SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Res for 2...nyna
Unres...

Nyna you beauty...love you...❤️

Dear Talia😳😳😳

In my life i liked few jodi whom i admire..but swasan are one im obsessed with..i log on IF..just to read swasan stories...any pm bring smile on my face..that i got update on swasan..as im only active in swaragini forum...👍🏼 swasan are magic...their jodi creates such chemistry that none have..i just love them moon n back🤪...Another reason for loving swasan is you guys..the way you wove swasan stories..it takes us to another world..i feel soo connected to them...you guys are igniting love for swasan in us..thanks for that..muahhhk..

True that, I rarely watch hindi serials and have liked a few pairings but none has the magic that SwaSan has. I have stopped watching the serials, rarely read any post in the forum but haunt it daily hoping for updates. They are indeed a very magical couple❤️

Coming to updatte..it was a smooth sail...a peacefull journey...that captivated us...put us in tranced...😳there meeting n slow developed feeling.small gestures...loved it..they even united raglak..that was soo sweet.n in raglak engagement..when alonethey confessed ...that kiss was soo heavenly..☺️.loved it...even photographer captured these two talking...n created a magical moment for them...i read it three to four times baby...still cant get enough... the moments you choose to present on swasan are cherished supremely...hmm love u...

Well a magical couple like that - their journey of falling in love should also be slow and gentle - a journey as lovely as the destination. And it was befitting that Swara ends up confessing to loving Sanskaar at Ragini & Laksh's engagement, after all the two of them were responsible for SwaSan. And the photographer capturing that moment - indeed a magical one - especially with what happens afterwards😉

Just last line scared me.😲.wondering what will happen...waiting for next..dear...😊

Nothing much - Love - found, lost and then regained😉

Loads of bone crushing hugs n kissy🤗
Talia

Dear Talia,

Replied in blue above,

love,

Nyna

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

@Nyna dear - Deal I will wait and read. . And you have to wait for chapter nine too I suppose.. For all the talk I gave about being sadistic.. I am struggling with chapter nine for the very same reason.. In my mind the idea was in FF mode but typing out is kind of hard and I am like should I rewrite it and so on.. I am not sure what I am gonna do.. Let see.. It almost 80% completed so will post tonight unless I decided to rewrite which won't happen.. I am just taking time to cool off and start again..

Love

Nita

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Nynu🤗
Res for chapter 1 & 2. Hopefully soon😕

Un res ..

Nynu🤗🤗

Coffee and and a book in hand .. That would be heaven for me . Finding your fav pair in the same setting can't ask for more but there''s more to it

First of I am super happy you whisked that cavity out ,got her married and packed her off. 👍🏼 and you made laksh end up with ragini ..yay ..two wickets down leaving our love birds for themselves😛

Their first meet , interactions , the slow and steady growth of relation it was wonderfully penned down .You know nynu the best part about your writing .its very simple but very very effective ⭐️.Such a free flow of words and feelings they convey one cant help but carried away with flow and enjoy this lovely ride ❤️...

lahiri lahiri lahiri lo😳

Wish I could write like you.It would be tough to pick one part as my fav because I loved the whole of it ..😳 It was like a butter cookie melting into your mouth but taste lingers for long ..guess I am still having sweet deals hangover 😉

The kisses( Cheek ones too)😉, confession and the setting..* Dreamy Dreamy*😳 hayee.I was just right there with swasan, all lost, in magical moment you spinned in .I Love it when sunny boy gets all protective .. this shade of him ..I am totally fida over it 😊 of course his romantic shade.Will we get to see more😳☺️

Bangaram .. this journey is going to be so so good and I am so looking forward for what other equations you are gonna throw at us esp swasan separation .. but how?? everything seems to be smooth not even a clue or do we have one?? .. Better I wait for update

I kept it short this time because I didn't want to delay it further but I will be on time for next chappie with a detailed take😛

Love

Lucky

PS; BTW ..Maths ..I Never get it😆but sunny boys poetry it was so good esp terrible trigonometry.😆 I love it .How do you come up with those ideas love.

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Res Nyna dear, You come back home and update.. I will be here waiting..

Unres Nyna dear..

Typing unres makes me happy 😆..As i got so many of them pending 😭... Why happy because i finally get to blabber how much i liked something 😉..Yes i heard the doom of memory loss in the end, i wrote three stories on it and saw the disaster of it in the show..So i am just expecting how they fall in love the second time..With you as the writer..I say bring it on 😳..Nyna dear reading your SS makes me giddy,happy and excited..I love love love it 😃..

The proposal scene was so good.. How you guys write such romantic scenes that makes every one just go to a dreamy land of swasan and never return..I just cant stop reading such scenes again and again.. You said three to four parts of memory loss.I can handle it..But dont inflict too much pain on poor swara.. 😭..That girl has finally found a person to love and i dont want her hope of love to shatter again.. Sanskar will once again fall for her i know but she doesnt right 😆

Also how innovative of you to introduce memory loss this way, not an accidental hit to the head or jump of the cliff.. Wait mine had both i suppose ..It because me has no idea and no patience to search for information either I meant to say i liked it.. We all had enough of the accident that causes ML right.. But this gave me so many moments of SwaSan and how they stood by each other ..I understand Sanskar fear, if it was on the show i would have been yelling in frustration as he might change 360 degree..But since you are writing i am not that scared..

Once again asking did my comment makes any sense..If not in short, i am not worried about the upcoming parts so do update soon .I wanna read them like now ...Tomorrow is the day right i will be here waiting for the update.. Also i loved Chapter 3 so much... Nyna dear.. i dont want this one to end..But i know you already has set limited number of chapters😭... So will cherish the ride while it lasts. And will wait for more such amazing journey of SwaSan from you..And i am so sorry for such a late unres..

With love

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 8 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Nynu🤗

res for 3...Hope before I drift off to sleep but I wouldnt mind good start in morning😉

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Res for Reply to your beautiful comment- Lucky🤗

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Un res ..

Nynu🤗🤗

Coffee and and a book in hand .. That would be heaven for me . Finding your fav pair in the same setting can't ask for more but there''s more to it

I can never resist not writing about the things I love😳😳😳 - Coffee, books (raining outside, which was when they first started talking to each other😳) and SwaSan - Absolute bliss, indeed.

First of I am super happy you whisked that cavity out ,got her married and packed her off. 👍🏼 and you made laksh end up with ragini ..yay ..two wickets down leaving our love birds for themselves😛

Kavita was a mention only, I think there were only a half dozen instances, when her name was taken. She is definitely out of the scene, the story and their lives😆. I am glad you liked Laksh and Ragini - nice twist, .
I did want to have a small RagLak story, and this way, it ensures Swara's disillusionment with the word "love" and Sanskaar's guilt.

Their first meet , interactions , the slow and steady growth of relation it was wonderfully penned down .You know nynu the best part about your writing .its very simple but very very effective ⭐️.Such a free flow of words and feelings they convey one cant help but carried away with flow and enjoy this lovely ride ❤️...

Wish I could write like you.It would be tough to pick one part as my fav because I loved the whole of it ..😳 It was like a butter cookie melting into your mouth but taste lingers for long ..guess I am still having sweet deals hangover 😉

That is one the best compliments I have received - I do believe that life is simple and does not need much to be happy. But we complicate everything, either because of our fears or worry or anger or insecurities. So I guess the writing is an attempt to reflect this philosophy.

Sorry - marri too much kada, pure overaction on my part - I write simple because that is the only way I know to write😉

lahiri lahiri lahiri lo😳 My all time favourite

The kisses( Cheek ones too)😉, confession and the setting..* Dreamy Dreamy*😳 hayee.I was just right there with swasan, all lost, in magical moment you spinned in .I Love it when sunny boy gets all protective .. this shade of him ..I am totally fida over it 😊 of course his romantic shade.Will we get to see more😳☺️

SwaSan is such a dreamy couple right - as I always say, it is their beauty that makes our writings shine.😳😳. The confession was also nice, mutual, even though Sanskaar actually never confessed, she could read it in his eyes.

Bangaram .. this journey is going to be so so good and I am so looking forward for what other equations you are gonna throw at us esp swasan separation .. but how?? everything seems to be smooth not even a clue or do we have one?? .. Better I wait for update

By now you have read Chapter 3 or rather Part 1 of Act II, that should answer your above queries. If it does not, then wait and read😉

I kept it short this time because I didn't want to delay it further but I will be on time for next chappie with a detailed take😛

Length does not matter, I am thrilled and happy to know that you liked and are looking forward for the rest of the tale.

Love
Lucky

PS; BTW ..Maths ..I Never get it😆but sunny boys poetry it was so good esp terrible trigonometry.😆 I love it .How do you come up with those ideas love.

Mathematics - I loved it though I never did like trigonometry much. 😕 Sunny boy's poetry, not completely mine, inspired by someone else's ditty (Refer FnR 12- page 2 post 4)

Dear Lucky,

Replied in blue above,

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#157

@ Nita and Lucky -

Updating now😊

Love you girls,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#158

My dear friends and lovely readers,

And it is done!

Act II Part 1 updated on page 1 (Post 5). This contains quite a number of cliches, so anxiously awaiting your verdict, do read and let me know.

There could be minor typos, please overlook the same

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#159

Res for ch-3 Nynu. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Awesome update. 👏
Loved the way Ragini, Shomi, Dadi were teasing Swara. 😆 And Shekhar and Dada's reaction. 🤣 Then SwaSan moments were heavenly!!! Sanskar even gifted her glass heels. 😳 Then finally he proposed her in a unique way and Swara accepted him. 😃 Then again he surprised her the Ph.D. admission form for her. 😉 Then again their cute kiss. 😛 I just looovvveeeddd SwaSan moments. But suddenly what happened to Sanskar?? 😕 He is suffering from brain tumor?? 😲 But its not life threatening one, right?? 😕 Loved the way how Swara, inspite of being gloomy, supported Sanskar and both the family without showing her fear and tried to cheer up Sanskar. 😳 But finally she broke down infront of Sanskar. 😭 And to make her silent, Sanskar kissed her. ☺️ Like SwaSan, even I'm tensed regarding Sanskar's surgery. 😕 I think u r planning Sanskar's memory loss?? 😕 Update soon dear. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago