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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Khushi, 😊 Hey Aheli dear .. 🤗
Res for ch-1.A. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really really really loved the bonding between the father-son duo. 😃 Oh .. Thanks , I am glad you loved it ..

Okk...so it was Sanky's B'Day and his dad RP is really very caring towards his son, his life. 😳 But I think something tragic happened in their past from where RP is unable to move on and Sanskar is trying to move on, but still it haunts him, and that's why he doesn't want to return to India from NY and stay with his family, right?? Yep .. right , and when the story unfold you will get to know it and Why ..

And about whom was Sanky's FB?? 😕 sorry I thought it Was obvious .. it was Swara in Sanskar Flashback ..

And Sanky is also not ready for marriage. 😳 RP's gift to Sanky was very touching. 😳 Is Sujata dead?? I mean u didn't mention about her being alive or dead in the character sketch. 😕 well you will get to know something about that in chapter 2 , not all of it but some of it ..

And u know, u have made me fall in love with the bonding between Sanky and RP. 😃 thanks darling .. you made me happy by this .. 😳

Update soon. 😳 I am working on it ..

Thanks for the pm. 😃 you are very much welcome

With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: Verda_768

Nice story n unique. Keep it up👍🏼 Can pm me the next update plzz

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Kushi

It was a beautiful chapter, I loved the personal touch in the father son conversation like drive safe...sounded so real.Eagerly waiting for next chapters.

I am happy you made Annapurna negative, she is a very selfish lady but CVs end up making a scape goat Everytime.

Veena

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hi khushi

thanks for pm ..Good start and loved the flow .👏😳..hope in next chapter we will have swara's entry

Lucky

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Khushi dear...

Chapter 1A was fantastic..nicely written..

Loved sanky n his father convo...so many why?? Formed in my mind?? Why sanky in abroad ??what else happened in his past?? Where is his mom??? I know story will unfold soon..n im super excited for it...waiting for swasan first encounter...curious for next...

Talia

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Aheli Dear ..

replied above in blue ..

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Khushi :) Hey Nupur .. 🤗

So this story getting more and more interesting! I'm so looking forward to read further! .. Oh Thanks , you made me very happy ..

So the happenings of this update are 11 months before Prologue? And in this 11 months Sanskaar will visit India, get along with Swara & then bcoz of some reason or bcoz of Swara & his own emotional conflict will return back to NY!? Yep .. alot of things happened in this 11 months ..😃

Bt I think they know each other from before! As Sanskaar said in prologue that Swara broke his heart AGAIN! .. actually I said in the characters Sketch that Sanskar and Swara were best friends in the past .

So many questions arising in my mind! Bt will wait for you to answer! .. 😃

Loved Sanskaar-RP bond! So unlike from serial, RP loves his son so much! I'm sure RP in the show loves Sanskaar as well but CVs didn't show that! Bt your RP are showering love on his son! Thank you for this which I always wanted to see on the show!

And Sanskaar loves his father very much as well. This Father-Son duo share an adorably lovely bond! .. actually I always wanted to write something on Sanskar and RP bond as the serial never show it .. their bond here are so deep .. happy you love it ..

RP want Sanskaar to go India to live with him & the family but for some reason Sanskaar don't like that family except his cousin brother Laksh! So he don't want to go back to India!

And from their convo it's clear that something happened in the past for which he dislike them more! DP-AP in the characters sketch already made me dislike them, specially AP! ..yep .. something happened in the past .. and Sanskar has his reasons that why he doesn't want to go back to india .. story will unfold ..

Amazing update Khushi, please update soon! Maybe we will get Swara's entry in next update?

Thanks .. 😳

I am working on it .. Swara entry is in chapter 1 part B , means next update ..

Hey if possible then PM me please!

Lots of love <3

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Hey Khushi 🤗🤗🤗
Hey Viji my dearest .. 🤗

A very interesting start indeed, the prologue and Chapter 1 sketching an intriguing picture and raising so many tantalizing questions and possibilities. 😊
Viji .. You indeed made my day by your words .. I am very much happy .. 😳

Sunny's heartbreak and almost resigned air of anguish in the prologue was so heartrending. The way he said that Swara had broken his heart again, and also wished her a Happy life with "Him". Why do I feel that this "Him" is going to be Lucky?
I am glad that Sanskar emotions reach you .. my heart broke with him while writing that ..

about "him" .. just wait and see ..

😉

Part 1 made the mystery deeper. 😊

actually I never intended to make it that mysterious .. and I think because of part B been missed that made the chapter more mysterious ..

Set 11 months before the prologue, Sunny is living away from his family, successful professionally but feeling rather empty and strained emotionally. He seems to have raised a formidable barrier around his heart and mind; keeping away thoughts of someone which would bring him only pain and anguish.
BINGO .. you describe the Sanskar of my story very well ..😉

The bond between Sunny and his father was so well described. I am very close to my Dad, was always Papa's girl while growing up (still am 😛😉). I could sense that deep groundspring of affection between RP and Sanskaar here. They both seem to have gone through a loss---Sunny thinks to himself that he is trying to move on, but his father is still living in his memories and not attempting to move on at all. Am trying to think through what that means. Could it be, perhaps, that Sujju died or something else very unpleasant happened as far as she was concerned? Is that the common pain which both RP and Sanskaar have?
let me give you a spoiler .. it is something about Sujata .. but not all of it Sanskar and RP each one of them have his own share pain and hurts ..

there will be a little of the past in chapter 2 ..

Sunny seems to have already endured a heartbreak 11 months previously. When RP talks about him getting married, and asks if Sanskaar has a grielfriend; is in love with anyone, Sanskaar was noticeably tense and stiffened as if to ward off painful memories.

actually it was 9 years ago .. story will unfold about that ..

Wonder if he and Swara had already been in love, and then some MU happened? It seems that AP and DP are now on the lookout for a suitable bride for Lakshya. I fear that they might somehow select Swara as their prospective daughter in law, and Sunny and Swara would again meet with that overhang between them. 😭 😭
I am happy that you are trying to guess what happened ..

but let me tell you something .. SwaSan story is not that simple .. it is so much complicated ..

I Think chapter 1 part B will give you a hint of what happened in the past ..

Waiting for Part B of Chapter 1, Khushi! Do update soonest you can.

I am working on it .. will do it as soon as I can..

You mentioned somewhere that this is your "first day". You have joined practice in a new place is it? Wish you the Very Best of Luck; may this be the beginning of a very long, successful and fulfilling career.

yeah 5/10/2016 was my first day in my housemanship .. my first step in my career ..

thank you very much for the wonderful wishes ..

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Really amazing concept
Loved the father son convo