome concept! 😉 Really fed up of the mistrust DP family is showing on RP family, specially on SwaSan and believing Adrak and Kaali Pari instead, in the show. 😡
Part 1 :-
Okk so finally Adrak's (Adarsh) truth is out in front of DP family and all r maafi managing from SwaSan. 🤢 😛 Good that Sanskar didn't forgive them. 😉 A relationship's main thing is trust, which DP family didn't had on SwaSan. 😭 So its better to break the baseless relationship. 😳 Flashback part is very heartbreaking one. RP family suffered so much. 😭 But finally they are living happily in Shimla in their small yet pleasant house and are having their own small business. 😃 RP-Sanky convo was nice. 😃 Haahaa! RP calling Sujju his 'Drama Queen.' 😆 And SwaSan part was very cute. 😳
Part 2 :-
Ohh! Starting was so cute as well as hot with SwaSan teasing and lovemaking! 😳 ☺️ ☺️ And Ayush-Sanskar-Swara-Shomi part was awesome!!!😃 Ayush is so naughty and cute. 😆 Always teasing his didu Swara. 😉 And loved his bonding with his jiju Sanskar. 😳 Loved this chapter. 😃
Part 3 :-
Hmm...RagLak...felt li'l bad for them...but what to do?? They themselves are responsible for their this condintion by not trusting SwaSan and trusting Adrak-Kaali Pari instead!!! 😡 Loved Ayush-Sanskar-Swara- Shomi-Uttara-Sujju-RP part so much!!! ❤️ Poor Ayush! His father (Shekhar) won't be able to be present in is B'Day. Uttara teasing Sanskar. 😆 RP teasing Sujju and Sujju teasing RP back. 😛 Loved the RP family and Shomi-Ayush part so much!! 😃
By the way how old is Ayush in this story? Is Shomi-Ayush staying with SwaSan and co. in their house?? And r u planning to continue this story further, are SwaSan, Shomi-Ayush again going to Kolkata to visit Shekhar for Ayush's sake??? If yes, then plzz update soon. And if no, then also no problem. 😆
Loved all the parts so much!! ❤️ Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 1,2 and 3 Harshi. 😳 My internet connection is troubling me so much!!! 🤢 That's why I couldn't be online for the last 2 days. 😭 Will try to unres as soon as possible. 😳