SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 14

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Worrying note works Nyna dear 😭😭😭..

Nope no clues..I am going to enter the suspects from now onwards. Most probably by chapter 10 as Nine i want it to be SwaSan centric😉...So yeah no clue as to who she is but it was just a glimpse of her character arc..

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res

Unres..

I am back and this time i am not even sure what to say Nyna dear..I am actually speechless ..I must have read it more than few times by now but each time it leaves me completely happy as if i was reading it for the first time😃...

And reading your lines make me completely happy😳😳😳

How can you write so well dear.. I love SwaSan, I love love love the story but what i really admired and fall in love was the way you have written the SS..Actually reading such an amazing update has been so good. I dont consider myself a someone who read lot of interesting books but i love to read, and so when i read something like your SS that so beautiful, i just tend to realize what an talented writer you are Nyna dear. And it leaves with me in search of perfect adjectives to express how much i liked this update and loves you style of writing..😳..

I was not sure that I write well, but then this story is seems to have taken a life of its own - I just kept imaging the sort of scenes I would like them to have and well kept typing it out. I am so glad you liked it, I loved writing it out and believe me, as a writer you know how thrilling it is when a reader loved what you loved writing out.😊😊

, Also i am not someone who is madly in love with maths but i love maths. Meaning not so good at maths but still love maths 😆😆..So swara and her love for maths makes me so happy... The way you described those moments, the poem from Mr Sanskar Maheshwari on Maths.. I loved all of them..Wont be able to pick one as my favourite ..

I love mathematics and numbers too - though I do agree with what Sanskaar said also.😉 But then, it is nice to see Swara having such a passion for something which most of us think is not "womanly". Sanskaar poem on mathematics - genius of him right and he did manage to compliment her too - when he admitted that a certain "figure" was always in his thoughts.😉

And yeah the note works..Fate will plays it hand..What now.. .. Cliffhanger will only last till the next update but this note makes me feel restless for the upcoming moments.. Why are you all doing this to me, I am worried about all the stories i am currently reading, Viji, Shruti, Lucky and now you .All are making me nervous,worried and anxious about SwaSan. I know you will give me an happy ending but cant see my SwaSan in pain😭😭 .

We are such sadists, are we not😈😈😈😈 We all love,SwaSan, hate it when another writer separates them or when they are hurting, but when it comes to our own writing, we do the same with such pleasure - big bad sadists we are. But then this is a short story - seven parts only - so the separation should last, how many chapters?????? One, two three or...😈😈😈😈

Well this is real good, here i care about SwaSan more as your stories are all amazing ,and currently in the show we have no story..So i take this over that anyday 😳😳...

I am not watching the show, and I am seriously considering taking a break from this forum too - just too much of negativity and the lines between actors and characters being erased and the constant war between the fandoms. I will be coming only to read the FF /SS (which as you said, are amazing) but somehow the magic is slowly fading away - every post seems to be scary.

I dont know what i commented..But try to figure it out Nyna dear. Hint- I was trying to say i loved this chapter and i love you..

I love you too, and your comment is beautiful, I will do what I normally do when I get such lovely comments, go back to check that it is indeed my post that the comment is all about.😳

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 2 Nyna. 😳
Unresed.😃
Awesome! Fabulous! Mindblowing! Spectacular!👏

And I am absolutely 😳

It was indeed "A Walk To Remember" for SwaSan.😳 I loved each and every moments of SwaSan.😃 First at the coffee shop.😃 How they were sitting holding each other's hand. Then their walk that changed their lives.😳 Swara was daydreaming about Sanskar, although she still didn't believe in love then, and finally kissed him on his cheeks.😳

It was indeed a walk to remember for both of them. For Swara it was the start of the realisation that she could be falling in love with him, she truly started noticing the effect he was having on her. Sanskaar, it was a confirmation of what he felt for her, once Kavita was out of his life, he could only focus on Swara and realise that what he felt for her was love. That and all the other ones, including the last one which resulted in the only photograph of them😉

Then Swara gifted Sanskar a book of her choice which Sanskar truly liked and treasured it.😃 And even dated it.😉 And again Sanskar saved Swara from those boys.😃 He was so protective about her.😳 They way Sanskar asked Swara to remove her big glasses and his reasoning was so sweet.😳 And then he pecked the corner of her lips.😉 And wow! Sanskar at the beginning only realized that Swara was special for him, much special than Kavita too.😃 Loved those SwaSan moments so much.😃

The SwaSan moments were nice, right? I loved writing them out, such small gestures, which taken alone truly do not count much, but when put together, show what love is all about, not only the physical attraction but the constant care and concern.

This part was very touchy when Sanskar accompanied Swara to the lecture just for her sake and Swara was so much caring towards him that when he fell asleep on her shoulders, she didn't disturbed him and also didn't allow anyone to disturb him.😉

This is also my favourite scene - it shows how much Sanskaar meant for Swara and also that she could do anything for him.

Sanskar felt sad when he heard about Swara's dad was finding match for Swara.😛 Loved their plan to unite RagLak.😃 Even Ragini sensed that something was brewing between SwaSan.😆 And finally they were able to unite RagLak.😊

Sanskaar and Swara got it right, all that Laksh and Ragini needed was a chance to talk out things. And once Ragini realised that Swara had not only gotten over Laksh but was actually falling for Sanskaar, she stopped feeling guilty and angry with Laksh.

And finally this part of SwaSan was so dreamy when Sanskar asked Swara about how she would liked to be proposed by her man, and when she accidentally and without realizing uttered 'u and me' and Sanskar was surprised and amused at it. And finally Swara realized that she had fallen for Sanskar and Sanskar fell for Swara.😳 And their kiss.☺️☺️

Swara was completely lost in Sanskaar, she never realised that she said "you and me". And Sanskaar, just need one sign from her before acting - their kiss sealed the deal, right? Swara ended up confessing to love him.

And I think even Ragini could guess what had happened between SwaSan without even seeing them, by both of their absence from the party.😉

Yes, Ragini had a very good idea what could have happened to Swara and Sanskaar.😉

And the photographer clicked pic of them and thought them to be a beautiful couple.😃 Beautiful couple indeed - SwaSan.❤️

Sigh, that diwali scene - such a dreamy scene - I can just have enough of it. I had to have it here.

But Nyna, I think u gave us a hint of SwaSan separation?😕 Are u really going to separate them? If yes, then don't take much time to reunite them.😉

It is a short story - of seven parts - so how many chapters would the separation last???One, two, three or...😈

U know, I'm in love with this chapter.Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃

Update - most probably over this weekend.

With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: NitaReid

I unres for chapter 8. Chapter 9 please - soon (So Sanskaar saves Swara - yayy!!!!! - better be that, not that he spends his time searching for her and she thinks about him all the while. If it is that - I am so going to

Edited by Nynaeve - 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

That kiss in the PM is not for me... 😭... Just now I'm going to read it... It's not a res... Will comment directly...

Love you..

Kam...

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nynu🤗

Res for chapter 1 & 2. Hopefully soon😕