Broken - a swasan story epilogue pg 30

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Verda_768

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Beautiful update n thanks for PM

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Part-7

Hi all this is part 7. P ls don't kill me after that it was also painful to write for me. Infact I was scared before writing it. Hope u like it. Jai mata di.. all the best to the readers.. n thanks for your appreciation earlier on part 6 and 6b. Do leave ur replies on this part as well.

He broke the hug.

Sa- sold mujhse naraz mat ho Na I can't take that.. pls ... I am sorry n I promise ki sapne mein bhi I won't ever drink..

Sw- I am sorry sanskaar woh bas ..

Sa- shh it's okay..

N they hugged again..

Swara broke the hug.

Sw- wese sanskaar what were u sketching..

Sanskaar showed ..

It was she sleeping..

All the details of her hair on her face.. her saree.. her bangles n what not.. he had worked upon it so beautifully..

Sw- sanskaar.. it's .. it's .

Sa- acha nahi laga kya.

Sw- I can't express sanskaar ki kitna sundar banana h tumne..

Sa- swara u r the light in my life.. mere dark life ko beautiful kar diya h tumne..

Sw- sanskaar..

Sa- I love you swara

Sw- love u too sanskaar..

Sa- swara just give me some more time.. n I will..

Sw- shh sanskaar i have decided to wait all my life.. so take it time n if u can't accept our relationship then too it's fine for me..

Sa- y u love me so much..

Sw- idk..

They laughed a little..

Few weeks later -

Sanskaar felt his wounds healing under the effect of her true love. He wanted to be with her .. tell her that he wants to be there with her, for her and for forever. but waited for the correct timing.. laksh and family got ssuspicious of his room. They knew it had painting but they wanted to view them again afterall they were trying to forgive him. Unfortunately for then sanskaar kept the room locked .

A Friday evening.

Sw-sanskaar tum agaye

Sa-hmm

Sw-do u know kal kya h.

Sa-half day ..

SW- shut up . Kal karvachuth h ..

Sa-what really

Sw-yes..

Sa-so ..

Sw-let's go shopping buddy..

Sa-k..

They left for shopping n he forgot to lock the door.. of his paintings' room..laksh seeking the chance entered along with the family.. all were surprised by the paintings he made .. he described pain heartbeat hurt distrust n then a beautiful small emotion called love..

He described the power of love..

They then opened an Almera.. it had stacks if sketch books .. from the 1st time he drew n there were big boards outside which had his current sketches and painting. Suddenly laksh noticed a dairy in between the racks.

He took it out it was sanskaar's.. he read it..

Tears started escaping his eyes as he turned through the pages..

When the family asked what happened he read it aloud to them in the hall.. it had all about Kavita, kavya and swara.. and how he felt.. the family came to know about each n everything.. y she doesn't put vermilion n Mangalsutra.. y he had Ben so rude..

Su-I never knew my son is so broken..

RP- n we had deepened his scares... we misunderstood him..

Just then swasan were back .. they came to the hall when Laksh slapped sanskaar..

He was shocked along with swara..

L-pagal h tu .kya h yeh sub.. ( showed him the diary)..

Swara was also confused at this..

Sa-did u read it..

L-yes.. tere saath ita subkuch hua n time ek bar bhi nahi socha ki share kare.. akele shut raha..

Sa-mein aap sabko hurt nahi karna chahta tha bus issiliye..

L-ek padegi Na Kante neeche..

Sa-sorry na yrr

Swara was so happy.. laksh hugged sanskaar the family they got to know the reality all the Mus were clear..

Sanskaar asked for an apology n Maheshwari gave it in their own style by beating 1st n then loads of love...

Swara laughed at their antics...

Sa-mom pls Na don't be guilty..pls Dad..

Su-okay challo u go n change n come asap for the dinner...

Sa-(slowly to swara)- tum toh lucky hi yrr mere liye.

Sw- thanks..

Next evening..

Sanskaar didn't eat anything along with swara..

All waited for the chand to come out when sanskaar had a call he immediately left for his room.. 5minutes after that..theoon showed but he was still busy..

After30 minutes

Sa-see Mr I will talk about the other matter later...

He came running all the ladies completed their pooja n were on the dinning table accept for swara who waited for him on the couch..

He came running..

Sa-swara I am sorry woh office se..

Sw-sanskaar it's okay ab chalein..

Sa-nahi swara

Sw-par Sanskaar..

Sa-ese bina sindoor k ... mangalsutra k u will do the pooja

Sw-no will u accept it..

Sanskaar held her wrist n they stood in front of the temple..

Om mangalam bhagwan Vishnu
Mangalam garud dhwaja
Om jai jai om aa..
Mangalam pundarikaaksham
Manglaaye tano Hari

He put vermilion on her forehead.. n tied mangalsutra around her neck...

Aaj ibaadat...
Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi
Ru-ba-ru ho gayi
Jo maangi thi.. jo maangi thi
Uss duaa se guftgu ho gayi

Swara all her dreams came true .. the person she loved was out of pain.. he loved her..he accepted her...

Aa..

Mere Maula, Mere Maula
Mere Maula, Mere Maula
Tera shukriya

All she did was thanking the Almighty for this...

Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi
Ru-ba-ru ho gayi

Dard ke andheron se
Aa gaye ujaalon mein
Ishq ke charagon ka
Noor hai khayalon mein (x2)

Sanskaar was a man who moved from darkness to light n swara she was the moon in his life...

Nazron se teri chaakl
Dil pe raffu ho gayi
Dil pe raffu ho gayi

Mere Maula, Mere Maula
Mere Maula, Mere Maula
Tera shukriya

Aaj ibaadat ru-ba-ru ho gayi
Om mangalam bhagwan vishnu (Maula..)
Mangalam garuda dhwaja (Mere Maula..)
Om mangalam pundarikaaksham (Maula..)
Manglaaye tano Hari (Maula...)

They went upstairs n broke the fast.. sanskaar hugged swara.. after they broke the fast... today he had the best feeling in his heart n all was because of her...

Suddenly she lost her conscious..

Sa- took her to their room n called the doctor..

15 days later -

From around karvachuth time he noticed swara was feeling exhausted at times without much exertion, he saw her loosing weight as well.

Sa- swara I Do not want any excuse

Sw- oar sanskaar mujhe doctor k pas nahi jana.

Sa- swara challo..

She made a pout face but he lifted her up n forced took her there..

Doctor suggested some test..

2 days later in doctor's cabin..

Sanskaar went to take reports..

Sa- doctor is everything fine ..

Doc- no Mr Maheshwari.. matter is quite serious..

Sa- what happened...

Doc- Mr Maheshwari it wife is suffering from.. (deep sigh) blood cancer...

Sa- what..

Sanskaar was left broken and shattered.. all over again...

Doc- I am sorry Mr Maheshwari but that's the truth.. the only good news is it's in a durable stage .. we have to start the treatment asap...

Sanskaar simply nodded his head n moved... he reached home..

In the hall

R- lo swara khalo..

Sw- nahi yr ragini abhi reports ayegi aur sab normal hoga .. tum dekhna..

Just then sanskaar entered -

Sa- swara... (his throat chocked)

Sw- sanskaar.. what happened...

He simply went down n hugged her.. he hugged her tight.. n then he was weeping..

Sw- sanskaar...

But he gave no reply...

Aaj ro len de ve jee bharke
Meri saanson se daga karke
Tu gaya mujhko fanaa karke ve jaaniya

Mera zakhm-e-dil hara karde
Iss gham ki ab dawa karde
Nazron ko ba-wafa karde ve jaaniya

Aadat hai teri
Ya tera nasha hai
Kaise bataaun tujhko rehbara

Ve aaj ro len de ve jee bharke
Meri saanson se daga karke
Tu gaya mujhko fanaa karke ve jaaniya

Saanson ko teri zaroorat
Kare kaise byaan koi
Aankhon mein hai aisi rangat
Ke roshan ho jahaan koi

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

No please not like this ..I am so sad for her...

God hope she gets better...nice update just like the last...Full of emotion and loved the family healing...

Update other ff soon...hope studies is well...

Take care

Raz

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Goldie

@Goldie93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Omg..awsum.bt plzz dnt brk Sanskaae agn..dnt let Swara to happen anything..hope to see more swasan scns nw wid some Romance ka tadks in it..do continue soon n a longer part Plzz

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

No no no plzzz harshita..dont do this..after sooo long they got happiness n it is slipping from their hand again...im all sad n crying..very bad...do some magic..plzzz..want swasan happy...

Talia

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spatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM.

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

Soo you decided to make us wet our pillow... this is not fair yaar... Soo much of pain for sanskaar.. i cant take it.. plz let him enjoy his life... aling with his love...

With love...

Kam...

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ruhana

@Aahana133

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Awsm...
Finally when things are going to be correct new twist come.update next part asap.can't wait for seeing swara reaction.

Edited by Aahana133 - 9 years ago

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

Awsome update
finally all mu clr & sanskar accept swara
but plz don't do this ... nothing happen to swara plzzz ... poor sanskar
loved it
update soon

thnks for pm