SwaSan OS: My Alternate take on the ML track

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

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kamila.

@Seriously.

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Res bebo... after a long time...

Unres... extremely s**** I forgot..

Fabulous... far better memory loss tract... it'll be good if cvs used this... I'm mean they use your brain... what to say about this.. I loved the way Swara memory stuck in that situation... sahil I live him here too.. I love the fact how sahil found swara... just loved everything bebo 🤗

I really don't know what to say.. or what to comment .. 😃

With love...

Kam...

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Nita,wow!
A total diffrnt take..
Love it.swara go bk 2thr 1st marriage days.
Oh yes,she thnk rag as threat.gr8.hehe!
Aww!my sanskar...
M waiting whn in serial we get sanskar tk a breath of sigh!the xprsn on his face whn swara get bk memory...
Beutiful updt.
P.S-hheey nita ddaarrlliinngg,write a 2nd part also of it plich plich which ll b full of swasan,hw thy catch up lost times,thr convo,thr moments..pretty plich!
Edit-last part tht u add later,it was gd.
A swasan convo,sanskar dillema bt still i m demanding 2nd part.hehe!

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Woaaah Nita was waiting for it since morning as u told yesterday...why can't CVS let the things be simple like this? Why they want drama in all things?...really sometyms being simple seems to be the best thing...really love your writing style ...as I know first u wanted to write ss but due to lack f tym u r writing os ...but still I wud love it more if u elaborate it further in a few parts more...if u r free...bbbuuuttt plz complete your ff other wise m ready to send simars bhoot and daayans to your place😡

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Nita🤗

The os is really beautiful.

It is well executed.sahil is also introduced in a good way.

Swara was trying to recollect the past memories.and thank god Sanskar was in her memories.she forgot so many things.but sanskar is her husband and she believe him...

And ragini she is changed now.but she will be shattered after swara's behavior.but sanskar he slowly said the whole story to her.she trust him.so the problem is solved.

She didn't know what happened to her...but she asked about their marriage...for her they are in the way of divorce.

But when she heard that they are husband and wife a happiness surrounded her..she didn't remember the past.

But their love will never change...

It is really interesting...

Thanks for the pm

With lots of love

Shamina

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Res - it is going to be another long week - will unres as soon as possible

Unres

Dear Nita,

That was a brilliantly written OS - her losing only a few months of her memory to the period when they were married but still in the friend's zone because she had not accepted that she loved him. She is so firm about whom she has to meet and is actually afraid that she has lost Sanskaar because she does not remember being actually married or whether they went ahead with the divorce.

And in spite of this doubts eating her away, she still wanted him and when he confirms that they are still married she is happy. Sanskaar is not so happy because it meant that she has forgotten that she has fallen in love with him but it does not matter, she knows she is in love with him and they both can work to help her remember.

A very nice take on the ML track - with limited focus on the others (a big hug for reducing deadwood to a dry twig) with Sanskaar and Swara talking to each other to clear all her doubts and her absolute trust in him -"if you say Ragini is changed I shall trust you" nice to see Swara this way.

I loved it Nita, maybe you could write a sequel where she regains all her memories - would love to read that.

love,

Nyna

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Kiara.25

@Kiara.25

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

👏👏👏

Awesome. Finally no khooni drama in an OS. Love your take its different and superb. I know its an OS but would love to read as an ss for how she gain her memory back.

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Fabulous.. Nicely written 👏
Please write a second part to..
Thanks for pm 😊

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Nita..
🤗

This is SO beautiful.
Simple, straight, sweet and perfect.. just the way I love it.

wish I could pick up what I loved most.. since I couldn't I would say.. Everything.
the sweet simplicity and promises of beautiful future .. Swara and Sanskaar..
perfect!❤️

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

+ 19

Posted: 9 years ago

#10

Just overwhelmed with all your lovely comments and likes.. Really didn't expect it at all. Thanks guys for taking your time to let me know that this OS was likable.. I was rather worried about it, as I didn't take much time working on it as my other updates. It was typed and wrote in an rush and I am happy that you all still found it likable.. Will reply to each of your lovely comment ASAP..

With Love

Nita

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