SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Dear Fati,</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Firstly, I loved the virtual laddus (I generally love laddus, but virtual ones are better - no weight gain😉)</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">And as a writer, I am thrilled that you found this chapter to be a roller coaster ride. It is still going to be a sweet story in the sense that there will not be any villainy of sorts (Dadi turning to a fire breathing dragon, sibling murdering sibling etc.) my protagonist's own beliefs and choices will cause enough heartache😉</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">love,</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Nyna</font>



Dadi...fire breathing dragon🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Nyna.. darling... I wanted to read now... Very eager too but i wanted to read when I'm relaxing not in a hurry... Soo im postponing it to after Eid... Hope you understand me... I know you will...

Till then res...

Unres... I thought.. I can't..


Nyna .. 🤗... Ohh man I felt like cheated you finished with the update... Ohh now I have to wait for long... 😭..

I have never been greedy in my life before... Not after either. But for now feeling greedy.. want to read more.. more more..

Dear Kam, greedy is good,in certain cases😉 I do like this "greedy" avatar😳

Just more... I loved their every meets in the coffee shop.. my cappuccino.. you love coffee.. how can I forget that.. I'm loving the fact you're adding your favorites in it..

Yup - just could not resist, coffee shops, coffee, my love for books and my fascination with numbers, combined with SwaSan - what a heady mix😉. As Kishore Kumar sang:

Shokiyon mein ghola jaaye phoolon ka shabab
Usme phir milaaye jaye thodi si sharab,
Hoga yun nasha jo tayar,
Hoga yun nasha jo tayar, woh pyar hai

So this chapter is also a concoction of all the things I love, and soon even Swara will be singing this tune😉

I'm happy that laksh rejected swara if not ohh.. no.. again I can't shine that bridge... Notebook.. nice selection.. MATHEMATICSmy genre.. love you for that...

Oh no, not that SR bridge again🤢 - this twist serves two purposes - one ,no Ragini turning killer (so hated it) and secondly, it reinforces Swara's belief that love does not exist for the women in her family
The notebook - I read the book, never seen the movie and like it, actually I like most of Nicholas Sparks books. Maths - how can I not, I love numbers too.

That pink shirt.. it trigger my laughing sense.. ohh man I know how it'll feel.. even my son hate to wear a pink shirt.. even I gifted my husband a lite pink shirt.. profusely...

Pink - My brother hates it, does not like even his four month son to wear pink😆

Loved it darling.. i enjoyed it a lot.. mmmuah..

And I love that you love it❤️

With love..

Kam...


Dear Kam,

Replied in blue,

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Avj123

Awesome update

Loving this nerdy Swara and Romance novel reading Sanskar.
Happy that Kavitha is all married and gone.Hope she doesn't attempt a comeback.
Loved loved your introduction especially the Statutory Warning.


Hey Dear,

Thank you. Especially that you like the twist in the characters - Swara cold and scientific, Sanskaar a bit dreamy and romantic.

Kavita is very much gone - no re appearance, just a couple of references.

And am extremely happy that you loved the introduction😳 - I was sure that for a story that was going to contain quite a few cliches, it is only fair that the readers be warned😉

Could you share your name, if you do not mind?

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: elsanna

So emotional...nyna di...

Kavita gone...yahooo...

Cont. Soon...

Tani 🥳


Dear Tani,

Glad you liked it. Oh yes, Kavita very much gone - not much of a role in the first place. Which is why I did not bother creating a new character😊

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: elsanna


Dadi...fire breathing dragon🤣


Though I think I have to amend it - even fire breathing dragons do not eat their eggs/ children - so what would that make Dadi?? will have to do some research😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Nita,

Replied in blue above.

love,
Nyna



Dear Nyna

Replied in Pink above

Love

Nita
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Nynaeve



<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Though I think I have to amend it - even fire breathing dragons do not eat their eggs/ children - so what would that make Dadi?? will have to do some research😉</font>


Let me solve your problem... 😳 no need to trouble google baba 😛

She is snake who dasofying everyone...even eat their own kids when hungry 🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Hey Dear,

Thank you. Especially that you like the twist in the characters - Swara cold and scientific, Sanskaar a bit dreamy and romantic.

Kavita is very much gone - no re appearance, just a couple of references.

And am extremely happy that you loved the introduction😳 - I was sure that for a story that was going to contain quite a few cliches, it is only fair that the readers be warned😉

Could you share your name, if you do not mind?

love,
Nyna


Hi Nyna

I'm Anu😊

Such a relief to know Kavitha will not be back.Nothing gives me more chills than the mere mention of Kavitha in a SwaSan story.As for the cliches,with your style of writing ,I'm sure it's going to be lots of fun.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Nyna...How are you ? It has been quite some time i have conversed with you ..
Frankly speaking , you are a big popcorn machine , popping up with great ideas,I loved the plot of this story to the core . I was quite suspicious seeing Swarna wearing glasses in the awesome banner you created . But our swara is beautiful in everything ..Seeing her in specs is new experience

Post 1 was actually unexpected,mind blowing and actually attracted me a lot . It is beautiful and i always look forward to your stories however, i am long back in commenting . I never forget to read your story.

Swara's past was a very sad one , growing up as one illegitimate daughter will definitely carry lots of miseries and her father leaving her early and being grown up by her grandmother , definitely she had to develop a dislike against love .But why fear when Sanskaar is here !

But, really Sanskaar reading romantic novels for getting Kavita back sounded quite silly at first and she leaving him for not being romantic was more worse . She not replying to his gifts were really so rude of her but anyway , thanks to her for getting out from sanskaar's life , I can expect SwaSan .

I don't how the plot is going to unfold , but i feel that this part rather moved very fast with swasan becoming friends and proceeding .I think you have much in store for us . Anything can happen in a Myna story after all 😉. Pls update soon i am very anxious to know how the story proceeds .

Nevertheless , Sweet deals is a awesome story , but it seems nothing before this one , truly excited for this . 3 cheers for Amaranthine .


Loads of love

Soundharya..


P.S.- Pls update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: NitaReid

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I am happy you like my ramblings😳.. And yes i loved the update and coming to Swara in the show..Yes they could have capitalised on that , it would have been interesting to see..But those are minor setbacks in that story back then while now it like filled with only setback..I hate to see my Sanskar reduced to this in the show now😡😡..


..I am happy i was able to convey my feeling inspite of my ramblings.. The chapter was amazing Nyna dear and your deserve all the compliments 👏...And Well i always read your comments more than few times 😳. As i usually say you describe my FF better than me .Even now i did come after reading your comment for Masks and i was supposed to reply back to that but ended up replying to this comment first., 😆


I made Sanskar get married to someone else and still you are all accepting that in masks ,so i can handle Kavita in flashback conversation 😆😆..I kicked out Kavita in prologue too on Forced.. 😉... Well i cant wait to read her journey of reconginig that emotion


Swara was stubborn wasnt she, but i understood her reluctance to fall in love again, though she was never in love with Laksh..But sometimes i wish she would not see Sanskar loving her as an act of betrayal..But still one of the best love story i have seen ..Let not talk about present AdRi ,beautiful statues ruined for drama..Why cant they have someone else take over the property and the MM people fight together instead of fighting between each other😡...

Happy to know how much i loved the update was conveyed through by my ramblings..Eagerly waiting for the next update
Love

Nita


Dear Nita,

Remember in the foreword I mentioned that there are times when I so adore the comments I get, that I actually go back to read if the post the comment is all about is the one written by me. This is definitely in that category.😳

You know the tragedy with the SR serial was how every possibility for a marvellous story was completely butchered. Swara's reluctance to believe in love, Ragini's battle for her haq, Kavita's illogical resurrection, Ragini's overnight redemption, AdRi overnight transformation to villains, Dadi's ...I am not even sure what to label her behaviour I have seriously stopped watched the serial, I only read and write😆.
Draft of next update done - editing and culling pending😊

love,
Nyna

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