SwaSan OS: My Alternate take on the ML track - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Nita 🤗

Loved this straightforward, sensible, simple and sweet take on the ML track. If only the serial could go this way instead of the overdose of melodrama we get. 😆...Hi Viji dearest🤗 .. Really happy to know you liked the OS.. Thanks dear for the lovely comment that made my day😳

I just loved the fact that Swara, though she did not recall several months leading to the accident, remembered the phase of her and Sanskaar's friendship where they were supposedly planning for a divorce (before she had realized/ acknowledged her own feelings for him). ..I always admired Swara trust on Sanskar during the friendship phase and the fact she still didnt trust him a little bit in the ML track on the show made me want to go back to those beautiful days..

The sensible and level headed way she and Sanskaar talked to each other, was such a relief. Why can't they show such conversations in the serial, SwaSan being able to really talk with each other like a married couple very deeply in love. Instead, they show them hurtling from crisis to crisis, sometimes talking at each other rather than to each other. 😕..The reason i fell in love with SwaSan is because they always talk and sort it out..Such a rare characterstics in TV world.. They used to talk to each other before their second marriage..Now sadly most often they talk at each other.. But when they used to talk to each other were my golden period of SwaSan..And i still hope for such scenes..The hopeful fan of SwaSan😆

Really liked the ending para---Sanskaar's calm, steady determination that their precious memories, those blissful moments of deep, pure love that they shared, are just too precious to be forgotten. Swara may not consciously remember those memories, but he knows that he has a place in her heart and her soul. And he will make her fall in love with him all over again. 😊 😳 ..We were all hoping for falling in love all over again in the show, now we just have to imagine it in our imagination only sadly.. I really loved your take on ML too viji dearest,especially Sanskar being in the ML zone was interesting..In a way though the show has lost it touch but writers like you keep me still holding on to this show ..😃

Lovely OS, I really enjoyed it. Thanks dearest..Gonna attempt one more OS or TS around ML track too😆 ..If i get time which i hardly have😭.. But i might who knows 😉

Lots of Love,

---Viji


With lots of Love

Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

This was so much better and fun to read rather than this "khooni" track!! I really loved Swara's trust on Sanskar.. Even though she does'nt remember their Love, which she'll remember with time.. At least they still have that mutual understanding.



Thanks Saumya dearest 🤗, Really happy to know you liked the OS😃.. You know i always admired the trust this two share and the track in the show didnt have it so i had to insert it in my OS😉..


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Sorry for the late nita...

Superb os dear. Well written. Loved it.👏
Thanks for the pm dear.




Thanks Kaveetha dearest🤗..No need for sorry ,see how late i am in replying back to your lovely comment..I am really happy to know you liked the OS and that all that matter to me😃..


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Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44


Replied back to it few pages earlier Kamilla dearest😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hi Nita,How are you??🤗



Hi Geetha .. I am Good , little busy but good..😆 How are you ? Sorry for taking so long to reply back .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

This shot is written beautifully..I loved it..❤️
Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊



Thanks Geetha dearest🤗..Really happy to know you liked the OS😃..


With lots of Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47


Thanks dear..Happy to know you liked the OS😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita sweetie...

Finally i read ur OS..it was absolutely unique n fascinating...loved reading it...it was a relief from all khooni jaap n tum meray pati nhn ho...

This version of ML track was relief n soothing...no negativity..no added villians.. just pure memory loss..no dramatics

Enjoyed alot..want sequel of this OS..after more revelation to swara..

Love
Talia



Hi Talia dearest🤗


Thanks dearest..Really happy to know you liked the OS.. 😃.. Yeah i needed a break from khooni jaap so wrote it 😉.. I dont like over negativity or OTT villians and so i can never qualify for SR cvs..They are the best in negativity and psycho villians😆... But going to take my version of the way ML track ended with the Cvs dramatics.. Just changing a few but keeping their drama factor intact..Let see how that fairs..Will post the OS when i get time ..😊


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
A heartfelt Thanks to all those who liked and Commented on this OS.. Your encourgement did motivate me a lot ,so much that i am thinking of writing one more when i get time..So big thanks to all of you ..

I have finally gotten around to reply to all the lovely comments..If i missed anyone please let me know.. I dont want to miss any of the precious comments..


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Hi sissy...

Finally getting time to go through all pm..

Its such wonderful,simple and perfect Os for ML track...
Why cvs cant take drama in this way...in the name of high voltage drama..its spoils many things...

I loved the way swara just remember her family still she willing to see sanskar coz the person who stand beside her in all tough times...her inner feelings giving her strength about her feelings towards sanskar..amazing..

Three months ...alot changes...hahha she thinks Ragini in evil mode still...

Sanskar handled the situation well making sure he will answer all her questions..

Their convo is fantastic.."We are still happily married" wahhh sanskar ..while reading this felt so happy...best ever onscreen couple...

Sanskar determined to make her fall for him over again...

Hats offf...superb OS.

Thanks for sharing ur views on this track..

Love

Lekah

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