SwaSan OS: My Alternate take on the ML track - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nita 🤗

Loved this straightforward, sensible, simple and sweet take on the ML track. If only the serial could go this way instead of the overdose of melodrama we get. 😆

I just loved the fact that Swara, though she did not recall several months leading to the accident, remembered the phase of her and Sanskaar's friendship where they were supposedly planning for a divorce (before she had realized/ acknowledged her own feelings for him).

The sensible and level headed way she and Sanskaar talked to each other, was such a relief. Why can't they show such conversations in the serial, SwaSan being able to really talk with each other like a married couple very deeply in love. Instead, they show them hurtling from crisis to crisis, sometimes talking at each other rather than to each other. 😕

Really liked the ending para---Sanskaar's calm, steady determination that their precious memories, those blissful moments of deep, pure love that they shared, are just too precious to be forgotten. Swara may not consciously remember those memories, but he knows that he has a place in her heart and her soul. And he will make her fall in love with him all over again. 😊 😳

Lovely OS, I really enjoyed it.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so much better and fun to read rather than this "khooni" track!! I really loved Swara's trust on Sanskar.. Even though she does'nt remember their Love, which she'll remember with time.. At least they still have that mutual understanding.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for the late nita...
Superb os dear. Well written. Loved it.👏
Thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Nita,How are you??🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This shot is written beautifully..I loved it..❤️
Stay blessed and keep smiling..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nita sweetie...
Finally i read ur OS..it was absolutely unique n fascinating...loved reading it...it was a relief from all khooni jaap n tum meray pati nhn ho...

This version of ML track was relief n soothing...no negativity..no added villians.. just pure memory loss..no dramatics

Enjoyed alot..want sequel of this OS..after more revelation to swara..

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res bebo... after a long time...

Unres... extremely s**** I forgot..

Fabulous... far better memory loss tract... it'll be good if cvs used this... I'm mean they use your brain... what to say about this.. I loved the way Swara memory stuck in that situation... sahil I live him here too.. I love the fact how sahil found swara... just loved everything bebo 🤗

I really don't know what to say.. or what to comment .. 😃


With love...

Kam...


Hi Kamilla dearest,

S**** for such a late reply as well.. I am really happy you liked the OS dear.. Sahil well I didn't intend for you to love him but I tried to tone down is character arc while the cv's love keeping him a lot of screen space.. I am really happy once again that you liked it.. Love you for such a lovely comment..


With love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nita🤗

The os is really beautiful.
It is well executed.sahil is also introduced in a good way.Hi Shamina dearest,Sorry for such a late reply 😭..And i am really happy you liked this OS.


Swara was trying to recollect the past memories.and thank god Sanskar was in her memories.she forgot so many things.but sanskar is her husband and she believe him...Well i cant have her calling him khooni,so she had to have memories of Sanskar even if it is just as a friend😉


And ragini she is changed now.but she will be shattered after swara's behavior.but sanskar he slowly said the whole story to her.she trust him.so the problem is solved.Well i want to highlight her trust in him,while in the show her whole family told her to believe Sanskar but she didnt ,so here i want her to just trust Sanskar one word over her memory😳


She didn't know what happened to her...but she asked about their marriage...for her they are in the way of divorce.
But when she heard that they are husband and wife a happiness surrounded her..she didn't remember the past.I for one always thought even during the i want divorce phase,Swara never really wanted it 😆..So her fears about divorce was true as she was not ready to be seperated from her husband,even in the show she realized she is in love with him when he signed the divorce papers and she feared he will leave her forever😉


But their love will never change...
It is really interesting...So true.. Though the show ruined the track, i still will hold onto the belief that even if Swara had memory loss,she would have grown to love him once again without the memories..Really happy to know you found it interesting


Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina


With lot of love

Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res - it is going to be another long week - will unres as soon as possible

Unres

Dear Nita,

That was a brilliantly written OS - her losing only a few months of her memory to the period when they were married but still in the friend's zone because she had not accepted that she loved him. She is so firm about whom she has to meet and is actually afraid that she has lost Sanskaar because she does not remember being actually married or whether they went ahead with the divorce.
And in spite of this doubts eating her away, she still wanted him and when he confirms that they are still married she is happy. Sanskaar is not so happy because it meant that she has forgotten that she has fallen in love with him but it does not matter, she knows she is in love with him and they both can work to help her remember.Hi Nyna dearest 🤗, Really happy to know you liked the OS. And as always you were able to explain my OS way better than me 😃.. Nothing more to say as you were always spot on..

A very nice take on the ML track - with limited focus on the others (a big hug for reducing deadwood to a dry twig) with Sanskaar and Swara talking to each other to clear all her doubts and her absolute trust in him -"if you say Ragini is changed I shall trust you" nice to see Swara this way.Well Cvs made a huge error of giving SS to Sahil and trying to make him into an Villian😆..I dont want to do it..Thanks dear for your lovely comment ..Really happy to know you liked my take.. See trust factor was missing in ML so i wanted her to trust him in my OS 😉

I loved it Nita, maybe you could write a sequel where she regains all her memories - would love to read that.Well just finished my FF recently..while i do have an idea about another OS regarding ML too..I dont think i might make this one as TS..Sorry about that dear..

love,
Nyna

Love
Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Nita,

Unres page 2

love,
Nyna



Finally gotten around to reply to it 😊

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