SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 11

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res nyna ...baby

Unres dear...

Sorry for delay nynu...busy in eid celebrations...😃

Dear Talia, - no apologies - hope you had a very happy eid celebrations - with family , friends and loved ones (that is the best part of festival and good food)

😃 from where we start..hmmm.. Amaranthine..the min i read this word..i googled its meaning...😆 you all introduce variety of innovative titles ...😊 well Amarathine...unfading...everlasting...this SS will be amaranthine forever in our hearts...

Oh - my bad - I put the meaning and the etymology in the FnR post - will update the post itself. Amaranthine - it really suits their love- right

Act 1 part1 was itself big enough to be a marvellous OS...i just loved it flow..two strangers ...one relaxing spot...destiny played its game n both became i wont say friends but partners / one who share seat in silence..n slowly bonded..assumed about each other...n then finally talked their heart out...i just loved this slow n steady journey towards friendship...

Yes - I like my leads to slowly and gently fall in love, strangers to acquaintances to friends to lovers to soulmates - currently they are in the acquaintance to friendship stage. And it is nice to know you like this slow and steady journey too.

Both shared their problems n made a deal to help each other in their own specific mission😳..i just loved it..though mention of kavita gave me mini heart attack..but thank u for this gift...she is gone forever..this was the bestest thing in this part..kavita married n gone..phew...😆 now we can concentrate on swasan fully...😳 ...i just loved climax...sansku giving handkerchief to swara...wondering what will happen next??? Will raglak unite???

Joint mission - well they gave up "Convince Kavita" quite quickly, guess Swara's disbelief also made Sanskaar realise that Kavita is really not worthy of winning over. Yes, her role is over no re entry in any of the future parts. Yes - all concentration on SwaSan😊 - RagLak union - well definitely on the cards - how it is going to be come around - next chapter.

Adarsh n pari got their part of lovestory..i loved it...😳

Poor Adarsh and Pari - they do deserve it, especially after the way the CVs have ruined them in the present track

Update next soon darling..😉

Update over the weekend.

Love n kissy

Talia😊

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nynu .. 🤗

Arc 1 part 1 was Amazing .. I really loved it and enjoyed it ..

Actually when I was reading it I wasn't home ( thanks to that , if I was home I would had been busy and couldn't even got a hold on my phone ) .. I was out with a visit with my mom and got delayed and I got bored from waiting and nothing was in social networks so I ended up in IF and Landed in you story .. your story saved me 😃.. Thank you

I am glad my story could make waiting pleasant - going about with moms and not having anything much to do (how long do we keep smiling) is so tough

SO

The Introduction

I really love your way .. you felt it weird ?! I found it UNIQUE .. using pictures and your words was Awesome .. ( I would love to do like you -using pictures- but unfortunately or fortunately I am very very bad at editing pictures 😆 )

And what wrong in Purple ?! I love Purple .. my second Favorite color after Blue .. 😉

Editing pictures - is a such a tough thing - I actually made a post with the different sizes written down so that I could see how a picture with 450*300 would look like as compared to 400 * 350😆 even then it did take me quite some time and left me drained, but it was sheer fun - I just hope I do not get addicted to doing that😆

Purple - too much of anything is not nice - which is why I was apprehensive😊

Part 1

What can I say ?! I can't describe how I am feeling about it .. it is really FANTASTIC .. 👏

I really loved Swara and Sanskar characters ..

You know what ?! I want to go to that coffee shop and enjoy my alone time there .. it seem a very comfortable place .

Coffee shops in general are very comfortable - sigh- how can they not be, a quite table, aroma of coffee swirling in the air, have a book or a close friend - what more could we need?

Swara with glasses she look Cute and "keep your distance" attitude .. with her Mathematics books .. this girl clearly don't like company ..

Sanskar was there just to be away from the person he knew .. I was wondering why ?! What kind of books he is reading ..?!

And both of them never failed to notice each other .. ( great )

Then they got used on each other company in silence .. then they start talking .. ( more great )

Sanskar was reading a romantic novel .. !!! ( I was in shock ) ..

How can they not notice each other - both are the only regulars, quite attractive individual and we know that they are tied together. Sanskaar was reading romantic novels (see - you are shocked, imagine his family and friends, he knew he would be teased mercilessly so the coffee shop)

Swara don't belive in love .. well that pretty clear .. ( I knew she would say something like that )

Then their deal ..

Swara, considering her backstory and upbringing, would be disillusioned with love. I just had to make her very vehement in her beliefs.

Sanskar ..

Well that Kavita is stupid and dumb ( sorry for the words ) .. but who would say something like that to a person like Sanskar after what he did .. he was changing himself just for her .. and what ?! He is not Romantic .. really Kavita ?!!

And Sanskar was reading Romantic novels as a study just to get her back ..!!! well this is done only by Sanskar Maheshwari .. I don't think any other male would do this ..

( if just I got someone like Sanskar as my second half I will never leave him no matter what .. *sigh* just if )

Sanskaar - right - that man is willing to do anything for the person he loves, which is why he never even tried to think the maybe Kavita was being unreasonable in her statements. He just believed what she said and went about trying to rectify his apparent lapses.

Swara

Her story life is a tragedy .. I don't blame her if she doesn't belive in love after all this ..

I love this Ragini she bring back the family together ..

This Ragini was the one in the beginning of the show - a sweet girl who desperately wants a mother's love. So when she learnt about Shomi and Swara, there was no way she would allow her grandparents to intervene.

Than Laksh happend ..

Actually I am confused with this .. Laksh broke his engagement with Swara because he can't keep up with her intelligent and he is falling for Ragini too ( actually I respect him for what he did .. he did the right thing ) .. after this I don't understand

Laksh didn't tell Ragini or asked her to be with him , right ?!

And Ragini refused to admit her feeling for a person who can't keep his promise .. what promise ?!

Why all the problems .. ?!

When Laksh got engaged to Swara - it is similar to a promise made by them to get married - right? That is the way Ragini sees it, when Laksh fell in love with Ragini, he knew it was wrong falling for your fiance's sister which is why he never spoke to Ragini but then he realised that it was not fair for him to marry Swara either. So he breaks off the engagement, for which Ragini feels that he is a man who cannot keep his word.

Ragini falls in love with Laksh, but cannot forgive him for breaking off the engagement (her confusion and POV in next chapter - which should make in a little clear). Yes - problems galore, because people are emotionally confused.

Then their second deal ..

They start it .. then after trying for weeks they forget it .. and got close to each other .. ( that is lovely ) Kavita got married !! ( well that for the best ) Swara seems to be fallen in love for Sanskar .. but she will take a long time to notice it I think ..

Their second deal - they gave up in under three weeks - when Sanskaar realised the futility of trying to win Kavita back. Swara realising that she is falling in love with Sanskaar - sooner that you think - after all a lot more to happen after they fall in love😉

Nynu .. I fell in love with this story ..

*a bow down* 👏👏

And I am☺️☺️☺️

Thank you ..

I am waiting for next ..

Next part - over the weekend?

With all the love

Khushi

Originally posted by: NitaReid

I updated chapter eight and I demand chapter two now..

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

I am recovering from your Chapter 8 - you reveal Ms. X and no clue as to who she could be, I am like this: (Who could she be???????????)

Will need some time to do final edit😊

Dear Nita, First thing tomorrow morning - pinky swear.