SwaSan SS:Destined by Choice-Epilogue 1 Pg 110,Epilogue 2 Pg 118

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
Oh my god!
You're starting a new ss. I'm so happy Viji🤗
I love the plot. Reading characters with shades of grey is wonderful.
Is that character by any chance our Swara?
Id love to see her in a grey shade, every person has a little grey in them. I'm sure Swara will too. And I'd love a not so goodie two shoes version of hers. ;)

I absolutely adore your description of Sanskar. He can indeed make an Eskimo buy ice with his charm😆
Also, I just love the swasan cosmic connection.

Eagerly waiting to see where you take this. 👍🏼

Lots and lots of love
Nandu

Nandu 🤗🤗🤗

I am really so happy you loved the synopsis and preview so much. I am thrilled it passed muster. 😳 This idea has literally been plaguing me for months, unfortunately just when I first started putting it to paper, I fell very ill for quite some time. So am very glad I've got the chance now to write it out! 😊 And the motivation and love from pals like you is immensely moving. 🤗🤗

And oh yes, I find characters with layers and shades, angles and edges to their nature to be very compelling indeed. And the person who fascinates Sanskaar----you can guess who it would be, no? 😳 😉 She certainly will have some secrets up her sleeves...we shall see what her motives are, a little further down the line. 😊

Thrilled that you loved Sanskaar's portrayal. Our Sunny boy certainly is supremely charming no? 😳 He can sell ice to an Eskimo, and sand to a Bedouin! 😆

Will be back as soon as I can, with the first chapter.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Ta da and here I come;-) will unres soonest possible...for the moment this was ten folds interesting than the lecture I'm cursed to sit through.
Love,
Saku

Saku dearest 🤗🤗🤗

So happy to see you here, my dear kid Sis!! Let me know what you thought, after that tantalizing lecture you are sitting through. 😉 I'm so thrilled that you found this so very interesting. 🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wow this sounds awesome
poor sanskaar he is so lonely

Hey Prachi 🤗🤗

Thanks, so very glad you loved this. Yes, Sanskaar certainly has that vulnerable, emotionally scarred, and affection starved little boy hidden within him; well camouflaged under that veneer of suave sophistication. He has become a driven, committed, successful individual; but underneath that, he still yearns for love and affection; not just the admiration and acclaim he's been getting.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: NitaReid

I know Viji and I understand.. Take your time.. 🤗

Thanks Nita 🤗🤗🤗 Again, so glad that you loved this so much.

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Viji🤗🤗
I am late😕.. Res

Will be back in few

Love
Lucky

Lucky dearest 🤗🤗🤗

It gave me such a high to read your comment. 😳 You know how much your feedback means to me, love you loads!

Shall revert on that comment later today.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: tr_eta
Seems interesting...would love to read more

Thanks so much. 🤗

Glad to know you liked it. Prologue/ Part 1 should be up in the next few days.

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svg98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

You know some months back when I read your first story..I still remember you said you will soon be back with an angst one..it seems to be the one..
Will soon read the Prologue and try to unres..

Amazing amazing storyline..the prologue is itself so fascinating.. I always enjoy stories with dark shades and you have made it come true..by writing this one..Grey shades of everyone and let me guess the unknown one..it seems to be Swara..and if she is..I had a kind of secret wish to see her dark shades...the concept is mind blowing..revenge drama..romance and angst..I m so so excited to read this one..

The beginning was do powerful..the Sanskar Maheshwari..in his full glory power,name and money..the strong and intense aura you create of him..believe me it send shivers down my imagining him..he is all dangerous..losing so much in life and then brought upon by his uncle..he had to prove himself..the emotional side which u showed to him was heart touching..sometimes I think why is life so unfair to him..but then only these hardships make him what he is..the Sanskar we all love who's do everything with all his being..even after being adored less than his cousins in his family he never showed them how much he is still scared from inside..so soft..a little child who needs love..

And then came her..gosh its like fire emerege whenever they look into each other's eyes..Swara, his eyes would never leave hers..those eyes of her's are his salvation..beautifully written..so she has some hidden agenda..the suspence begins here I guess..its really very very thrilling..last line were amazing..but I know even if they hurt each other,then only they can heal each other..they can't really hurt each other without hurting themselves..

I really can't wait to read this story..my nerves are on sky high excitement to read such a concept..and as is say u are amazing..no words to describe ur talent..make me speechless everytime..
Can't wait to read more..
Love,
Piya

P.S:I m really sorry for being so late and also a short reply..my college has started and I have to do my training simultaneously which has made it so hectic..I m truly sorry..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Sanya17
Wow wow wow it is so interesting and so intriguiting it is going to be hard for us to wait for the next part sanskar character was already portrayed so well the story is so interesting and I am already hooked even before the first part got updated it has been time we got such a good story most of the writers are either very busy or left the forum

I am so so so happy to see you starting this masterpiece hope u will not make us wait very long for next parts 😉😃

Hey Sanya 🤗 🤗

So very happy to know that you loved the synopsis/ preview. And that's a lovely compliment for me, to be told that I portrayed Sanskaar in a manner you found wonderful. 😳 He is just such a layered character with a lot of intensity and depth, with so many shades, angles and edges to his fascinating nature. 😊

I shall do my best to update the forthcoming parts soon.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hey Viji!!
The concept is really intriguing and just fab!! Can't wait for the chapters to come!!
And the title is just fab!! I mean I just loved it, when I read it
Destined by Choice...the feels it has!!
Can't wait for more...do update soon, and I'm really sick and occupied to actually comment huge, please accept my apologies on that...will comment as soon as my work load is reduced (which will be around 1 and 1/2 month later) But still
Take care
Sakshi!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: svg98
Res..
You know some months back when I read your first story..I still remember you said you will soon be back with an angst one..it seems to be the one..
Will soon read the Prologue and try to unres..
Love,
Piya

Hey Piya 🤗 🤗

Yes, this was the one. 😊 I'd been working on it when I had extended period of ill health. I hope this one holds your interest and fascination too. 😳🤗

So happy to see you on this thread my dear. Your feedback means a lot to me, as you know.

Lots of Love

Viji