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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Res for 2😈

🤗 ooohhh that was laser fast 🤗

Hope you like it, let me know. Am eager and rather anxious.

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Sakura24
My 4100th post, reserving to comment on the second part of this TS :) I hope I'm allowed to make a reservation? *Puppy face*

Unres

Viji dearest,

Shades of gray are ever so fascinating aren't they? Forgotten of the light he had finally grasped Sanskar is back in his bitter darkness but even in his oblivion, that darkness no longer feels home, there is something amiss, After all he is no longer a creature of the night, this dark world he seeks shelter in, now sees him as a stranger...He has to feel out of place there. Wonderful, wonderful portrayal!

So we're aiming at a five shot? What a delight! Five pieces of your absolute clever and charming writing is my dream come true! Bring it on!!

I really liked the tour inside Sanskar the evil's mind in this one. The almost mechanical precision with which he thinks, how he analyzes his memories...it sends a shiver down your spine at the cold edge of perfection in his intellect.

Those sublime moments of childhood and teen years were masterfully stroked, but their vividness now dulled in a haze of unfounded accusations. What I liked most was him feeling that he did not feel the all consuming rage anymore. And even after trying he could not grasp it. Kavita has certainly faded into a faint memory...almost a beautiful dream with tragic nightmarish ending. There is a dull ache, but no more an open wound. How very brilliant!

I loved the way family reactions were presented, from the group hug of Sujata, Annapurna and Uttara to the slight undercurrents of tension running in Sanskar's head while he met Lakshya and Durga Prasad. Then the absolute moment of the update where Swara finally met him.

I'm sure the days leading to this had been the worst of her gay young life. The darkest hours. It's no wonder that she felt a lethal level of glee at seeing him standing happy and healthy in front of her. The muscle memory was a very good interjection at this point. Although consciously he is wary of her can Sanskar Maheshwari ever put distance between him and a Swara who is in complete heart broken state? After all her tears had been his undoing all those months ago, forcing him to reflect back to what he was doing...was he right to toy with her life...we are back to that phase after all.

And finally, the sparkling jewel of the update! Ragini the fairy god mother! As I said in beautiful scars, Ragini is nothing without her instincts and with one glance she knows Sanskar is not the one who they lost...but a darker version. And thankfully she feels she owes them a lot and hence she will now be her sister's shield for a change.

It would be wonderful to read about. A white queen Ragini and a black knight Sanskar battling it out, before the angel of his life would bring him back on path. Can't wait for the next update but in a way I'm glad it won't be the weekend. As I would then be too busy to give it the attention it deserves. Nevertheless eagerly waiting.

Loads of love,

Saku

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Saku, Lanny 🤗 🤗

So very touched by your wonderful comments. Am feeling almost child like glee at the fact that you read and commented even before my pm's were out. 😊

Will reply in detail tomorrow, am completely exhausted today, physically and emotionally (though in a most happy way, if that makes sense). 😊

In the meantime...Lanny: your remark about the 6 paras on Sunny boy made me chuckle with (wicked) delight. 😳😈 He certainly DOES have an aura, doesn't he? And yes...I plan a lot of Sanskaar---Ragini shadow boxing going forward. 😉

Saku...so overjoyed that you liked the "Fairy Godmother" bit 😊 Yes, it's going to be a Grey Knight Sanskar versus the White Queen Ragini. With Swara holding the aces, of course. Who else but she, can bring him back to light and joy. 😳😉

Loads of Love

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Res viji
I am sorry viji for not doing unres in your stories but little busy in studies so sorry will unres after sometimes

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: lucky.m
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oh viji 🤗..this was awesome..

sanskaar sanskaar and sanskaar ..It just went on..and I can read volumes on this guy ..oh god ..the way you have etched his features ..I feel like falling for him all over again ❤️ it was love darlin😳 and how you described his memories staring as kid playing hide and seek and then moving on to each stage ..👏👏👏

and back to his planning and plotting..and I titally love how you described his unsuccessful attempts of sanksaar to remember his memories with kavita how they no longer hold on to him and his mind and heart wound around HER ..😳

And hero makes an entry back ..and that hug ...I can imagine swara running down and hugging him full force which I wished sanskaar would do when swara made an entry post ml ..but loving this version ..the hug was again love and sanskaar couldn't help but get flooded in those feelings engulfing him ...😳

and ragini ..knows her friend very well . she sensed which others couldnt ..

lovely update viji ..looking for next one😊

love

lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Lucky sweetheart 🤗

So touched that you loved this chapter. Will reply in detail tomorrow...but Sanskaar certainly is special, no? 😳 Glad you liked his thoughts on Kavita, and his feelings for Swara.

Lots of Love

Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

I'm reduced to a warm mush by reading your description of Sanskar. 😆

So aptly put

And they met too, I really wasn't expecting that.

I love how every fiber in his body remembers her even if his conscious doesn't.

Beautiful chapter

Nandini🤗

(Sorry about the rather evident shortened nature of my comments as I really don't have much them on my hands now. But I love every bit of the story and ill definitely shower my appreciation soon. ❤️ )

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Hi Guys 🤗

Thanks a ton to those who have liked and commented even before my pm's are out. 🤗 Am rolling those out shortly.

Also, I know I'm lagging a bit behind on individual replies, both on this thread as well as my immediately preceding OS "Her Platinum Day of Love ". Please know that I am reading all your comments with a lot of joy; they make me feel incredibly touched and blessed, and very motivated indeed. Took time since I had to update my replies on my previous 3 OS's as well ( which I have completed as of yesterday).

Shall start off my individual replies on both threads tomorrow. Your support and encouragement means a lot. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hai viji🤗

First of all sorry for my late reply.

The second part heart touching one.A person who lost his memories and he is trying to recollect it...

Sanskar lost all the beautiful memories in his life.And he was slowly trying to recollect them.His childhood the most happiest part in a person's life and teenage...the time he spent with his family...especially his parents and lucky...

And the first love in his life...

This time also a unknown face was flashing in his mind none other was that his soulmate.

His return journey to home...

All people in mm was at the zenith of happiness.They get their son back.sanskar is back..

And the swasan sequence..she was not in his memory.but she was full in soul.

It was a awesome update..

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Thanks for the pm

With lots of love

Shamina

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago