SwaSan TS: Learning to trust him again (Final part on pg1 /28 -07- 16)

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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Nita

A true writer can never quit even for a while, that's what you proved. I thought you will be in exile for a while but you are back with a bang. Don't restrict it to a OS Nita, you are very good at developing plots to long fiction.

About the prologue,you left us on a suspense, a real cliff hanger. Please update it soon. Our Sanskar never quits till he wins!!!!

Love, veena.

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow nita akka... Very interesting prologue.

As usual sahil is irritating. 😡

Oh no sanskaar is ready to give the divorce.😲 But what is sanskaar's condition?

Exited to read further. 😛

Update soon.

I'll read after the exams..

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Thanks for all your support guys...I read each and everyone of your comment..It was a great source of inspiration which made me post the OS right now..But all plans do change when it comes from me..So this will now be a TS.. Posted the first part ..Do read when you get time..And i will get to your lovely comments tomorrow..

Also the next part will be updated asap ..Do bear my timing constraint in mind..I thought of finishing it today..Looks like that was not possible..

Love

Nita

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Res for part-1
Unres

Superb update
I wish same think happen in the show so it will be superb na 😉

Swara and her confusion 😕 but dadi talks made me laugh 🤣
"What with this divorce topic again, i have only two granddaughter and how many more marriage do i need to see in my old age.. Remember last time when she came back home separated from him.. She didnt eat ,drink nor sleep..She was acting like someone who lost the will to live and that will happen if the divorce happens again and her memory comes back"
@bold Dadi future planning if swara takes divorce whenever she gain her memory back then she will again marry him. So dadi in this have to see another marriage Superb planning dadi 🤣

Shomi and sanskar scene was awesome and the way sanskar supporting swara till now was lovely 😳 and again jahil irritating 😡 but when sanskar signed the divorce paper i was like 😭 why he is doing this 😭 but now i understood that was master planning by sanskar 👏

And swasan scene was mind blowing finally swara started trusting sanskar

Beautifully written 👏
Loved it
Update soon
Thanks for pm

Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago

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sarra0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Loved the second update...as much as i loved the jungle scene and the hut and the little conversation v had in the show was spot on but u know extensively my views on wat was lacking...more communication...more words..more explanation and the whole track was such a bad showing for not only swara brain and character but also the family bond with not only shomi and swara but also sanskaar and goddodia who treated sahil as one of their own and sanskaar as a stranger...

Where they failed u more than made up for...showin a swara while still doubtful actually willing to listen 2reason, actually wanting answers, actually askin questions and consider information...a shomi who was concerned about her son and actually treated and recognised his importance...shomi who is also a concerned mother for swara and on swara initiating some conversation shomi told her 2 listen and go with an open mind...

Loved sanky besting sahil...for now 😆😆😆...but still never the less a win is a win...having multiple lawyers read the divorce papers not allowing sahil in havin logical arguments and proof such as police report ...rememberin all 3marriages and makin me remember thou i only like 2 remember 2 😆😆 ...aw the video diary continuing...that is so sweet an addition...swara sanskaar define love, the depths they can go to 4each other barely been seen so it was great to c her acknowledge that there may b something 2wat they r all saying that without him she wud b walkin dead 😉

Sanky leap of faith and devotion signing the divorce papers to get her to trust him...Y do i think sahil cud try somethin with the signed divorce papers?? But u r not the cvs...u r better 😉

one of my fave sentences wen sanky tells swara shes been to jail more time than he has..i so wanted that wen they had the stupid dialogue in the show...someone 2open her eyes to some facts inc the arrest records after all v know how steller the sr police r in their jobs and i got some here 🥳

Also no rags means me jumpin with joy 😈

Looking 4ward to reading the next part...

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mita2233

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Thanks for the amazing update...👍🏼

Waiting for the next...😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Sujayricky
Res
Unres Nita

I known Nita I have a res on your story forced marriage I will try to unres soon Take your time Sujoy ..I can wait😊..Just like you have to wait for chapter 2😆

Superb prologue 👏
Totally superb one...Thanks Sujoy 😃...

Sanskar calmness was awesome 😆 and sahil and his irritating 😡 ...Sahil is irritating right but i want sanskar to be calm and smart..😊

But I really like the way dida is used that was surprising 😆 ...Really happy to know that Sujoy ..Dida is missing from the story ..so why not add her here😉

Sanskar is ready to give divorce 😲 but one condition 😉 ..You know the condition as chapter 1 is updated

Update soon Nita Will update second chapter soon

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Juanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very interesting prologue, Nita dear 🤗...Thanks Viji dearest 🤗

So we have Swara angry at Sanskaar after the Kissan episode, but she still has those broef flashes of memory, still feels an ineplicable pull towards him which she is doing her best to deny...Of course 😉..

That useless Mr Deadwood is upto his usual antics...😡🤢 I SO want Sanskaar to beat him up. 😆 Loved the calm, determined, no nonsense Sanskaar...who says he has got permission to stay in Dida's house, that it is not so simple to get a divorce without his consent and cooperation. Liked the way he puts Sahil in his place. The end was really tantalizing--when Sanskaar says he will give Swara a divorce, but based on her agreeing to do something. Wonder what that is. 😊See deadwood had to be there to make everyone hate him😉... I too want Sanskar to beat him up ..Whatever we got in the show so far is not enough😭.. I always want calm and determined Sanskar ..Really happy to know you liked Prologue dear..

Look forward to chapter 1. 🤗..Chapter 1 posted.. 😃

Love

Viji

Love

Nita

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Amazing update. Update soon please 😃

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Its jst WOW nita.
Amaizing.the bond btw shomi & sanskar,family's suport,a open convo of swasan evrythng we wntd in serial u wrote it perfectly.
Love it.updt soon

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