SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17)

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#181

Nita , Aheli

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.Will revert to your lovely comments by EOD

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#182

So ..I suck at estimating story line and I end up extending chapters ..6S ? Felt weird ..hence changing into SS .

Thanks for all comments sorry for late or no reverts .. 😭 one more department I terribly fail ..Sorry guys .. I will try to get better

. Updated Chapter 5 ..One more Chapter and an epilogue ..one or two ..depends on the level of frustration Swara mam induces on me😆🤣Please do let me know your thoughts😊

Pm's Kal😉

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#183

Res lucky

Lucky sweetheart...

Chapter 5:was mindblowing...just simply WOW...😉

It was painful with swasan temporary seperation...which was indeed needed..i truly understood sanky insecurity regarding commitments...as he is scared to love coz he lost his mom..he is overthinking..overconcerned...but that how he is...he has to accept thIs fact that love N death happens without anyone consent...he should accept his love for her..n stop this denial mode...😊

For swara..she is looking pretty mature here...though she breaup with him..but he is her first love n will be forever..she wants to name this relationship...😭she even gave a second thought about him regarding his identity secret...she just want one thing from him..his love ..his commitment...n he is denying it...im angry...😡but i cant stay angry with him ..i love him😳..n both..😆

Small moments like flashbacks scenes..guitar part..it was awesome..i loved it sooo much..very enjoyable part...now excited for next...

I had reserved first..😃n unreseving last..😭..feeling like alien😕...but still glad i made it...very happy u converted this to 5s or SS...👏

Love u..

Talia

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#184

Dear Lucky,

Such a pleasure reading this update. To tell the truth, at the rate the serial is going on, I was sure I would not feel the magic of SwaSan here, but I guess I underestimated your magic.

It was a magical update, though full of of sorrow, there were strong undercurrents of hope - that Swara realises that him lying or rather not telling the truth about his identity was a very small abberation, and that even thought the expensive gifts that he got for her were "easy" for him, the value and thought behind each gift and each deed is priceless. His deeds show that he loves her, she knows it but wants him to say it, which he will do only when he admits to himself that he loves her.

Sanskaar is unwilling to name his emotions and feelings for her, he knows what it is and wants to keep hearing her tell him that she loves him, but more importantly, for him, she has to act, to give him a chance.

And that is where they both are, waiting for words, waiting or the other to act, each wishing for the other.

I love it and it was such a pleasure reading it.

Love,

Nyna

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#185

Res for a full reply, Lucky...😊🤗

But in meantime...As I have told you before, I LOVE the Swara in Fitoor. So sorted, so spirited, she has a sound head on her shoulders and a large, warm heart. Sunny...😳🤪 Well he is rather smoking hot in Fitoor. 😆 Where is the nearest fire extinguisher?😉 But still I must say that my favorite is Sunny in Fanaa...😉 Tough to override old faves after all. 😆

Couple of really electrifying scenes in this chappie, will come back to comment on them later, sweetheart. Am still feeling rather exhausted and a bit flat today, so I want to comment more when I can do justice. 😳

And I love the way you go wrong about estimating the length of your fics...as long as you keep underestimating and over delivering the number of chapters. 😳☺️ Now if the reverse happens...with you cutting a 6S or an SS into 3S, then I will have a bone to pick with you . 😃😆

Loads of Love

Viji

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#186

Viji ..nynu ..Nita and Talia

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A good start to day ...from mob ..so keeping it short

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: krishuuu
Lucky dearest...
Chapter 4 was worth waiting for..it was outclass...swasan heartfelt talk after that soul searing kiss..OMG..im still dreamy...its evident swara loves him but why sanky was confused...their moments after that eventfull kiss day were amazing...even ragini met sanky an liked him instantly...just loved her interrogation..as a sister she is concerned about swara...her last question ..describe swara n he answered pagal..it was soo cute...i enjoyed it...swasan parting moments were quite intense..but they were in love ...sanky not realizing fully..but he is...his identity revelation in party was shocking for her...but it was nicely penned ..quite justified ...relatable to prologue..her reason to leave him...cause he lied about his true identity...but she become his fitoor in this seperation period...now excited for next...seriously waiting patiently...

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Talia

Talia Dear🤗

Sorry for being super late with revert😕

Thanks sweety😛

Kiss was dreamy😳 😉 It was supposed to be. Sanskaar is confused because he is not comfortable with idea of commitment and by now you kniwthe reason I guess. He is scared that ifhe lets someone come close to him and if they levae him he will be broken ..his mom's death made him so

Glad you liked the interrogation part ..and bond between Swaragini. Last question😆😆.Both Ragini and Sanskaar share same sentiments over Swara being paagal😆

You are right ..The revealing came as a shock and but that's not sole reason for separation. You will have your answers about Swara's decision in chapter 5. Swara is Sanskaar's Fitoor undoubedtly ..Thanks again🤗

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi Lucky dear

I am here.. And i think it time to finally comment on Fitoor which i took so long to get too..Sorry about that.. I think i have to yet to comment on chapter 3 and 4..

Lucky i told you this for Fidaa right, even when fidaa was less than three chapters ..I felt like i know those Swara and Sanskar for so long time and their love story is still fresh in my mind..And that how i feel about Fitoor too ..The last two chapter when we get to know their love story.. It feels like i know so much about them and yet it all happened in less than two chapters..What i meant to say was the last two chapter felt like reading an novel and i loved it ..

😳 I am so glad you could connect with Swasan in both Fitoor and Fidaa.. A feel of novel ..That was so sweet of you to say yaar ..Thank you😊

You weave their story in such a pure magical way that i love it so very much Lucky dear.. And this story of their was one such magical one.. I dont know which to pinpoint as my favourite because they were so many.. But i loved the gradual yet steady pace in their love story..

The whole working with swara as sunny just to get to know more about her was amazing.. And he want to see if she really feels money isnt an factor or not..And even when i know this might come up as an issue later i didnt mind it that much.. And as i said i loved their whole journey and you penning it down it was an treat to read

I always love ,love stories which have slow steady and gradual development Glad you felt the same and liked the pace of the story.This will be an issue later but will sorted out at end😊

And Sanskar even after kiss got his brains to speak logically..I loved it.. The way he told her how he felt about commitments and as such.. It was honest and i am happy swara agreed to it.. Their love story was too good and jealous sanskar here was an treat to read and that because the situation fits it.. And in the show it just torture to watch.. And ofcourse i know she will find out not from him.. And she did..Now me so excited about Chapter 5.. And i will go back and wait patiently for that no pressure..But i really wanna know what happens next in their life😉

That's where the crux of this story lies .. Swasan holding opposing views on Love and commitment yer getting together and working out their differences. Sanskaar in this is straight forward ..I wanted him to be like that . Jealous Sanskaar is😳 but in show..only cos its VK I am able to bear it nahi tho😡.You will alreday know waht happens next since Chapter 5 is updated😉

I loved it Lucky dear..So very much.. Sorry for the late comment..You know me right..I really didnt mean to be so late..

No sorries between pals ..I am happy you took out time to read and comment . Means a lot🤗

Lots of love

Nita