SwaSan OS: My Alternate take on the ML track - Page 4

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Grt..
Loved ur version.

Originally posted by: Kiara.25

👏👏👏

Awesome. Finally no khooni drama in an OS. Love your take its different and superb. I know its an OS but would love to read as an ss for how she gain her memory back.

Originally posted by: sneharay

Fabulous.. Nicely written 👏
Please write a second part to..
Thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

Nita..
🤗

This is SO beautiful.
Simple, straight, sweet and perfect.. just the way I love it.

wish I could pick up what I loved most.. since I couldn't I would say.. Everything.
the sweet simplicity and promises of beautiful future .. Swara and Sanskaar..
perfect!❤️

Originally posted by: ANfan_1810

Wow!

Love this ml track...

Waiting for awesome updates ...

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Wow... Amazing os...

Loved this ml track...

If u can pls try to write 2nd part for this os..

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

Wonderful OS

Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

reserved...
unreserved...
Nita 🤗
we are sailing on the same boat...
I loved loved it.. Thanks Anku dearest..It meant a lot to know you liked it 😃

so beautifully U hv described the entire situation...her memory is stuck at pre divorce period...
how beautiful it would hv been had this been there on the show...
never mind...when we hv writers like U with us...Well Cvs never give us what we want, we have to write it on our own😉...Yeah but because they mess up we come up with so many how would i like it if the scene or track played out this way😆

swara was apprehensive regarding divorce...me liked that...nd it had nothing to do with ragini too unlike in show...she genuinely wanted to be with him...I think even back on those day when Swara screamed i want divorce,she would have still been apprehensive about it if Sanskar agreed to divorce her tomorrow😆.. She likes talking about divorce to keep it simple and not think about her growing feelings😉..

poor Sanskar... his quests are endless...how much he has to suffer every time...it's like there is no end to his punishments of the crimes he never did...
really wonderful piece Nita...loved it..Yeah his quests are always endless indeed.. Thanks Anku dearest..I am really happy to know you liked it 🤗

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: -CRJ-

loved it.

pls do continue this one 😳

Originally posted by: Aahana133

Awsm yr...
I wsh CVS also get this type of ideas instead of khooni dramA