Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one. - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago
read part 13 n 14


its awesome 👏

waiting for more 😳

update soon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was just outstanding
I'm speechless
Please do continue soon
Eagerly waiting for raglak meeting
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Obsessive part15
She saw the person approaching her and instantly recognised Laksh before she actually lost conscious in his arms. His face was worried. He pulled her close.
L- Ragini. Y u keep on doing things. I love you. I can never hate u. I can never be careless, u r a part of my heart. I die every time u hurt urself.
He pulled her unconscious body to his chest and pecked her wet hair. He lifted her up and moved slowly to his car which he rushed to his mansion. He entered and thus time no one reacted perhaps they r trying to get habitual.
He moved to his room placed her on the couch. He searched for her suitcase Alas it was lying somewhere on the drenched streats of Kolkata.
He rushed his fingers through his hair. He ran downstairs. To his relief he saw swara on the sofa. She was resting. Sanskaar was at little distance on a phone call.
Dp and Rp were sitting on the next sofa discussing the office. He actually felt strange, she never rests here on the sofa doing nothing , and sitting idle with her phone and headphones. He trashed his thoughts and paced quickly to her.
L- Bhabhi.
Swara for a second for horror stuck. She immediately removed her headphones and threw the phone aside.
Sw- Ji..
L- I need ur help. Ragini is all drenched and unconscious pls help her change. U know Na Maa r chachi can't do it.
Swara was in deep thought she couldn't risk this at this moment.
Sw- Laksh ji. Woh I am sorry.. I ... I can't help now.
Anger captured him at that instant. His ragini was in unconscious and thus lady was doing nothing but refused to help him.
L- (shouts) What.. Y I don't think u r doing something y can't u help me.
Swara was shaken in fear. She glued her eyes to the floor and held her kurta tight. Dp and Rp grew furious and Sanskaar turned to him in a shock. Firstly he was talking to his wife and that too in raised voice. He immediately excused his Caller.
Rp - Laksh. How dare u talk like that to her.
DP- DON'T U Know she is the wide of ur elder sibling? How Can u Disrespect her.
She lifted her eyes. To Do and Rp .
L- Dad chachu see she is doing nothing and there Ragini is lying unconscious in my room. Y can't she help me. What if something happens to her.
Sw- Woh...
L- I don't want a reason Bhabhi u r coming with me.
He gripped her elbow, she stood up. Sanskaar who just ended this conversation on phone got extremely furious
Sa- LAKSH. Leave her.
L- No.
Sa- I Said Leave her.
DP and Rp screamed the same. The noise automatically brought Ap and sujata in the hall.
Sanskaar removed his grip from swara's elbow.
Sa- swara won't help u don't involve her in ur drama with Ragini. Pls I request u leave us n let us live In peace
L- I am doing nothing to violate ur peace but I just need her help at this moment.
Sa- swara can't help.
He said in strict tone to Laksh.
L- (almost in tears) Y ..
Sa- Because.. (he hestated but then spoke up) Because she is pregnant. So keep her away from ur mess and stay away from her she has nothing to do with u and Ragini.
Laksh was too shocked to react, he gazed at swara. And then at sanskaar he felt numb. So finally he was going to be a chachu. A kid was finally arriving. A small smile crept on his face, and the next moment the shock in his eyes turned into a gleem of happiness.
L- Really..
And he pulled sanskaar in a tight hug.
L- I am soo happy for u Bhai.
He broke the hug n held swara's hand.
L- I am sorry Bhabhi I didn't know it. I.. I appollogise. ..
But just then he remembered about ragini and ran ran up. He was still smiling and this time the family was numb, their boy was giving them shocks one after the other. At first he was exceptionally a jerk and now he is magically changed. A genuine reason for a shock.
Swara smiled and Sanskaar made her sit again.
Su- swara r u okay
Sw- yes mom.
AP- Sanskaar take her to ur room.
Sa- ji maa, come swara
Sw-mom I am just a few months pregnant n u r not letting me work.
Su- shh... We already told u Na, n swara see I would love have a little princess. But now go n take care of ur baby. So ja.
Swara nodded and smiled. She left with sanskaar to their room.

There Laksh entered his room he saw ragini she was shivering and her body began turning blue he let a deep breath out and lashed the door. He slowly moved to his wardrobe and grabbed his shirt and trousers. He then paced to her. He freed her wet hair and dried them up, he then wiped her face. His body pressed over hers. He gripped her back and held her up. Slowly with his other hand removed her top. He pulled her on his chest and unhooked her garment. He made her lie again on the couch. He with huge difficulty controlled his hormones. He grabbed the towel back he slowly dried her arms and then her upper abdomen and then her waist. He again pulled her back and her bare body touched his, he wiped her back. Every passing second it got difficult to control his hormones. He kept his hand on her body and bent himself to grab his shirt. Her unconscious body disbalanced. He panicked and widrew his hand to prevent her from falling. Accidentally in the process he touched her bossoms. It sent shivers down his spine. He immediately held her from her waist. Tightening the grip on her waist this time he finally grabbed his shirt. He slowly made her wear it. He was not willing to gaze her seductive body again but perhaps had no option. He slowly buttoned his shirt on her body. Leaving a few on the top open. The minimum he could controller. Some feed was necessary for his eyes. He then moved to her jeans and Rmoved it. Her slowly Removed her garment covering her private parts. He wipped her body and slid his pj pants upto her waist.

L- Finally done.
He exhaled.
L- Ragini u r tempting even when u r unconscious.
He lifted her up and made her lye on the bed. He covered her with a comferter. He slowly grabbed her wet clothes and hung them in the washroom. He moved to her and made rested on the bed. He cuddled her close to him and slept providing her his body heat.

Few hrs later-
Ragini's eyes flicked open.
R- Laksh...
He woke up.
L- (cupping her face) R u Okay.
Ragini nodded.
L- wait I shall bring u some hot food.
Ragini nodded again but was shocked the next second he pecked her lips and ran down.
She gasped and then smiled touching her lips. She rested her head on the head rest and noticed her clothes changed. She smiled thinking it was swara. She exhaled a deep breath.
Downstairs -
Laksh came running to the dinning table.
L- maa food.
AP- kya hua laksh and how is ragini.
L- fine she gained conscious
DP- where is she
L- my room.
DP- what the hell were u doing in there then.
L- (exhaled) Dad ofcourse not making out with her.
DP- mind ur tongue.
L- okay to the point I was gazing at her while she was unconscious.
All rolled their eyes.
Sa- Laksh shut ur non sense and go to ragini.
L- yeah she needs me more at this time.
He served the meal in a plate and placed upstairs.
Sw- sanskaar can I meet rag...
Sa- u can but first have ur meal and then u r coming with me we will go her together.
She nodded. Sanskaar caressed her hair.
Su- swara take care of urself first come have this dal.
Sw- Maa I already ad enough.
Sujata got up.
Su- listen Sanskaar youfeed her.
Swara gave him pleading looks. He smiled.
Sa-mom u will turn my wife stout pls leave her.
Su- shut up sanskaar.

Just then they heard Ragini.
R- Bhahi.
She was in Laksh's shirts and tracks. A stole hung around her neck.
She moved to her and embraced her.
R- I am so happy for u both.
Laksh stood up the staircase and observed her.
Sw- How r u ragini.
She slowly asked and caressed her hair.
R- (moisture formed in her eyes as she remembered her mother who used to caress her hair the same way) good.
She sat down and rested her head in swara's lap.
R- take care Bhabhi.
Swara patted her hair. Rest the Maheshwaris were numb they did not know how to react after what laksh did to her. They were still ashamed.
Ragini soon collected herself from her lap and stood up. She pecked her hands and a tear from her escaped. Wiping it she stood up. Swara too had moisture in her eyes.
AP- Ragini.
R- ji
AP- I think u need clothes
R- hmm..for sure.
Sanskaar seeing it as an escape immediately spoke up.
Sa- swara let's go ragini needs some clothes.
Su- Na ese kesi jiji deden gi.
Sa- swara get up fast
She followed his directions.
Sa- mom see Na ragini needs clothes
Sw- Han mom I am just coming.
Sa- challo swara challo challo.
Sw- egghh.. sanskaar swara.
Sa- bas abhi aaye mom
Ragini looks on perplexed laksh passes a knowing smile while swasan escaped to their room.
L- Madam cahllen.
R- coming.
She followed swasan .
Ragini changed into a white anarkali. Her wet hair rested on her shoulder. She left swasan's room. She had no place to go she moved down stairs to the hall and sat on the sofa.
Ap saw her and moved to her she caressed her hair.
AP- Ragini.
R- ji.
AP- howz u beta.
Ragini smiled
R- I am goo...
L- (cuts) She was drowned in alcohol.
He slowly moved and sat on the adjacent sofa.
AP- I am not talking to you.
L- I know no body does that here.
AP- Ragini u say
R- mom I was good and was supposed to leave to Africa.
AP- Africa.
R- yes mom I secured a job there.
Ap smiles u r an independent girl.
L- wow ragini but then mom apko pata h she drinks so much that she deteriorated her health and fainted.
AP- shut up. Ragini is that true.
Ragini broke the eye contact and looked down
R- ji mom.
L- Ragini did u learn to smoke or shall I help u.
Ap- can u shut up.
R- (looks at him with teary eyes) laksh is it the way u love.
L- what u mean.
R- Laksh what r u doing.
L- I am telling my mom about her daughter in law.
R- y.
L- she has the r8.
AP- shut up laksh. Ragini don't worry.
R- arnt u hurt that he love a drunkard like me
AP- I am , but not because my son loves a girl who drinks but because he is the cause of ur Condition.
L- mom I am still guilty for what I did.
R- and I have forgiven him long back mom.
AP- then what u have to say about marriage.
Ragini glared at laksh and then ap.
R -Idk mom, I don't think an orphan, a homeless and shameless creature like me deserves any marriage.
AP- beta...
She pulled her xlose. Ragini embraced her.
Laksh slipped into a deep thought.
AP- Ragini come with me sujata and swara are in my room we all want to talk to u.
Ragini lifted her blured gaze to her. She left.

Laksh slipped into deep thoughts. He actually felt deeply guilty for the way he behaved with Swara. The way he thought about her. The way he hurted her. He had been humiliating her and Sanskaar. Was it really her fault that she was homeless and orphan like his Ragini. No. She was hurt by situations like Ragini. He held.his tears. He had been a real jerk all his life. He got up and moved out.
He saw Sanskaar in the study.
L- Bhai
Sa- bol lucky.
L- I am sorry.
Sa- (frowned ) for what.
L- for everything.
Sa- do u really mean it.
L- yes I do. I owe an apology to swara Bhabhi as well but don't know how to face her. I feel like a real culprit and criminal.
Sa- u need not to be. Come on leave the past tell me what about u and Ragini.
L- what u think. I won't force her for loving me. Or marrying me. I just wanted to know her I love her too and I know I did a mistake nothing else.
Sa- she will understand.
L- how
Sa- time will tell.
Laksh hugged sanskaar and then moved to his laptop he booked tickets.
There ragini sat Along with swara sujata and Annapurna feeling back into the home. Resting her head in Ap's lap she had a big convo with the ladies. She cried she laughed she smiled but didn't supress any emotion with the alcohol.


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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm obsessed to your story. 😃 The way you portray the characters, its awesome. And I loved how Ragini has finally made Lakshya realise how much of a jerk he used to be once upon a time.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.
continue soon
. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really addictive and awesome update

Keep it up good work
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Harshi. 😳
Unresed. 😃
I ved this update so much! 👏 I know this is a RagLak story, but in this update got a good share of my SwaSan too. 😳 I really loved Laksh's transformation and the way he realized his mistakes and bad deeds towards Ragini, Swara and Sanskar. 😳 I loved his reaction when he got to know about Swara's pregnancy, the realization that he's going to be a chachu. 😃 Also loved his self control while he was changing Ragini's dress. 😉 Loved SanLak's convo and Ragini's convo with Swara and AP. 😃 Will eagerly wait for the next part. 😃 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Harshita sry for late but yaa it was awesome nd eagerly waiting fr next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome update
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
read all the updates in one go and guess what you made me speechless, you made me cry hard, made me feel the pain of ragini, feeling of betrayal, feeling of being homeless. yet living life with own will and power. i am so loving your story. update soon

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