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blindassassin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Kushi

It was a beautiful chapter, I loved the personal touch in the father son conversation like drive safe...sounded so real.Eagerly waiting for next chapters.

I am happy you made Annapurna negative, she is a very selfish lady but CVs end up making a scape goat Everytime.

Veena

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Hi khushi

thanks for pm ..Good start and loved the flow .👏😳..hope in next chapter we will have swara's entry

Lucky

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Khushi dear...

Chapter 1A was fantastic..nicely written..

Loved sanky n his father convo...so many why?? Formed in my mind?? Why sanky in abroad ??what else happened in his past?? Where is his mom??? I know story will unfold soon..n im super excited for it...waiting for swasan first encounter...curious for next...

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Res Khushi dear 🤗

Will be back later today.

Loads of Love

Viji

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StarySKY

@StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Hey everyone .. 🤗

Thank you all for Res and your lovely comments .. it teally made my morning .. 😳

Will reply back later today as now I am running late on my first day ..

Love

Khushi

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Hey Khushi :)

So this story getting more and more interesting! I'm so looking forward to read further!

So the happenings of this update are 11 months before Prologue? And in this 11 months Sanskaar will visit India, get along with Swara & then bcoz of some reason or bcoz of Swara & his own emotional conflict will return back to NY!?

Bt I think they know each other from before! As Sanskaar said in prologue that Swara broke his heart AGAIN!

So many questions arising in my mind! Bt will wait for you to answer!

Loved Sanskaar-RP bond! So unlike from serial, RP loves his son so much! I'm sure RP in the show loves Sanskaar as well but CVs didn't show that! Bt your RP are showering love on his son! Thank you for this which I always wanted to see on the show!

And Sanskaar loves his father very much as well. This Father-Son duo share an adorably lovely bond!

RP want Sanskaar to go India to live with him & the family but for some reason Sanskaar don't like that family except his cousin brother Laksh! So he don't want to go back to India!

And from their convo it's clear that something happened in the past for which he dislike them more! DP-AP in the characters sketch already made me dislike them, specially AP!

Amazing update Khushi, please update soon! Maybe we will get Swara's entry in next update?

Hey if possible then PM me please!

Lots of love <3

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res Khushi dear 🤗

Will be back later today.

Loads of Love

Viji

Hey Khushi 🤗🤗🤗

A very interesting start indeed, the prologue and Chapter 1 sketching an intriguing picture and raising so many tantalizing questions and possibilities. 😊

Sunny's heartbreak and almost resigned air of anguish in the prologue was so heartrending. The way he said that Swara had broken his heart again, and also wished her a Happy life with "Him". Why do I feel that this "Him" is going to be Lucky?

Part 1 made the mystery deeper. 😊 Set 11 months before the prologue, Sunny is living away from his family, successful professionally but feeling rather empty and strained emotionally. He seems to have raised a formidable barrier around his heart and mind; keeping away thoughts of someone which would bring him only pain and anguish.

The bond between Sunny and his father was so well described. I am very close to my Dad, was always Papa's girl while growing up (still am 😛😉). I could sense that deep groundspring of affection between RP and Sanskaar here. They both seem to have gone through a loss---Sunny thinks to himself that he is trying to move on, but his father is still living in his memories and not attempting to move on at all. Am trying to think through what that means. Could it be, perhaps, that Sujju died or something else very unpleasant happened as far as she was concerned? Is that the common pain which both RP and Sanskaar have?

Sunny seems to have already endured a heartbreak 11 months previously. When RP talks about him getting married, and asks if Sanskaar has a grielfriend; is in love with anyone, Sanskaar was noticeably tense and stiffened as if to ward off painful memories.

Wonder if he and Swara had already been in love, and then some MU happened? It seems that AP and DP are now on the lookout for a suitable bride for Lakshya. I fear that they might somehow select Swara as their prospective daughter in law, and Sunny and Swara would again meet with that overhang between them. 😭 😭

Waiting for Part B of Chapter 1, Khushi! Do update soonest you can.

You mentioned somewhere that this is your "first day". You have joined practice in a new place is it? Wish you the Very Best of Luck; may this be the beginning of a very long, successful and fulfilling career.

Loads of Love,

----Viji