Originally posted by: Bennet.Lizzy
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Ill get back in a day or two vijji. Caught up in some commitments I can't shake off soon.
Loved it and would like to read it one more time before I word a proper comment.
Love
N
Viji
Hey Nalini dear π€
π you gave our dear Sanskaar a flu bug. Poor him.. But im sadistically happy π
How cruel am I, or we all are to have Sanskaar get sick to watch the duo going are lovely dovey and touchy around each other. π
π³ π He he...yeah, I was so distressed at the idea of Sunny down with the flu. But then, when he gets so much TLC from wifey dearest, even he wouldn't mind I guess. π³ π
Firstly, how you bring those morning in Swasan world on to paperπ³ they always make the story so incredibly sweet, red and accentuate the strength of their bond everytime. I love those mornings. But unfortunately this day swara wakes up to an ill and weak Sanskaar, damn the flu bug!!
βΊοΈ I am so thrilled to know you love SwaSan's mornings together. π³ I completely lose myself in SwaSan dreamland while writing those scenes π, gave me quite a kick to know you loved to read them. But yeah...sigh...this morning Swara misses the warm cuddles and more from Hubby dearest...drat those virulent viruses!! (An aside---perhaps the flu bug that infected Sunny is female? Even she couldn't resist him! ππ)
But then our dear, all so concerned swara's reflexes kick in and I relaxed back. Watching her fidget through those medicine cabinets while unceremoniously waking up the doc in the wee hours determined to beat a flu bug who digged it's claws into her Sanskaar. She looked so cute distressed and strong.
The way she woke up Sanskaar gave him the magical tea which in itself was his panacea when taken through her mighty living hands. And let him lean onto her while at it. How adorable the scene was. I just couldn't get enough of it.
Thanks Nalini dear. π€π€ I know from personal experience that hubbies behave like big babies when they fall ill. π And I could SO see Swara tending worriedly to her hubby, making sure he was feeling better, almost tearfully frantic that his discomfort he alleviated, and his temperature brought down. Dr Choudhary was lucky he was woken up only at 4.46 am. π It could have well been an entire couple of hours earlier, if that was when Sanskaar's temperature had started to climb. Swara wouldn't have bothered waking him up in the least. π
And then we have this another incredible scene. Swara checking out her dear husband just on the wrong day. I wondered for a moment there about who is teasing whom. Swara being all to unintentionally flirtatious or Sanskaar with his mind silently panning on ways to just get his way with her when he couldn't herself fight him off. The chemistry was π³
π³ βΊοΈ I do think of Sunny as being this intensely naughty, flirtatious and slightly brazen pati with his beloved wife. And Swara---how can she resist checking her hubby out. π She has all the rights to, anyway. π I was so thrilled that you loved their chemistry here, N...that is such a lovely compliment. Being such a crazy SwaSan fan, that literally made me feel on top of the world, to hear you say that. π³
And last but not the least ending on the note of a memory. By now I'm sure that's one of your favourite sankaari one liners. You always find a nice way to bring it up and they are so perfect everytime, this time with Sanskaar burying his face in her tresses and slipping into his personal paradise .
Yup, the "tum mere upar ho, Swara" line na? π I do love that adorable moment from SwaSan's past. So very tender, sweet, light hearted and really romantic---though they weren't even a couple then. Sunny certainly was experiencing heaven now----his beloved in his arms, snuggling into him, even as he buried his face contentedly into her tresses.
But Viji what happened when swara fell sick. I think Sanskaar would have been very sanskaari. π
What do you think?
Hmmm...I'm not sure. π I think Sanskaar would have taken assiduous care of her, like a fragile, priceless porcelain figurine. But me thinks Swara, once she started feeling a tad better, might have utilized the perfect opportunity of having Hubby darling home instead of office, by stoking certain Asanskaari activities. π Although, in a sense, with these two completely married in their hearts and souls, and legally of course by the vows they have taken----that itself would be Sanskaari no? π π
Certainly can't be termed Sinskaari π----and maybe not Asanskaari either? ππ
Lovely piece vijji.
Thanks so much Nalini dear. Really made my day to hear you say that. π€
Love
N