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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


My Dear Aheli sweetheart πŸ€— πŸ€—


Thanks again for your wishes, darling. πŸ€— Glad you loved this OS, no rush at all, comment when time permits after your classes.

Loads of Love

Viji


Unresed Viji.πŸ˜ƒ
Loved this OS so much!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ It was a awesome to see Swara as such a caring wife.😳 We generally see that Sanky is always caring towards Swara.πŸ˜‰ So it was a deja vu moment between them.😳 Loved Sujata. She and her logic!!πŸ˜† Sanky became quite teasing after his fever came down.πŸ˜†πŸ˜³ Loved all the SwaSan moments!!!!❀️ Thanks for the pm.πŸ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Unresed Viji.πŸ˜ƒ
Loved this OS so much!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ It was a awesome to see Swara as such a caring wife.😳 We generally see that Sanky is always caring towards Swara.πŸ˜‰ So it was a deja vu moment between them.😳 Loved Sujata. She and her logic!!πŸ˜† Sanky became quite teasing after his fever came down.πŸ˜†πŸ˜³ Loved all the SwaSan moments!!!!❀️ Thanks for the pm.πŸ˜ƒ
With love,
Aheli.


Hey Aheli my dear πŸ€—πŸ€—


So overjoyed to know that you loved this OS very much. πŸ€—πŸ˜³ I see Swara and Sanskaar like this--- as being very caring and protective of each other. They are true soulmates after all, they complete and complement each other so perfectly. Swara would certainly be extremely distraught when Sanskaar fell ill, and would pull out all the stops to ensure he got better soon. 😳

Sujju certainly had a unique logic of her own. πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰She loves to have some tashan with the bahus of the household, but she definitely is very fond of Swara. How can she not be---she knows how much Swara adores Sanskaar---her chora, the apple of her eye. 😊 And even towards Ragini, she has mellowed down a fair bit. πŸ˜‰

Sunny boy in his naughty, teasing, flirtatious avatar is too cute, no? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ No wonder Swara just can't resist him. ☺️

So thrilled to know you adored the SwaSan moments here. 😳

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
So very touched by all the lovely feedback on this OS, guys. πŸ€— πŸ€—

Trust I have finished my individual reverts to all your comments.

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Hey Viji dear,πŸ€—
What more can I say for this lovely OS!!!Beautifully written and fantastic..Loved it..πŸ‘πŸΌβ€οΈ
So sorry for this late comment..Been busy with my studies lately..πŸ˜’
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hey Viji dear,πŸ€—

What more can I say for this lovely OS!!!Beautifully written and fantastic..Loved it..πŸ‘πŸΌβ€οΈ
So sorry for this late comment..Been busy with my studies lately..πŸ˜’



Hey Geethu πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

No sorry's allowed---remember Sunny's friendship rules! πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ But seriously, please don't worry about 'delayed' comments---As I keep saying, there is no such thing. I am just so happy my pals read and comment when time permits. Touched that you dropped in to give your feedback.
πŸ€—πŸ€—

So very happy to know that you loved this OS dear. 😳 And your warm words about my writing made me go all ☺️

Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Nalini 😳

You gave me such a high with that lovely comment yaar. So very touched. 😊 Shall revert tomorrow. πŸ€— Need to reply to that one from lappie. πŸ€—

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Bennet.Lizzy

Res.

Ill get back in a day or two vijji. Caught up in some commitments I can't shake off soon.

Loved it and would like to read it one more time before I word a proper comment.

Love
N



Viji

Hey Nalini dear πŸ€—

πŸ˜• you gave our dear Sanskaar a flu bug. Poor him.. But im sadistically happy 😊

How cruel am I, or we all are to have Sanskaar get sick to watch the duo going are lovely dovey and touchy around each other. 😊

😳 πŸ˜‰ He he...yeah, I was so distressed at the idea of Sunny down with the flu. But then, when he gets so much TLC from wifey dearest, even he wouldn't mind I guess. 😳 πŸ˜†

Firstly, how you bring those morning in Swasan world on to paper😳 they always make the story so incredibly sweet, red and accentuate the strength of their bond everytime. I love those mornings. But unfortunately this day swara wakes up to an ill and weak Sanskaar, damn the flu bug!!

☺️
I am so thrilled to know you love SwaSan's mornings together. 😳 I completely lose myself in SwaSan dreamland while writing those scenes πŸ˜†, gave me quite a kick to know you loved to read them. But yeah...sigh...this morning Swara misses the warm cuddles and more from Hubby dearest...drat those virulent viruses!! (An aside---perhaps the flu bug that infected Sunny is female? Even she couldn't resist him! πŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒ)

But then our dear, all so concerned swara's reflexes kick in and I relaxed back. Watching her fidget through those medicine cabinets while unceremoniously waking up the doc in the wee hours determined to beat a flu bug who digged it's claws into her Sanskaar. She looked so cute distressed and strong.

The way she woke up Sanskaar gave him the magical tea which in itself was his panacea when taken through her mighty living hands. And let him lean onto her while at it. How adorable the scene was. I just couldn't get enough of it.

Thanks Nalini dear. πŸ€—πŸ€— I know from personal experience that hubbies behave like big babies when they fall ill. πŸ˜‰ And I could SO see Swara tending worriedly to her hubby, making sure he was feeling better, almost tearfully frantic that his discomfort he alleviated, and his temperature brought down. Dr Choudhary was lucky he was woken up only at 4.46 am. πŸ˜† It could have well been an entire couple of hours earlier, if that was when Sanskaar's temperature had started to climb. Swara wouldn't have bothered waking him up in the least. πŸ˜†

And then we have this another incredible scene. Swara checking out her dear husband just on the wrong day. I wondered for a moment there about who is teasing whom. Swara being all to unintentionally flirtatious or Sanskaar with his mind silently panning on ways to just get his way with her when he couldn't herself fight him off. The chemistry was 😳

😳 ☺️ I do think of Sunny as being this intensely naughty, flirtatious and slightly brazen pati with his beloved wife. And Swara---how can she resist checking her hubby out. πŸ˜† She has all the rights to, anyway. πŸ˜‰ I was so thrilled that you loved their chemistry here, N...that is such a lovely compliment. Being such a crazy SwaSan fan, that literally made me feel on top of the world, to hear you say that. 😳

And last but not the least ending on the note of a memory. By now I'm sure that's one of your favourite sankaari one liners. You always find a nice way to bring it up and they are so perfect everytime, this time with Sanskaar burying his face in her tresses and slipping into his personal paradise .

Yup, the "tum mere upar ho, Swara" line na? πŸ˜† I do love that adorable moment from SwaSan's past. So very tender, sweet, light hearted and really romantic---though they weren't even a couple then. Sunny certainly was experiencing heaven now----his beloved in his arms, snuggling into him, even as he buried his face contentedly into her tresses.

But Viji what happened when swara fell sick. I think Sanskaar would have been very sanskaari. 😊
What do you think?

Hmmm...I'm not sure. πŸ˜‰ I think Sanskaar would have taken assiduous care of her, like a fragile, priceless porcelain figurine. But me thinks Swara, once she started feeling a tad better, might have utilized the perfect opportunity of having Hubby darling home instead of office, by stoking certain Asanskaari activities. πŸ˜‰ Although, in a sense, with these two completely married in their hearts and souls, and legally of course by the vows they have taken----that itself would be Sanskaari no? πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰

Certainly can't be termed Sinskaari πŸ˜†----and maybe not Asanskaari either? πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰


Lovely piece vijji.

Thanks so much Nalini dear. Really made my day to hear you say that. πŸ€—

Love
N



My Dearest Nalini,πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

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Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awesome one viji...loved swaras concern...would lonve to see swara doing sewa of sanskar in the show...which we dont get to see.
U know what i was thinking abt the car blast track where sanskar would get injured and swaras concernwould be shown...would love to see something like that
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: reeyacute

Awesome one viji...loved swaras concern...would lonve to see swara doing sewa of sanskar in the show...which we dont get to see.

U know what i was thinking abt the car blast track where sanskar would get injured and swaras concernwould be shown...would love to see something like that


Hey Reeya πŸ€—πŸ€—

Thanks a lot, so glad to know that you loved this OS. Yeah, would love to see Swara giving loads and loads of TLC to her Hubby dearest, on the show. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ I'm sure Sunny boy would just be in ultimate bliss with all her pampering. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† He would use the opportunity for some teasing and mischievous flirting, too. πŸ˜‰

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Viji darling...
Another brilliant piece from your talented n highly active brain...how amazingly u chose such situations n create something soo magical...πŸ‘

Swasan together in each other embrace daily n one fine day she witness him with viral fever..in short his is sick...i cant even imagine my boy in such conditions..of pain...irritation...aches...etc..im soo in love with him..cant see him sick..but anyways that is part of life..health n sickness..joy n sorrow but what comes after was a healing journey...soo soothing n lovable...

Swara like a healer..comforter...doting wife get in an act to just cure her husband..even she cant bear anyone so close to him...if it just virus...all hercare n pampering to him worked well n he cured soon...i simply loved sansku naughtiness even in sickness..his inuendos n flirtation were soo cheesy.☺️..enjoyed it..n after our boy was hale n hearty..his betterhalf got sick..n now his turn to return all care n pampering...😳

Sujju part was soo cute...loved her worried for his son but also that kind of childish tashan with her bahus..loved it...πŸ˜†

Overall incredible..πŸ‘few more post to reply..πŸ˜•

Loads of loveπŸ˜›
Talia
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