SwaSan SS - FITOOR - Snippet #3-PG 37 (25/3/17) - Page 18

It was so tempting to get drfited towards heated encounters or sessions . .. I had many ideas for Sunny and Swara but didn't want to get carried away,Yet Once done with fitoor ..I intend to post them as snippets ..😉 Time to hit bed ..Will reply soon

Love

Lucky

Nahi Nahi . Its a secret😉😳😆

Thanks Sanya😊

but why leki ..😲😲

Chapter 4 was worth waiting for..it was outclass...swasan heartfelt talk after that soul searing kiss..OMG..im still dreamy...its evident swara loves him but why sanky was confused...their moments after that eventfull kiss day were amazing...even ragini met sanky an liked him instantly...just loved her interrogation..as a sister she is concerned about swara...her last question ..describe swara n he answered pagal..it was soo cute...i enjoyed it...swasan parting moments were quite intense..but they were in love ...sanky not realizing fully..but he is...his identity revelation in party was shocking for her...but it was nicely penned ..quite justified ...relatable to prologue..her reason to leave him...cause he lied about his true identity...but she become his fitoor in this seperation period...now excited for next...seriously waiting patiently...

Love

Talia

Hi Lucky dear

I am here.. And i think it time to finally comment on Fitoor which i took so long to get too..Sorry about that.. I think i have to yet to comment on chapter 3 and 4..

Lucky i told you this for Fidaa right, even when fidaa was less than three chapters ..I felt like i know those Swara and Sanskar for so long time and their love story is still fresh in my mind..And that how i feel about Fitoor too ..The last two chapter when we get to know their love story.. It feels like i know so much about them and yet it all happened in less than two chapters..What i meant to say was the last two chapter felt like reading an novel and i loved it ..

You weave their story in such a pure magical way that i love it so very much Lucky dear.. And this story of their was one such magical one.. I dont know which to pinpoint as my favourite because they were so many.. But i loved the gradual yet steady pace in their love story..

The whole working with swara as sunny just to get to know more about her was amazing.. And he want to see if she really feels money isnt an factor or not..And even when i know this might come up as an issue later i didnt mind it that much.. And as i said i loved their whole journey and you penning it down it was an treat to read

And Sanskar even after kiss got his brains to speak logically..I loved it.. The way he told her how he felt about commitments and as such.. It was honest and i am happy swara agreed to it.. Their love story was too good and jealous sanskar here was an treat to read and that because the situation fits it.. And in the show it just torture to watch.. And ofcourse i know she will find out not from him.. And she did..Now me so excited about Chapter 5.. And i will go back and wait patiently for that no pressure..But i really wanna know what happens next in their life😉

I loved it Lucky dear..So very much.. Sorry for the late comment..You know me right..I really didnt mean to be so late..

Lots of love

Nita