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Ill get back in a day or two vijji. Caught up in some commitments I can't shake off soon.
Loved it and would like to read it one more time before I word a proper comment.
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Viji
😕 you gave our dear Sanskaar a flu bug. Poor him.. But im sadistically happy 😊
How cruel am I, or we all are to have Sanskaar get sick to watch the duo going are lovely dovey and touchy around each other. 😊
Firstly, how you bring those morning in Swasan world on to paper😳 they always make the story so incredibly sweet, red and accentuate the strength of their bond everytime. I love those mornings. But unfortunately this day swara wakes up to an ill and weak Sanskaar, damn the flu bug!!
But then our dear, all so concerned swara's reflexes kick in and I relaxed back. Watching her fidget through those medicine cabinets while unceremoniously waking up the doc in the wee hours determined to beat a flu bug who digged it's claws into her Sanskaar. She looked so cute distressed and strong.
The way she woke up Sanskaar gave him the magical tea which in itself was his panacea when taken through her mighty living hands. And let him lean onto her while at it. How adorable the scene was. I just couldn't get enough of it.
And then we have this another incredible scene. Swara checking out her dear husband just on the wrong day. I wondered for a moment there about who is teasing whom. Swara being all to unintentionally flirtatious or Sanskaar with his mind silently panning on ways to just get his way with her when he couldn't herself fight him off. The chemistry was 😳
And last but not the least ending on the note of a memory. By now I'm sure that's one of your favourite sankaari one liners. You always find a nice way to bring it up and they are so perfect everytime, this time with Sanskaar burying his face in her tresses and slipping into his personal paradise .
But Viji what happened when swara fell sick. I think Sanskaar would have been very sanskaari. 😊
What do you think?
Lovely piece vijji.
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Edited by Bennet.Lizzy - 9 years ago
