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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -LumosMaxima-
Interesting prologue! I am excited to read more and like you said there is no proper villain in this story so I am eager to know how SwaSan themselves will cause problems for their love story. Please update soon. Thanks for the pm.

Meera .. 🤗

Thanks dear .. I am happy you like it ..

You will got to know how SwaSan are going to cause problems by themself ..

I am working on chapter 1 ..

You are very much welcom ..

Love

Khushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Khushi dear, count me excited.. The prologue was interesting and I loved it.. Really curious to read more.. Update chapter one soon..So swasan are the villian.. Do they have multiple personality disorder here too.. Just checking to be sure.. Yet to reply to your lovely comment in masks.. Will do soon..

Swara is going to get married to someone else.. Who is it, what did Sanskaar wrote in his letter.. Curious about their past and so on.. Will patiently wait for chapter one.. So are you back from MIA. You told me you will be back on Sunday right..

With lots of love
Nita

Nita .. 🤗

Your comment made me very very happy .. I am glad that you like it ..

Nope not that kind of villian 😆 .. SwaSan are so much complicated personalites .. their own action and emotions are going to ruin everything .. as I said all the characters with multiple shades .. 😃

Please take your time in replying .. I will wait

I am working on chapter 1 .. if thing goes will I will update today ..

Yep .. I am back .. Actually I was supposed to back on Saturday .

But I was early as I was not busy as I expected .. Eid celebration took 3 days not 4 .. so I am here

Love

Khushi

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hello dear Khushi,😊
Happy belated Eid to u too dear.😳
And u know, this SS will be the very first story of ur which I'm going to read.😳
The intro, prologue and cs, all the three were very interesting!😃 And I'm eagerly waiting for ch-1 to know more about my SwaSan and others.😉 Update soon and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Aheli dear .. 🤗

Thanks .. I am happy that you like it ..

Well I didn't write much before this ..

Hope not to disappoint you ..

You are very much welcom ..

Love

Khushi

Edited by StarySKY - 9 years ago

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Aheli dear .. 🤗

Thanks .. I am happy that you like it ..

Well I didn't write much before this ..
Hope not to disappoint you ..

You are very much welcom ..

Love
Khushi

😃

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nita .. 🤗

Your comment made me very very happy .. I am glad that you like it ..

Nope not that kind of villian 😆 .. SwaSan are so much complicated personalites .. their own action and emotions are going to ruin everything .. as I said all the characters with multiple shades .. 😃

Please take your time in replying .. I will wait

I am working on chapter 1 .. if thing goes will I will update today ..

Yep .. I am back .. Actually I was supposed to back on Saturday .
But I was early as I was not busy as I expected .. Eid celebration took 3 days not 4 .. so I am here

Love
Khushi

Where is my ufpdate..Once i update i feel like i can demand update too😆😆...When will you update dear..Waiting..

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StarySKY

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hello everyone ..

I know I am very very late .. Sorry for that ..

I got busy lately with family and I couldn't find time to write anything ..

In the last few weeks I was busy going to university to collect my Results , Certification ..

And The Medical Oath ..

And from Tomorrow I will start my Housemanship .. I will be working 6 days a weeks .. 8 hours each day .. 😭😭

I thought it will be at the end of October but I found it is at the start of it .. 😕

I just updated the Characters sketch and chapter 1 part A .. the part B is ready but need some edit but my laptop refuse to do any kind of edit or to save it .. I think some kind of Viruses ..

Now I am very tired and sleepy .. I was out since 7 am till 2 hours ago ..

Will try to update as soon as I can ..

Love

Khushi

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Res for 1A - hope to unres soon😊

Unres finally.

Dear Khushi,

First thing I am upset - you made Sanskaar an architect (Bwaaah - that is what he is in my 'perpetually in the draft' FF). But then, it is a such a natural choice, right? (I am joking, not upset, surprised by the coincidence😃)

Now to the part, very nice, the father son bonding brought out very well, and you have managed to show quite a bit of the story. Especially when the flashback (presumably of Swara and Sanskaar - which is why he treats it as an unwanted one).

And he must be absolutely in love with her (Swara????) and heartbroken for he does not want to get married at all.

Do update quickly, eager to read a story where the emotional decisions lead to the heartbreak and misunderstandings.

love,

Nyna

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Res

Unres

Hi Khushi dearest,

Sorry for taking such a long time to Unres, you know me been busy ..And the amount of unres i have pending makes me feel so bad..😭

So we are going into the past to get a glimpse of Sanskar 😳.. And i liked it..His bond with his father was really good.. RP present were lovely and i loved his caption a whole lot..Him being proud of his son 👏... Ofcourse having an son like Sanskar is meant to be something one should cherish 😳..I liked RP concern for Sanskar when he learnt he pulled an all nighter..

Their conversation hinted a lot about the past..So sanskar dont like his family for some reason but RP lives with them😉..He doesnt want to get married ..Why waiting for Swara i suppose.. But i did detect a concern for Laksh from Sanskar, so laksh is not in his hate list then.. All together a much lovely update Khushi .. Do update the next part soon.. I am really curious about Swara and Sanskar first meet..

Lots of Love

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Hey Khushi, 😊
Res for ch-1.A. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I really really really loved the bonding between the father-son duo. 😃 Okk...so it was Sanky's B'Day and his dad RP is really very caring towards his son, his life. 😳 But I think something tragic happened in their past from where RP is unable to move on and Sanskar is trying to move on, but still it haunts him, and that's why he doesn't want to return to India from NY and stay with his family, right?? And about whom was Sanky's FB?? 😕 And Sanky is also not ready for marriage. 😳 RP's gift to Sanky was very touching. 😳 Is Sujata dead?? I mean u didn't mention about her being alive or dead in the character sketch. 😕 And u know, u have made me fall in love with the bonding between Sanky and RP. 😃 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago