SwaSan SS:Destined by Choice-Epilogue 1 Pg 110,Epilogue 2 Pg 118

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Oh my god!

You're starting a new ss. I'm so happy Viji🤗

I love the plot. Reading characters with shades of grey is wonderful.

Is that character by any chance our Swara?

Id love to see her in a grey shade, every person has a little grey in them. I'm sure Swara will too. And I'd love a not so goodie two shoes version of hers. ;)

I absolutely adore your description of Sanskar. He can indeed make an Eskimo buy ice with his charm😆

Also, I just love the swasan cosmic connection.

Eagerly waiting to see where you take this. 👍🏼

Lots and lots of love

Nandu

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Ta da and here I come;-) will unres soonest possible...for the moment this was ten folds interesting than the lecture I'm cursed to sit through.
Love,
Saku

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

wow this sounds awesome
poor sanskaar he is so lonely

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
And I res😊😊😊
Darling Viji,🤗

And I am hooked - actually anything from you is great but this time it is that tantalising hook that, maybe, for a change, it is Swara that could be the grey character (I would love to see her in this shade and in your capable hands, it would be a very cinereal one).

The alternate universe is quite refreshing, you have killed off his parents quite early and have made both DP and AP, a slightly standoffish couple, who seem to care for Sanskaar more from duty rather than affection. Which does result in a very driven adult who strives for success in the hope that that achievement might bring him the affection he craves rather than the public adulation that it brings.

Till he meets her, presumably Swara, who has a possible mysterious connect with his tragic past???

As Alice would say - it is getting curiousier and curiousier. And I am getting quite edgy, a week you say, we have to wait?😲😲

loads of love,
Nyna

Nynu dearest 🤗🤗

He he 😆--- well I shall not keep the suspense going for too long, I promise, as to who exactly is the grey shaded character whom Sanskaar meets. 😆 😉 The motive, rather than the identity, is what I am working on, hoping to surprise---since the identity is more or less a given, no? 😳 Soulmate connect, that instant feeling of an odd familiarity, yet an intriguing mystique----can only be with that one person after all, no? 😉

You put Sanskaar's frame of mind so well---yes, that is exactly what I was aiming to portray---a very driven, committed individual; yearning for love and affection rather than the adulation and admiration that his stupendous success and capability brings. There certainly is a lot of vulnerability within, the love starved little boy with emotional scars hidden very well, beneath the suave sophistication and veneer of the consummate boardroom wheeler and dealer.

I shall not be able to disclose precisely what her motives are at this point. 😉 May not reach so far back into his tragic past though----I see that as a catastrophic accident which deeply wounded the young, amiable, high spirited Sanskaar's heart and psyche---but not with any mystery/ intrigue to it. I just might change my mind on that as we go on though. 😛 😉

Shall do my utmost to update as soon as I can. The prologue/ Chapter 1 would not delve straight into the mystery though. Would explore a bit more on Sanskaar in the present, the SanLak bond...and perhaps, Sanskaar's first "meeting" with this lady who's got him so intrigued. 😊

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Seems really interesting & ofcourse intriguing!
Got to know about Sanskaar lil Bt dying to know about HER who is ofcourse Swara!
A grey shaded Swara which I always wanted to see!
As I also believe everyone has their grey side along with whiteness! No one is pristine white!
IMO there are people who are white but bcoz they want to be good & want to walk in the right path Bt they also have some, maybe very lil, grey shades!

And I think Swara also have lil grey shade even in the show maybe she herself didn't know or understand! Atleast in the initial begging! Though her grey shades were not for negative intentions or purpose!
Bt ofcourse CVs couldn't show it properly!

Bt now as you are giving this side of Swara, you have no idea how much thrilled I'm!

Love you Viji for this & will wait for the next update :)

P.S: You didn't PM me about this *Pout*

Hey Nupur sweetheart 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Very true yaar---practically no one is fully in the light; or fully in the shade, as regards their character, na? We all have layers, edges, angles and shades to our nature---that's what adds a certain level of intrigue, a certain fascination to the character.

Oh, I do think Swara in the serial has certain grey shades as well. She is certainly very empathetic, innocently exuberant, warm and has so much goodness within her. But there are certain grey shades, too. Not with negative intentions, as you said, but they are there, nevertheless.

The one in my fic will have certain more grey shades. 😊 😉 She will have some secrets up her sleeve!

So glad you are so thrilled about this SS yaar. Means a lot! 🤗🤗🤗🤗

Arre---I did send out PMs 😆. A little later, owing to some pending commitments I had to attend to. You, my dear, darling pal, had commented even before the PM reached you. 🤗🤗 Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya, ki main tumhe PM na bheju? 😉 😳

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thank you, Nita darling 🤗🤗🤗 So glad to know that you loved the synopsis & preview.

Will do my best to update soonest I can. Just that time is really at a premium right now. 😕

Lots of Love,

-----Viji

I know Viji and I understand.. Take your time.. 🤗

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Viji🤗🤗

I am late😕.. Res

Will be back in few

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Viji🤗🤗
I am late😕.. Res

Will be back in few

Love
Lucky

Un Res

OMG ..OMG ..I want tp jump and do jumping jhappak dance in my seat right at this moment. .An SS from you🤗 . I am already struggling hard to hide the glee on my face which is far by leaps and bounds of joy my heart is dancing with 😆.My dose of entertainment and happiness and excitement guaranteed for at least few more weeks till this ends.

Shades of grey *err* That gives me some gutter thoughts🤣😳 jokes apart.sanskaar is your words why hy viji ..I want one right now ..Get me one .❤️.and then he saw her ...I cant wait to read this further ..Viji Darlin ..You left us hanging on hook ... and that approval bit ..you had my heart there going out for sunny boy ..😕..poor baby and I hated DP and AP instantly😡 ..Laksh I am giving him benefit of doubt . i am sure he will turn out be to Awww god😆

BTW titile itlsef is damn intruging ..Destiny and choice.. How come both are together ..You are genius darlin and my fav master story teller😳.. and I love you ❤️you know that

Love Loads

Lucky

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treta

@tr_eta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Seems interesting...would love to read more

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Wow wow wow it is so interesting and so intriguiting it is going to be hard for us to wait for the next part sanskar character was already portrayed so well the story is so interesting and I am already hooked even before the first part got updated it has been time we got such a good story most of the writers are either very busy or left the forum

I am so so so happy to see you starting this masterpiece hope u will not make us wait very long for next parts 😉😃

Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago