SwaSan SS: The Postern of Fate: Epilogue 2 (Final) updated on Page 48

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hey my dearest Viji!!!🤗
Finally unresed.😃
Awesome update!! Superb update!!!👏👏
The kiddo's room decoration was written so wonderfully.😉 The way Sanskar was teasing Swara was nice.😛 SwaRagini's little bro Ahir is such a sweet and joyful baby.😳😃 Awww!! Little Ahir adored his Sanskar jeeju and Lakshya jeeju so much!!!😳😳 Specially his Sanskar jeeju.😉 Sanskar's way to stop Swara's teasing was really exciting!!😈 As a result, their kiss was...☺️☺️ And after that his reply to Swara that "Tum meri biwi ho, tumse kya sharmana."☺️ OMG!!! Already I was in SwaSan dreamland after watching this Friday's episode where we got an unexpected lip kiss from our Sanky to our Swara followed by a similar reply.☺️ And after reading ur update, I just can't get over from my SwaSan obsession.😳 Laksh tried to tease Swara with kido's room decoration but got mock glare from her instead.😆 Really loved SanLak's bonding.😳 Swara is so excited for the arrival of the new member.😳😆 And they way the sisters reacted to the baby's kick was really delighting!!😳 U know, while reading, I was thinking that it was Swara who is going to have the baby, but then after reading the kick part, I got to know that it was Ragini who is going to have one.😳😆 When Swara asked Sanskar to feel the baby's kick, he was embarrassed.😆 RagLak became emotional while feeling their baby's kick.😊 So RagLak's baby will call SwaSan as Bade Papa and Badi Maa.😃 Thank god li'l Ahir didn't have to call SwaSan, his big siso and jeeju by those names.😉 Loved Laksh care for his preggy wifey.😉 Oho!! My Sanskar's mind became asanskari when he saw his wifey's slim midriff through her sari's pallu!!😈 He couldn't stop his uncontrollable testosterone!!!🤣 And started doing his asanskari work.😉 But our Swara madam suddenly realized that they were in the kitchen at the middle of the night.😆 Awww!! How cutely Sanskar was requesting Swara for their Baby Making Practice Session!!😳😆 Loved they way how SwaSan were teasing each other and were enjoying each other's company so much!!!😳😳 This epilogue was really a light headed one.😃 A perfect ending.👍🏼 Loved it.❤️ And thanks for the pm.😃
With love and lots of hugs!!!🤗🤗
Aheli.

Aheli sweetheart 🤗

So very touched by your comment my dear...you really made my evening. 😊 I shall reply in detail later...but in the meantime, that little confusion about who was expecting a baby...that was intended. 😆😉 I did make it seem that it was Swara who was expecting in the beginning, with her immense involvement in decorating the room with stickers, going crib shopping etc. And then, it was RagLak who were expecting the baby, not SwaSan. 😉😆

Will be back for a detailed revert later, dear. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#482

Vijji😳😳

Blushing like an idiot here.

This is a res..I don't know what I have to say on this. Let me collect my thoughts..

Love

UN-RES

Dear vijji, 🤗

I thought you said that the second epilogue would be in a different tone than the first. But in reality it Rather brought more fiery things to life. 😳

So Sanskaar is Aahir's favourite? Well Banda hai hi aisa. As swara aptly says 'who would not notice and adore those perfectly chiselled features.' My my! Even Michelangelo's perfection couldn't make to reproduce him. If it were I would buy it for sure. But enough of varun kapoor now. Let's not get deviated for our own good!!

I loved the bonding that Sanskaar and lakshya's developed into. And how they both cared for little Aahir, each in their own way. I'm sure Aahir will always look up to these two as he grows up. And these three will make a good pact. More of a father-son kind of relation than that of brother in laws. Hmm... I'll miss reading now. More than I thought.

There was a moment of confusion when you said swara and Ragini were feeling the little bump and swara just called for Sanskaar. I couldn't understand who was pregnant for a min because Sanskaar was embarrassed and lakshya took a run for it. And then I understood how clearly innocent and excited swara is about the baby. Oh Sanskaar I guess she is in for it. She didn't voice it out like you did but she so wants to. But yes it was never in swara to voice out her wishes. Her wishes somehow seem to get into sanskaar's mind even before she realises them for herself.

Men should help women in theie little things vijji! It's good for both of them in so many levels. No pun intended. Really! It makes things so easy! No pun again!! Lol.

Okay, I was really nice to see them helping each other in little things like they were. But the one that followed was just too sweet. There were a sundry of tones in the way he spoke sexy, sweet, teasing. I was reading it over dinner with family. Imagine the kind of difficulty I had to go through when I say I had to shut my phone close right away to stop myself from looking like a fool grinning at nothing. Yet I ended up grinning at nothing.😃😳

It was a marvellous journey from the beginning to the end. (the end being absolutely the best) thankyou so much for delivering this to us poor souls in the time it was so needed.

Looking forward for more, as always

Love

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: bennetlizzy
Vijji😳😳
Blushing like an idiot here.

This is a res..I don't know what I have to say on this. Let me collect my thoughts..

Love
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Nalini 🤗🤗

☺️ So glad you were blushing after reading this. 😳😆

Lots of Love

Viji

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Aheli sweetheart 🤗

So very touched by your comment my dear...you really made my evening. 😊 I shall reply in detail later...but in the meantime, that little confusion about who was expecting a baby...that was intended. 😆😉 I did make it seem that it was Swara who was expecting in the beginning, with her immense involvement in decorating the room with stickers, going crib shopping etc. And then, it was RagLak who were expecting the baby, not SwaSan. 😉😆

Will be back for a detailed revert later, dear. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

No problem Viji. Plzz take ur time.😳😳

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blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#485

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Veena 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton dear, your feedback has been so very motivating right through this SS. Yeah, it was a slightly different genre hence I was wondering if it might stand out against the previous 5 chappies and the first epilogue. But then, with all the lovely feedback from you guys, and the fact that there was a story continuum falling into this one, persuaded me. 😊🤗

So glad you loved the bonding between the brothers in law. I do envision Ahir Gadodia as one really cute kid. 😊

Lakshya will grow into fatherhood. 😊 Much as he has grown to be a good hubby, and a supportive and loyal brother again.

I did want to place that bit of uncertainty in the beginning...as to whose baby was being expected. 😆 It would have seemed like Swara was expecting in the beginning...and then it was Ragini after all. 😉😳

So glad you loved it, my dear. Very touched by your warm words. I definitely plan to write more pieces on SwaSan...but may not be too soon. In the interim, I will continue to be an active reader. 😊 Look forward to your further works on the forum. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji

Viji

In a hurry I left out the interesting part...the pregnancy one. It really worked out well. I din doubt even for a second abt swara not being the pregnant one but you surprised me. Good twist. A reluctant sanskar...for feeling the baby's kick... that was the best point which raised the curiosity factor.

Edited by blindassassin - 9 years ago

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#486

Vijii🤗

This is my 1200th post. I'm so happy it is here.

Unres

Wait! It's not swara and sanskar who's having the baby! Man you had me there. 😆

All those stickers, the crib hunting and whatnot it wasn't for their Kid. But somehow that makes it better. Them doing all that for their nephew/ niece, it just shows how much all of their personal relationships have blossomed and strengthened. And that's just splendid. 😳

As always I adore your Raglak bits. I don't know how you do it but you make them sound so good that I sometimes forget what they were like initially.

I love it when couples do normal household chores together.😳

It always seems more personal and I loved reading those bits.

And sansku has indeed become a joru ka gulam. A rather naughty one I must add. His asanskaari thoughts though.😆

Such a happy, blissful piece. They're all so happy that we feel happy too.

What a lovely wrap up to a wonderful story. ❤️

So beautifully written. I loved this glimpse into their future. Looks very promising😉😆

Viji thank you so very much for giving such a beautiful story on this wonderful couple. This story remains one of the best I've read to date. I love you for writing this 🤗🤗

Cheers

Nandu

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#487

viji

res for epilogue 2🤗

Unres

Oh god...How do I contain all this happiness in my heart reading such beautiful part on our darlins..It just..I am going all awww ..and have this wide stupid grin on my face all along and cheeks blushing a lil with antics of asanskaari sanskaar ..All this together at once..Khusi se maarne ka irada hain kya darlin😆

Swara all in for baby ka shopping for ragya's kid ..aww .It reminds me of how much potential these four can hold together if executed properly ..it was such a perfect family setting ..😊

Sanskaar might soon be running to feel the kick of his and swara's baby😆 where as here he was a bit apprehensive ..and joru ka ghulam ..these two sisters have definitely tied these both borthers to their pallus😆

and you got in shomi ka kid .one more awwie, and such a cute name ..and he loves sanskaar just like swara said ..who can resist the charmer ..😳😳 Jaanu meri jaan main tujhe kurbaan ..hayee my sunny😳❤️ and upar se you describe him in your words and he becomes even more irresistibly .Taras khao bacho pe viji 😆

Yet one more perfect part fitting in perfectly👏👏 awesomeness at its best ⭐️👏👍🏼

Just loved it to the core and I am gonna sleep in peace in swasan land ..all thanks to you🤗🤗

Love Loads

Lucky

PS; again ..one more perfect placement of sunny shutting up swara in delicious yum way and the placement od dailogues ...Bang on👏 like always.juts took me back to the scene⭐️

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Viji
In a hurry I left out the interesting part...the pregnancy one. It really worked out well. I din doubt even for a second abt swara not being the pregnant one but you surprised me. Good twist. A reluctant sanskar...for feeling the baby's kick... that was the best point which raised the curiosity factor.

Thanks dear. 🤗 Was grinning to myself while putting in that 'twist' of sorts. Yeah, Sanskaar's complete embrassment at being asked to feel the baby's movements was the dead give away...and also in a smaller sense, his going along for the crib selection more because Swara asked him to. 😊

Loads of Love

Viji