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Dear Nita,
That was a brilliantly written OS - her losing only a few months of her memory to the period when they were married but still in the friend's zone because she had not accepted that she loved him. She is so firm about whom she has to meet and is actually afraid that she has lost Sanskaar because she does not remember being actually married or whether they went ahead with the divorce.
And in spite of this doubts eating her away, she still wanted him and when he confirms that they are still married she is happy. Sanskaar is not so happy because it meant that she has forgotten that she has fallen in love with him but it does not matter, she knows she is in love with him and they both can work to help her remember.
A very nice take on the ML track - with limited focus on the others (a big hug for reducing deadwood to a dry twig) with Sanskaar and Swara talking to each other to clear all her doubts and her absolute trust in him -"if you say Ragini is changed I shall trust you" nice to see Swara this way.
I loved it Nita, maybe you could write a sequel where she regains all her memories - would love to read that.
love,
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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