SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 12

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Res ..

Yay I am the first one ..

I am going to sleep now .. will read it when I will wake up .. will be back later in the day

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res

I am here Nyna dear,,Will read it as soon as i get free time..I just got up..And found out today is Monday😭😭..

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well keep guessing, you will get to meet all new suspects in chapter 9.. A list of people Sanskar doubted and one of them will be Miss X... ..So the update needs more time..So until then keep guessing..

But i have got your chapter 2..So i am happy .You didnt end in an cliffhanger too did you? Well one way to find out ..Off to read..

Originally posted by: Soundharya_01

hi Nyna dear ..

this was the most beautiful chapter, this is only the second part , still i feel this is the most beautiful SwaSan proposal ever. Your blessed with a sparkling talent nyna, your writing is so captivating and magical the way you connect all the joints of your story is something i love most.

yay! i remember i said you, Amaranthine is going to be a very beautiful story .. did'nt I ?I was daily stalking this page .. looking again and again if you have updated it or not and today we had a half day .. Summative exam going, and i was really exhausted writing a dozen pages today because of social . I opened the website and found your update .. you know i was like a good fruit for my hardwork .😉

I read it and thought to reply orelse you know i forget and then when i think to comment i sometimes forget what i read 😕

enough of mine .😃

Dear Soundarya,

I am glad you liked the update - and writing papers is an exhaustive work And to know you were stalking this thread - nothing gives me a high as reading this.😳

I love the way story is proceeding, swara and sanskaar trying to patch up raglak . their realiasation of being in love with each other ..

Poor Ragini and Laksh - they are actually being nice and stupid, so it was in everyone's interest that the things between them be smoothened and once Ragini realised that Swara is actually carrying a torch for Sanskaar, she decided to accept Laksh

i loved the way swara asked him if he would marry a girl more qualified than him and his reply to it. Lakshya is different here very different... i am loving him this way , a simple drama with loving characters.

But that is a very valid question - in real life too there are very very few men willing to marry women who are more qualified them and / or earning more than them. Sanskaar is, of course, a gem of a man, who believes in the nature of the woman being important rather than educational qualifications. Laksh - it is nice to see him this way - the serial literally butchered both him and Ragini (which is my pet grouse😡)

The highlight of the update was the proposal one , there proposal itself makes me flushed with red but your way of it was marvelous 👏

the way swara subconciously said her dreamy proposal with '' You and Me '' and sanskaar trying to make the night memorable and he further saying ,'' achi nahi , bohot achi hai, isliye toh tumhe pasand kiya hai'' . It was very romantic .

You liked the proposal😳, and if I had you flushing, then I guess I wrote it well. Though going by what Swara wanted, maybe there is more to come 😈😈😈😈

they not being in any pictures of raglak engagement album and missing it , i was actually like if they would have showed this in the serial , it would have been a TRP topper forever . May some production house hire you as their creative .❤️

And now I am officially dead - too much praise is going to my head☺️☺️☺️ Though there would be a reason as to why they not being in any photographs would make a difference later on

photographer taking there photo while packing seeing they both look beautiful together... it was a soo dreamy nyna ! .. you nailed it!

I loved that Diwali episode and the one scene of them walking together, lost in each other, Sanskaar openly flirting, Swara aware of it and yet unsure of how to react - I just had to incorporate it in my story - and of course a photographer would be able to get the emotions perfectly.😊

update soon ...

loads and loads of love

Soundharya.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Nice..

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nyna

Beautiful update. I have said this before but will repeat your sweetness comes across in the characters too. What a feel good chapter.

Thank you😳

Loved how unknowingly swaras admits you and me.

Swara had already admitted to herself that she is in love with Sanskaar, so it her deepest desire that he propose to her, which she let slip. Of course, trust Sanskaar to capitalise on it😉 He just need one tiny hint to act upon and here she was, almost confessed to loving him

But the last line ...

How can fate conspire against these love birds? I have a feeling something bad is going to happen to either laksh or ragini which will in turn affect the siblings. I hope I am wrong.

How do the fates conspire - simple - all in Act II. Do not worry it will be a very cliched event or may be not or maybe...all will be told in Act II Part 1 and Part 2.😊

Once again thank you Nina for reviving my love for swasan which was almost exhausted!!!!.

Very happy to note that this has revived your love for SwaSan as I wrote it to keep a hold on my adoration. I was losing it, so much so that my draft for Fogotten Memories was on the verge of being forgotten

Love, Veena.

Originally posted by: soumya04

wow, mast story hai, very beautiful and all those serial dialogues look much better here. proposal scene was very beautiful.