Broken - a swasan story epilogue pg 30 - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Plz dont make swara go away from sanskaar he cant live
Hope they both fight for their love
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update 👏
Loved it
To be honest i really liked the twist seriously fear of losing someone which you love the most is a great fear and writing in this will more described how the lovely bond swasan have in this story 😳
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Poor swara...
Now what will happen
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
poor sanskaar abhi abhi to uske saath sab achha ho rha tha n again this nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh no.. Plz harshita don't do this... 😭
Do something yaar but don't separate swasan.. I want them happy at the end with their children. 😭
Anyway good update dr..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part8

Hi all thanks for the great response. here is the next pls do leave ur replys. I here continue the story. Hope u like it. Thanks for reading in advanced.


He sipped his tears and broke the hug.

Sw- sanskaar kya hua..
Sa- kuch nahi u come to our room.
Sw- par sanskaar..
Sa- shh.. pls ek bar ajao..
L- Bhai are u okay...

Sanskaar forwarded her reports to him n took her to their room.
Sw- sanskaar..kya hua.. woh papers kya the?
Sa- I will tell you everything..
Sw- hmm.

Swasan entered their room.
He closed the door behind..

Meanwhile in the hall laksh read the papers which stated swara had cancer..
R- laksh Ji kya hua ..kya h in papers mein..
L- woh swara..
R- kya hua h swara ko..
L- woh swara ko... she .. she has blood cancer...
Su- what...
L- yes...
R- laksh Ji yeh aap..
L- ragini check this ..
This broke MF ..
Su- oh god what have my kids done to u .. y are u so harsh on them... both had suffered so much n now again all this...

AP- sujata pls don't cry .. if u will cry who will take care of swara and sanskaar they need a mother here at this point of time .. they need u.. u have to be strong..

Ragini stood numb at her place..
L- ragini r u.. .
R- laksh kuch...
L- lats wait for sanskaar to come down ..

In their room
Sa- swara sit here n listen to be carefully
Sw- hmm..
Sa- so swara u have a disease.. it is just now curable.. n from tomorrow we will go to the doctor for it therapy and treatment
Sw- par hua kya h mujhe sanskaar
He held her hands in his and took a deep sigh..
Sa- blood cancer...
Swara was beyond shocked
Her eyes formed moisture
Sw- sanskaar r u joking
Sa- swara was Ganda mazak toh mein apne sapne mein bhi nahi kar sakta..
Sw- so Sanskaar I am going soon...we will be separated again...
Sa- shh.. nahi swara kuch nahi hoga tumhe mein tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hone doonga..aur haan no power can separate us not even death..
Saath Keene Marne ka wada kiya h toh nibhayenge bhi..

Swara she hugged him tight...n cried her heart out ... he too cried along with her .. until she dosed off..her body turned quite hot due to crying...
Sa- (monologue)- swara kuch nahi ho GA swara tumhe kuch bhi nahi..I promise..



Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

He adjusted her position on the body n left for the hall
There he disclosed everything to the family n explained what exactly is the situation..
He then fixed appointments with the doctors .. he wanted to cure her asap...
After this laksh called hi. In the hall where he sat like a lifeless body.. ragini was with swara..
L- Bhai sanskaar
Sa- hmm
L- r u k
Sa- how can I be
(His throat chocked)
Laksh hugged him and sanskaar cried .
Su- sanskaar u have to support swara how can u cry ..
Sa- mom
Sujata pecked his forehead
Su- sanskaar go to swara ne with her.. n yes I want my old fit n fine swara back got it
He nodded n wiped his tears he then left for his room.

In their room
Ragini had left the room
Swara was no more crying she requested him to help her do few things.. they were her wishes
He agreed to it...

2weeks later-
Her treatment had started . This was the initial stage of it. She had so many medicines to eat but still she had to take them.
Today sanskaar had to fulfill her 1st wish
Sa- swara are u Sure u want to do this
Sw- yes..

She wore a backless top n jeans .. they left .. it was mid night all the family was fast asleep

They went to a tattoo parlor..
N she asked for a tattoo of his name on her nape..
It was quite a painful process..
She held his hand tight throughout..
But the result was a beautiful tattoo on her nape..

They reached home before anyone got up..
N they slept..
Next mrng-
Sw- AAhhh sanskaar slowly Na baba It pains
Sa- okay okay..
B he applies some tube on her neck
Today she tied her hair up..
She was scared about family reaction but they only praised it..

1month later..
Few more sectionshad proceeded in her therapy..
It was slowly but swara was improving...
Sanskaar today gifted her a dress. It was a gawun ..
Next mrng-
They left for a mysterious place...
Sanskaar took swara to place of immense natural beauty.. it was a farmhouse close to a peaceful bank of a river
He made her sit n he sketched her ..
Then he made her stand in front of the mirror held her hand and she held the pencil..
Next was she drew the same scene her standing with him n they painting...
It was her 2nd wish...
She then hugged him tight and he too responded...
Sw- sanskaar thanks a lot yrr..
Sa- shh no need for a thanks ..
He moved close to her lips... thy kissed...
It was a soft kiss yet long... his fingers moved thorough her hair.. n her hands were weaved in his hair...
He soon deepened the kiss...

Slowly removing her dress... he then saw her.. kept her hair on one side n kissed on side of her shoulder.. n then the other. .
Then he pecked her tattoo .. followed by licking her earlobes.. it sent shivers down her spine..
Sanskaar moved more closer .. she turned n opened his shirt ..
They kissed again

A passionate hungry kiss till they were out of breath..he then lifted her placed her own the bed .. soon he was over her .. their lips danced on each other's lips .. she moaned in pain n pleasure..
It was her 3rd wish ... she wanted to complete their relationship in all ways..



Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
raaz19 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Please don't kill her why do I feel this won't end well. ...
Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well harshita u made me cry...it was wonderful update...sansku fullfilled her 3 wishes..it was soo emotional..again in end i cried..out of happiness..update soon..
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum..mast ..hope swara will be Fine assp..continue soon
spatika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update.
swara has blood cancer.
feeling bad for sanskar..
continue soon.
thanks for PM..

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