SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Darling Mocha - you always have my kisses

and my hugs too

Will wait for your comments.

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Nyna... ...🤗

This was awesome... Like shouting from tge peak of Everest...

Kamila🤗🤗🤗🤗

Their pace was well depicted... I loved their slow and steady growth of love...

I love stories where the main characters fall in love with each other, slowly. Falling in love itself is such a beautiful emotion, I prefer it to the love at first sight stories.😳

And tge characterization wow contrast... I can say I'm like your Swara... I used to apply sunscreen on me to look ugly and sticky... To keep the flies(boys)..but one thing i never tolerated such insult(flirt)... I just go and smack them.

That was intentional - given Swara's no-nonsense attitude, everyone expects that she would not take a flirtatious whistle quietly. But then, I have realised that ignoring such lewd characters also needs a lot of strength, because whether you give it back to them or you chose to keep silent, it does leave you feeling a little "dirty?". So here Swara ignores them, because she does not believe that those idiots should be even acknowledged. And when you treat it as a compliment (a twisted logic) you actually take away their power to attract you. (sounds confusing, ??)

Tha kiss was epic...the last line is scaring me...

You liked the kiss scene - I am not so nervous now but still a little apprehensive when writing such scenes.😳 Glad you liked it. Last line - is a warning - Beware the fates, they usually test those who are too happy But then, even if it is a separation, it is fine, after all partings are needed to meet again.😉

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And reading your lines make me completely happy😳😳😳..I am happy you are happy😳

I was not sure that I write well, but then this story is seems to have taken a life of its own - I just kept imaging the sort of scenes I would like them to have and well kept typing it out. I am so glad you liked it, I loved writing it out and believe me, as a writer you know how thrilling it is when a reader loved what you loved writing out.😊😊..I know that feeling very well, and one such lovely reader happens to be you 😳.. Sometimes i can never fathom the comment from you was really meant for my update😳..And my problem is when i start imagining i end up with lot of scenes and when i start typing it out it becomes an essay.. So i cant seem to keep it simple at all😆😆..But i love you clear cut idea Nyna dear..You write out and you even know when it will end..For me i am like i have to yet write this, this and this..😆..

I love mathematics and numbers too - though I do agree with what Sanskaar said also.😉 But then, it is nice to see Swara having such a passion for something which most of us think is not "womanly". Sanskaar poem on mathematics - genius of him right and he did manage to compliment her too - when he admitted that a certain "figure" was always in his thoughts.😉Yep i noted that. My Sanskar is an genius..😳.. And i agree with everything you said above lines..I love Swara for loving maths😳

We are such sadists, are we not😈 We all love,SwaSan, hate it when another writer separates them or when they are hurting, but when it comes to our own writing, we do the same with such pleasure - big bad sadists we are. But then this is a short story - seven parts only - so the separation should last, how many chapters?????? One, two three or...😈..I concur, and i think i found out the reason why we are sadist when we write😆..It because we happen to know what happens next , the pain we inflict upon them we know how to erase that as well..For eg, if we sepearate them we already have envisioned their reunion in our brains ..So for us it comes easy as we already know the happy ending but when you read someone else works then you dont had that kind of access to know what happens next hence the hurt😉..

Seriously you are gonna keep them seperated for three updates 😲..You better not make it four 😆..My poor heart is gonna suffer..Well let me suffer with SwaSan then..

I am not watching the show, and I am seriously considering taking a break from this forum too - just too much of negativity and the lines between actors and characters being erased and the constant war between the fandoms. I will be coming only to read the FF /SS (which as you said, are amazing) but somehow the magic is slowly fading away - every post seems to be scary.

I do agree , as i am going through it as well.. I dont venture out to main forum at all 😆..Not proud of it but for my sanity i am staying away from it..Here for the FF/SS and to be there for the lovely friends i have made during this wonderful journey with the show.. Now i honestly cares zero about the show..Though the mere mention of the name Sanskar still seems to make me interested 😳..


I love you too, and your comment is beautiful, I will do what I normally do when I get such lovely comments, go back to check that it is indeed my post that the comment is all about.😳..And i usually read your comment on my chapter more than my chapter...😆..Since your comment make my update look more beautiful than my update😉..But i get what you meant when someone said they liked a particular scene,even i tend to go back and read that scene..

Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above.

loads of love,

Nyna

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: NitaReid

And i loved loved reading your comment for chapter 8😳...Now the question of the day, should i make Nyna sulk or not 😆

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

I am bribing you (check your pm) - you will not make me sulk - it is not a very pretty scene. 😡😡

You can ask Shru - when I threw tantrums over her DK😉

Will reply to your very lovely comment soon.🤗

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res for 2 😊😳

Needless to say, I LOVED it. ☺️ That kiss...

The way you've interwoven memorable scenes/ dialogues from the serial with your own novel narrative was fabulous. ⭐️👏 That whole stretch about Sanskaar asking how Swara envisioned a perfect proposal was wonderful. 👏

Will be back for a more detailed take soonest I can. 😊

Loads and Loads of Love

Viji