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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Lucky darling! πŸ€—πŸ€— You're not late at all re, I just sent out PMs a few minutes back. 😊 I think you res'd before the Pm reached you, I am so very touched. 😳

The special day is Saturday 16/07. 😳 Dreaming of a Fanaa update on that day. πŸ˜‰

Loads of Love,

----Viji


Viji...πŸ€—πŸ€—

this was such a cute and lovely OSπŸ‘πŸ‘ ..A perfect medicine ...thats what makes you a sweet heart .I am sure saku would be in all smiles reading thisπŸ˜› ..get well soon saku and ..swara ki koi galati nahi hain , in you know checking outπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ you know who😳😳..I loved sanky ka flirty modeπŸ˜†
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If you have some who would love u so dearly , who would mind fluπŸ˜‰

such a light but lovely os ..like always .. super awesome darlin

Love Loads
Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: svg98

Absolutely amazing os..very very heart touching..

Thanks so much, Piya πŸ€— It really gave me a high, to know that you'd loved this OS so much.

Everyone wants someone who will take care of you in every situation and circumstances and Swasan are the perfect of example of it..just like the vows one couple takes during their marriage and fulfill it..

You put that so very well, my dear. Exactly, it is like one of the vows the couple take during marriage---of always standing by each other, supporting one another through good times and bad. SwaSan are indeed a perfect example of this; they adore each other with such an intense, deep love, they really care for each other more than they care for themselves. They truly complete and complement each other perfectly. 😳

The beginning was beautiful..how Sanskar waker her up..how they are always entwined in the morning seeking warmth..so romantic..must say Sanskar has found a perfect way of ensuring that his wife always find him and cuddles into him due to the chilling AC..and then Swara reaction at not finding Sanskar the usu way the way she panicked..she cares for him so so much..Even the doctor would freak out if we call him at such inappropriate timings..but even he knew Mrs Swara Sanskar Maheshwari..that part was so cute..even the doctor knows how they two adore each other..but seriously to see Sanskar like that was painful..The person who is out anchor if he gets unwell it really makes up feel helpless..I still remember Swara's line from one of the episode. Which she said for her mom..agar hamare khayal rakhne wale ki tabiyat kharab ho jaye toh bahut darr lagta hain..and here Sanskar who is always so strong always standing upright never feeling weak getting suddenly so unwell..it must have freaked out Swara..

So happy you loved the description of their cuddly and romantic morning moments. 😳 ☺️ Oh yes, Sunny loves the fact that Swara snuggles right into him for warmth. No wonder he always rolls over onto her side of the bed. 😳 Swara literally freaked out when Sanskaar was so unwell---this was the person who always stood by her like a rock, a pillar of immense support to her. He really is both anchor and ballast to her, after all. And then she showed the full force of her protective, assiduously caring nature for her beloved hubby. The doc was summarily woken up at 4.46 am...he was lucky, she wouldn't have minded calling him at 3 am even, had Sanskaar needed it! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

The way Swara took care of her was really very loving..even the whole family knows that they should not take tension as Swara is there for him..Sujata was so cute here..the way u told otherwisotherwisshe would have taunted if anybody else would have been there in Swara's place..even she knows how much Swara loves Sanskar..atlast she has come to know that she loves him with the same intensity as Sanskar does to her..Sanskar was so weak felt very bad to see our hero like that..but Swara knowing the sunlight is hurting him..covering the curtain.. He asking Swara to stay away from him when he realizes he is completely leaning on her and she can catch it too..and then Swara so strictly cutting her off was so caring..The way he was leaning on her completely,snuggling into her warmth was heart touching..these small small moments you write so beautifully..sometimes it bring tears to my eyes to see the love between them..there will never be a couple like them..so in love with each other..that they feel each other before they feel themselves..

I am so happy to know you loved Sujju's portrayal here. I do see her as being this rather dramebaaz and nautanki type of saas. πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ But there is no malice or spite in her anymore. She really does have a lot of affection for Swara; and she really appreciates the fact that her bahu adores her chora so much. 😊 Sujju has even mellowed quite a bit towards Ragini; but she will always pass some carping comments about both the sisters. πŸ˜† She loves to have some tashan with the bahus of the house, after all. But Swara certainly means a lot to her. 😊

Swara was so concerned about Sanskaar, she was rubbing his arms to make him feel warm, making him lean on her, and trying to give her own body warmth to Sanskaar. Sunny, of course, wanted to ensure she didn't catch the infection from him----which she obviously didn't care two hoots about! 😊 They truly are so in love with each other---always putting the others' needs before their own.

Swara making him drink the khada and Sanskar expression was so very cute..I literally wanted to pull his cheeks..the way he stood in front of the bear..his stance so strong and protective..backing down the bear just with his gaze..just amazing..And then the epic scene..this scenes even makes me blush at times..she taking out his vest..atleast he allowed her here..not feeling sharam in front of her wife..and she checking him out..Sanskar is so naughty and mischievous.
Can't stop teasing her wife..but he is so handsome just like a Greek god..nobody can stop checking him stop..so no offence from Swara..it should be Sanskar to stop looking so gorgeous..and then again he goes to tell him to stay away from her..he is really so worried about Swara that she should be well at all cost..he is so caring..and then Swara was so so awesome.. It was so obvious she would join him on the couch and we will get the all famous scene..I personally love that scene..tum mere upar ho..just a simple sentence but it has the ability to set the screen ablaze with their chemistry..not only their grand children but their grand grwand children will also giggle and listen to these amazing stories of our so loving Swasan..and then he cutely accepts his request..they are just so beautiful.. U make me speechless every time..

😳 Thanks so much, Piya, for those lovely words. Yeah, I wanted to show both sides of Sanskaar's wonderful nature. He is so intrepid, so courageous and formidable. He stood tall and imposing, yelling ferociously at that bear when he and Swara were on that trek; holding her protectively behind him, shielding her with his own frame. But when he was ill, he was acting boyish and vulnerable, like a cute, cuddly, big baby! 😳 Swara really enjoyed tending to him and pampering him. πŸ˜†

☺️ Very glad you loved the "vest" scene. πŸ˜‰ Sunny certainly is a very mischievous and naughty hubby. He really loves teasing his beloved wifey and flirting with her. πŸ˜† And Swara really enjoys it too. πŸ˜‰ Of course she can't help checking him out and admiring her awesomely handsome hubby. 😳

If at all Sunny had insisted on going to the couch, Swara would have plonked herself on top of him, for sure! πŸ˜† And we would have got a repeat of that immortal "Tum mere upar ho, Swara" moment! πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ SwaSan certainly have so many priceless, magical moments to narrate to their kids and grandkids. And yeah, they in turn can narrate it to SwaSan's great grandkids! The absolutely spellbinding tale of how they fell in love and came together.

Swara also gets unwell but we all know it was then Sanskar's turn to care for her beautiful lovely wife and bring her back to the healthy state by his love and care..amazing is really..no words to describe the cuteness and love between them that is eternal and immortal.. Please always keep writing these stories..you make our days beautiful by writing them..

Yeah, once Sanskaar was on the mend, Swara caught the flu in her turn. But no issues---she had her devoted hubby to indulge and take care of her. 😳 Their love and care for each other is truly eternal and immortal.

Will do best to keep writing on SwaSan, my dear. Feel just so immensely touched, humbled and blessed that you love my fics so much.

Piya



My Dearest Piya,πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
lovely OS.. your words are so descriptive I could picture the two of them before my eyes.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ..Wunderbar..

Hey yaar!πŸ˜›

Hey Arthy sweetheart
πŸ€—πŸ€—

This is so awesomely written that I feel so compelled to comment on this piece.😳 I seriously hate you for doing this to me Vi.. Every time I read your work I feel compelled to comment on it. Reading them gives me immense happiness that I feel guilty whenever I don't comment due to some work. I seriously love your works yaar. It just makes me feel very happy, trust me on this.πŸ˜‰

😲 πŸ˜• 😭 This was my initial reaction when you said you hate me. πŸ˜‰ And then I read, that it was because you loved my fics so much, you felt compelled to comment even when you are busy. 😳 ☺️ Thanks dude! 😳 That means a lot, to hear you say that. And no pressure whatsoever---comment when time permits. I am just glad to know that you read and loved my work. That feedback really makes my day.
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This OS is damn adorable. Loved to see such a caring Swara. She was so worried for her husband that nothing else mattered. Sanskar and Swara is this OS were just awesome.. Loved this piece a lot!πŸ˜›

Thanks a ton! Yeah, I wanted to show that aspect of the SwaSan relationship---the absolutely intense and potent adoration they have for each other. They are true soulmates after all, two halves of a complete, seamless whole. They really feel much more anguished by the others' pain or discomfort, than their own. 😳 Their care and concern for each other is really very deep and palpable.

Keep writing!😊

-Arthy



My Dearest Arthy,πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Dear Viji

Sorry for the late comment. The show had lost all charm for me and even swasan scenes looked forced ,so I was thinking of quitting.But a good episode yday and the wonderful OS from.you made me stay. I may quit watching SR in the near future but can't really stay away from the forum or from some of my highly talented friends.
Viji the OS was sooo cute. I realised falling sick too was fun when you have a swara or sanskar to look after you. Wish they showed swara with the same intense feeling for sanskar in the show too.
Your Swara' s world revolves around sanskar and that is so romantic. The OS actually revived my feelings for swasan which was almost lost. Thanks a lot for that.
Love, veena &

Once again wishing you a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY



My Dearest Veena πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

As I mentioned before, no Sorry needed, ever. 😊 We have to follow Sunny boy's friendship rules! πŸ˜‰

This is truly the way I see Swara and Sanskaar---their pure love and adoration for each other--- so intense, so deep, so palpable. They really shower care and concern upon each other---much more than on themselves.

Of course, as you said, even in times of illness, they have each other to give that much needed TLC. So even the flu doesn't seem so draining and painful after all. 😊

I was massively touched to hear you say that this Fic revived and sustained your feelings for SwaSan. That is really such a lovely compliment, as a keen SwaSan fan, I feel immensely humbled and blessed by that feedback.
πŸ€—πŸ€—

Loads of Love again,

----Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: a_uma

lovely OS.. your words are so descriptive I could picture the two of them before my eyes..



Thanks so very much Uma. πŸ€—πŸ€— That really meant a lot, to know that you could picture SwaSan before your eyes. 😳

Very glad to know you loved this OS, dear.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Viji...πŸ€—πŸ€—

this was such a cute and lovely OSπŸ‘πŸ‘ ..A perfect medicine ...thats what makes you a sweet heart .I am sure saku would be in all smiles reading thisπŸ˜› ..get well soon saku and ..swara ki koi galati nahi hain , in you know checking outπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ you know who😳😳..I loved sanky ka flirty modeπŸ˜†
.
If you have some who would love u so dearly , who would mind fluπŸ˜‰

such a light but lovely os ..like always .. super awesome darlin

Love Loads
Lucky



Lucky my dear πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

I will start my reply to your beautiful comment, by quoting a modified version of an unforgettable dialogue, from one of my most favorite fics on this forum. (Can you guess which one it is? πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰): "Tum bhi toh ho---sweetheart. Itna kuch karti ho friends ke liye, iss forum ke liye." πŸ˜‰
πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

Love ya so much, Lucky! You've made my special day so very memorable and precious. 😳
πŸ€—

I am so happy you loved this OS, found the SwaSan moments cute and lovely. 😳 Oh yes, Swara ki galti toh bilkul nahi hai, she has all the rights to check out her Greek God of a Hubby. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

And Sanky boy in a naughty, flirtatious, slightly brazen mood is completely jaan lewa. πŸ˜‰

Loads and Loads of Love,

----Viji



Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
@ viji
Oh god viji ,,When you said quote I was thinking ki πŸ˜†..well this was plesant surprise ..birthday is yours and you are making me smile .😳.love u πŸ€—
πŸ€—
Hope you are having a great time

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Hey Viji Darling,😊
Read it. Will comment in details coz I'm going to my tuition class now.😳
So res for now.😳
And once again Happy Birthday.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for the pm.πŸ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Viji Darling,😊
Read it. Will comment in details coz I'm going to my tuition class now.😳
So res for now.😳
And once again Happy Birthday.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for the pm.πŸ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.


My Dear Aheli sweetheart πŸ€— πŸ€—


Thanks again for your wishes, darling. πŸ€— Glad you loved this OS, no rush at all, comment when time permits after your classes.

Loads of Love

Viji

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