hey Viji,
awesome concept...what would have happened if sanskar would have lost his memory instead of swara, interesting very interesting...an alternate universe...😳 on second thought isn't it the alternate universe of what would have happened if swara would have failed to show sanskar the right path...not completely but in a way...or is it just my wishful thinking...?
oh so sanskar hasn't lost his common sense along with his memory...great 😛 and he is not shouting khooni khooni as well...I love it...u know I always wondered that why swara never thought that why sanskar's face is so bright in her hazy memories...thank god sanskar did that...!
so he can't focus on kavita because of swara..😈 can I laugh plz...? 😊 and he is jealous from lucky because of swara 😛 and than there is ragini who knew sanskar in few minutes and why not if sanskar is the guru than she is the best cheli.( I m really happy that in your story everyone has basic characteristics unlike serial) I just loved all these small small moments.😳
now the best moment, swasan reunion.. sanskar becoming numb with only one glance at swara...and sanskar's mind losing its first battle against his heart...❤️ perfect just perfect.
I m just loving this story so much...can't wait for the next chapter.😳 and thanks for the pm.😊
lots of love,
Helee.
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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