Broken - a swasan story epilogue pg 30

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Prologue -
He stood at the entrance of the MM .. he was drunk.. she stood up sensing his condition.. his eyes turned red in anger seeing her.. he came towards her in full speed n pushed her towards a pillar .. "what the hell is the thing u want?? " He questioned her , pressing his face b/w his fingers.. his family tried to pull him back but today it was more than enough for him ..
"Leave me sanskaar.. pls... " she pleaded.."I don't want anything." ...

"Oh really!!, Then y r u here .. u r not my wife.. atleast I don't consider u , then y the hell r u here Miss Swara Boss" he replied sarcastically ..

"Mind it .. I am Mrs. Swara sanskaar Maheshwari.. " she replied jerking his hand..

"Oh so u r so called Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari... " he said holding her hair...

" Only for u ... I am so called.. for me this relationship matters a lot..." she replied struggling to free her hair from his grip

He smirked.. "so y not to complete this in all senses... " saying this he drank the remaining alcohol from his bottle.. " I u earlier only not to mess with Sanskaar Maheshwari.. but now I will show you what a beast I am .. "

He left her hair n continued -" last time.1 last time I am saying go away n stay away from me.. I am not a person to love or stay with.."

" U r .. but the only thing is u r scared of love.." she said looking directly into his eyes...

"So u claim to love me.. so let's complete ur love story today..." saying this he held her hand breaking her bangles.. blood oozeout from their hands .. his was bleeding along with her wrist..

" Leave her sanskaar.. " .. "what r u doing" .. yelled his family for.long ...

"Accepting her as my wife.. I am doing what u all wanted me to do .. " he replied n pulled her along with him to their room...

"Sanskaar leave her or it won't be good..." it was RP and dp .
" When I left her u roared on me .. belated me now when I am accepting her u r again roaring upon me.. that's not done.." he replied in disgust.. he felt disgusted at himself for what he was going to do but today.. he was going to do that...

He pushed her inside their room.. or rather his room.. followed by lashing the door behind him...


" This is what u want Na .. now here I will claim u .. " he said coming close to her she moved back until she touched the window.. she was about to fall when he pulled her n they both fell on the floor.. he was on top of her his breath touched her skin..

"Once more.. just the last of last chance.. I am saying go away or u will feel the worst.. " he replied moving close to her.

"Never ever .. u can do what you want but I know u can't touch me like That.. u may call urself a beast but u aren't.." she.saud looking into his eyes.

" Oh really..then let me show u " he moved close to her lips and kissed her .. it was a rough kiss.. she responded back .. n he soon deepened the kiss.. it ended when he bit her lip..

"Want to test me or is it enough.. get Lost.. " he questioned.. expecting her to run away..
" I won't back off .. do what u want to" she answered n his eyes turned more red ...

"U r mad .. but now it's ur wish..." he tore her blouse.. almost removed her saree.. n started leaving a trait of wet kisses on her shoulder.. n then a vampire kiss on her neck..

He did that but felt more disgusted at himself n hence got up.. she too stood up .. wiping her tears.. he simply covered her with his blazer.. he couldn't meet her eyes...he moved to the cupboard n gave her another dress..


His family was banging the door again n again.. as if they will break it .. he pulled another bottle n started drinking again..

She canged n came out.. he made her sit .. banged her hand... but when she tried doing the same he jerked her hand.. n Instead broke his bottle n deepened his cut ..

He smiled when blood droplets started flowing from his hand..
"Sanskaar.. yeh ... " she was speaking when he cut..
"Sshhh I deserve this.. I am bad .. I am worst ..y don't u go away like all others did.. " ...
"Because I love you" she replied teary eyed...
He smiled.. n sat on he floor.. again enjoying his wound..


Hi all this is again something new don't kill me I will update the other stories simultaneously .. this is also a very short story hope u like it .. this was the prologue I will update the characters n part 1asap.. pls do leave ur replies
. I am egar to know ur views on the story...

Hope u enjoyed reading it.. thanks for sparing your time for this ..

Waiting for your response

With love
-Harshita




Index-
Prologue - above
Character sketch,- down pg1
Part1- pg 1
Part2- pg 8
Paer3- pg 10
Part4- pg14
Part5- pg17
Part6- pg 19
Part6b - pg 19
Part7 -- pg 24
Part8- pg 26
Part9- pg 28
Epilogue -pg30
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch -
Sanskaar Maheshwari - business tycoon.. a man broken from deep inside due to his past .. betrayed when he tried to trust... betrayed when he tried to love.. back stabbed when he tried to Help.. dumped again when he tried to move on.. his heart have not only been broken but it had been crushed and stabed brutally.. his heart now doesn't beat but it bleeds.. tears have a fixed place in his eyes all night .. he isn't rude but his past transformed his soft mild caring heart into a broken, bleeding one.. his past has captivated his mind so much that when true love entered his life he at 1st cannot feel it.. when felt he cannot accept it.. the fear of being heartbroken again turns him into a drunkard after his marriage with swara boss... he has no faith left in love or marriage but still gets married to this girl under family pressure


Swara Boss- she is the daughter of shekhar are sharmishta gadodia who died soon after the birth of their second daughter swara. Her dadi Maa hates her considering her unlucky. She denied giving the girl name of her father but her dida saved her from the rage n haterate of her dadi.. she gave her the name of her mother "Boss".. she lives with her Dada dadi n dida .. believes in love.. a simple sober girl.. well educated, well mannered... her dida n sister is her world.. but everything changed when she met her husband - sanskaar Maheshwari... the effect of his wounds made her life miserable.. she fell in love with this man at 1st sight .. she accepted him once her dida agreed for the alliance..




MF -
All same.

GF-
Dadi - hates swara .. considers her unlucky..
Dada - neutral about his grand daughters.. love both swaragini equally
Ragini - married to laksh Maheshwari bro of sanskaar Maheshwari.. lobes her sister unconditionally..

BF-
Dida- swara's caretaker.. love ragini as well.. sweet lady and is soft hearted ..


Other characters -
Kavita Roy - Sanskaar's 1st love.. betrayed him for money .
Rajat - kavita's bf ..
Kavya malhotra- sanskaar's ex fiance .. ran from the mandap along with the jwellery for the sake of her happiness n needs played with his feelings..
Sahil sengupta - kavya's lover.. with whom she eloped...


Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Part-1


Hi all thanks for your response on the prologue here is the 1st part .. hope u all enjoy it pls do leave ur comments on this part as well I am egar to know ur views.. thanks for reading in advance..


The story opens in the gadodia mention.. ragini, laksh, sujata, ap, dp, RP, pari and adarsh along with dida,dadi and Dada are in the living room..
The Maheshwari's had brought the alliance of their son sanskaar for the daughter of the Gadodias swara boss. There were questions regarding both the people.. in the opposite families but none dared to ask..
The MF was confused at swara using her mother's name when all seemed okay. Dadi's attitude towards swara was strange. She had agreed for the alliance 1st n also without meeting sanskaar.

The questions in the minds of dida and Dada were about sanskaar.. y the family couldn't wait for 2 more days and get this boy with them. And who doesn't know ab his 1st bride who ran from the mandap.. but all both of them knew was that Maheshwari's could be trusted. N seeing the family members and their 1st damad laksh they felt assured of sanskaar being a suitable guy for their daughter swara. Even though dida and Dada wanted to meet the boy once but then they agreed for the alliance.

The Maheshwari's assured that sanskaar will meet them after 2days when he returns from Sydney where he was handling a company project..

Swara was standing there and her lips curled into a smile when her family agreed for the alliance. Ragini and laksh noticed it n moved towards her.
R-swara.. kya hua y so blushing blushing..
SW- Shut up yrr ragini..
L-Aree y Bhai don't u remember how u teased us on our wedding.. wese I have something for my sali Sheba ..
sw-what
L-sanskaar ka no. Aur uski photo
Swara turned red...
SW-kya laksh jiju aap bhi..
Laksh sent his pictures and no. On her phone..

L-dekho I know you my desperate saali ji tumse do din wait toh nahi hoga but still kya Karen toh time nikalne k liye it's better to look at his pictures..

The MF knew what all happened with sanskaar.. everything about his 1st love but they never expected a rebellious reaction of sanskaar on this marriage.. ragini n Laksh had married after an year or so of that incident. Hence ragini too didn't know completely about it. All she knew was sanskaar was a kind hearted person, a gentle man who could not hurt anyone.

All were happy for swara and sanskaar. MF too liked the girl n hence they accepted the alliance at the 1st sight..

2 days later-
Sanskaar had returned from Sydney..
Sa-mom dad contract pakka hogaya h .. deal is done..
Su-sanskaar tu agya chore je le mithayi kha..
Sa-par kyun mom..
Su-kha toh..
He eat it n then sujata hugged his son ..
Su-sanskaar thara rishta pakka hogaya .. h je dekh kitti achi ladki h..
Sa-what ??
Su-haan
Sa- mom mein yeh shadi nahi kar sakta..
RP - Sunna Na Bhaisa .. wapas wahi baat je toh acha hua hum Jake riste ki baat khud kar aaye warna je chora toh kabhi Na manta..
Sa-aur Na hi maanunga dad.. I don't want to get into this fake thing .. marriage,love , pain, betrayals.. I have already had enough of it pls..
AP- par sanskaar ek bar ladki SE.mil toh lo ..
Sa-bahut achi ladki h .. Sanskaari h.. gharelu h, .. etc etc .. pls badi Maa apne kavya k liye bhi yahi kaha tha Na .. aur woh insari baton ka mazak banake chalo gayi.. so give me some other point to convince.. and if not then tell I have disagreed .
Su- but y sanskaar..
Sa- mom pls .. no...

Now RP lost his temper n slapped his son hard..

RP - u have to do the engagement tomorrow n yes no need to talk to or meet the girl ..n today u will see her n meet her family nothing else..
Sa- but dad..
RP - y that's an order ..
Sa- u r a dictator dad...
RP - ahh I am but u have to marry Swara ..
Sa- swara what??
RP - Boss ... a cultured marwadi girl ..

Saying this rp left..

Sa- have he lost it.. swara boss -marwadi .. how is it possible.. she is a Bengali I suppose..
L- Bhai don't worry she is ragini's sister...
Sa- ragini ask her I am not ready... ask her to back off..
R- par sanskaar.. humari behen ka dil tut jayega ... she is very innocent.. since 2 days she is asking about u .. when will you come...
Sa- mujhse shadi hui toh uski life kharab ho jayegi..

N sanskaar left leaving a dumbstruck ragini behind..
R- laksh humari behen.. she loves sanskaar... n this..
L- don't worry ragini we will convince him ..
R- r u sure
L- 100%

The mf Reached his room and tried all methods to convince him from talking to emotional blackmail to warning him to marry.. they forcefully made him agree..

Sa-(monologue)- swara boss u r being forced on me ur love is being forced but remember marrying u doesn't mean to accept u.. I won't ever accept u..


A month later -

Pandit - ab vadhu ki mang mein sindur bharen..
Sanskaar put vermilion in swara's partition.. he doesn't even look at her n hence it fell on her nose.
Their families were happy to see this positive sign at the beginning of the relationship..

Pandit - ab var vadhu ko mangalsutra pehnayenge...
Sanskaar tied it around her neck...
Pandit - vivah sampann hua ab aap dono apne SE badon ka ashirwad Lein..
Dadi felt relieved that now the unlucky girl is out of her house.. Dada n dida were emotional..


Swara and Sanskaar sat in a car n it left for mm .. swara was crying but sanskaar was emotionlessly sitting in the car...

N reaching the mm family welcomed the new member.. they then played some games and then few rasam were done with swara.. in that time sanskaar went away .. he drove his car to an empty street n drunk a full bottle of alcohol..

Meanwhile in the mm ragini n Laksh left for Sydney as someone needs to go and take care of the further process of the deal..

Laksh and ragini left.. sujata handed over swara 2glasses of kesar milk n asked her to wait for sanskaar in her room..

Sanskaar was drinking n thinking about betrayals he got.. the pain in his heart n he knew if this time it broke then he will die.. n he wasn't interested in Lossing have life for no reason.. hence he there n then decided to make this girl run away from him herself..

In sanskaar's room swara was sitting on the bed waiting for him to come.. she saw her bag kept near the couch..

She then felt nervous again she and sanskaar never got a chance to talk with each other n today they are married..

Just then the door of other room swung wide open breaking her chain of thoughts...
Her lips curled into a smile..

In gadodia mansion dida slept peacefully and happily after feeling that her shona is married to a perfect partner.. she felt happy n dosed off into a deep sleep.. so deep that she didn't bother to wake up again ...

In mm .. sanskaar's room..

He entered n saw her ..
Swara was feeling shy ..
He came close to her .. she expected him to lift her Vail but instead she felt a force on her elbow.. it was him .. he held it very tight..tight enough to make her moan in pain...
SW- AAhhh sanskaar..
Sa- shh!!

She noticed him he was drunk..
Sa- get up...

Swara got up .. he immediately pushed her out of the room..
Before she could understand anything he threw her bag out as well..
SW- Sanskaar...
Sa- shut up...

He then threw the tray containing milk out close to her feet .. the glass broke n milk fell on the ground...
Swara was beyond shocked.. tears escaped her eyes..
She cleaned the home .. the mf was fast asleep.. he sat beside the door drinking another bottle..

Swara again tried to talk to him. She slightly knocked the door..
SW- sanskaar..
But she didn't git any response.. after an hour of trying he opened the door .
Sanskaar pulled her inside..
Sa- dekho there is nothing left which belongs to you so get lost n don't call me again.. I want to spend my night with this rum .. n not u got it..

He again pushed her out .. he slid by the door lashing it.. n drinking another bottle of alcohol.. on the other side was swara trying to understand the situation.. she sat outside the door and cried a lot.. covering her mouth so as the sobs cannot be heard..

There dida stopped breathing and left her for forever.. alone here in this cruel world to fight...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Nice prologue.. Update soon 👍🏼
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Interesting story
nice prolouge
update soon
loved it

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Nice story keep it up👍🏼 n thanks for pm😊
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice prologue.. Update soon 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: anu012

Interesting story
nice prolouge
update soon
loved it

thnks for pm

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Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Verda_768

Nice story keep it up👍🏼 n thanks for pm😊

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