Finding sanskaar.... a swasan story epilogue up pg17 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Awesome update harshitha. 👏
Loved it.
Again this sahil.. 😡
Poor swasan.. 😭
What will happen to them now..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Nice update and what the he'll...not again...
Sahil leave a them alone...

Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Hey Harshu,😊
Awesome update.👏 Oh God!! Hate Sahil to the core!!!😡😡 How dare he touch Swara and talked all disgusting thing about Sanskar??😡 And he even slapped Ragini!!😭 Such a disgusting fellow!!🤢 Yayy!! Finally SwaSan met!! And Sanskar got to know about Swara's pregnancy.😃😃 But that psycho Sahil took Sanskar somewhere along with him!!??😡😡 Oh God!! Plzz Save Sanskar.😭 Update soon dear and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Harshita baby awesome...
Lovely chapter...finally swasan met briefly but atleast both know that other is fine...

Overall chapter was exciting n thrilling...

Loved it...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Part-6


Hi all again huge apologies for not replying to ur precious comments n replys.. I am so glad you read me n liked the story so this is the last part n after this will be the epilogue... hope u like the story.. pls do leave ur replys I love reading them n knowing ur opinions... thanks for reading in advanced.. also loads of thanks to buddies who left bulky comments even when I couldn't reply... so here with this I start the last part of the story n also I am sorry if it's sad ..


Swara and raglak were in the car when swara was asking laksh about where is sanskaar n y n where r they going laksh played the recorded audio of sahil on his phone..

Sahil-" twinkle twinkle little star
A trio is finding sanskaar
Reach the place of the beginning not too far"


SW- laksh kya h yeh sab

L- pata nahi swara he is talking in riddles.. god knows what this man wants..

SW- toh abhi hum...

R- manali ja rahe h...

Manali, in the hotel room -
Laksh had secretly informed the police they tried tracing the number but sahil was smart enough to change the sim cards n call the next time...

Swara raglak n police were there waiting for his call...

Meanwhile in a dark place sahil was moving around sanskaar .. sahil was talking to him n made him feel angry and irritated not on sahil but himself.. he felt the most helpless person..

Sahil-u know what? Sanskaar u r useless.. tumhare kesa admi toh kisi ka pati bhi kehlane k kayak nahi h.. I don't understand y swara loves a paralyzed man like u.. y she wants u back
.. she should throw u out n come to me ... wese tumhe aur tumhare hone wale bacche ko marke mein swara Honeymoon par...

At this sanskaar lost his temper.. he 1st time shouted under rage...
Sa-sahil.. shut up...

Sahil-ohohoho... mein toh dar gaya...

Sa-Dario.. kam SE kam mujhse nahi toh bhagwan toh Daro.

Sahil- shut up u bloody bas***d.. wese let me show swara how useless is the person she is dying for..

Sahil opened n recorded a vedio...
Sahil here made fun of sanskaar.. tried to talk nonsense about swara which sanskaar stopped but he slapped sanskaar after that so bad that he fell down from the wheel chair with his paralyzed body...

On seeing the vedio... n on seeing sanskaar's pathetic condition swara almost broke down...

As if this wasn't enough... sahil sent another vedio... his men brutally beating sanskaar.. who was paralyzed n could not even respond them... blood.came out of his mouth when o ne of sahil's men hit his stomach..

sw-sanskaar... ragini laksh yeh kya chahta h kyun mere sanskaar k peeche pads h..

After that there was a call...

Sahil- kesa laga vedio
L-sale agar tu mil gaya Na toh tere haiddiyan hinted nahi baengi tujhse...

Sahil - twinkle twinkle little star
Trio finding sanskaar
Come let's end the war...

L-where.. .

Sahil- janase SE sab shuru hua tha .. I will wait for 15 minutes n ur time starts now otherwise I will shoot him n push hiim down..



Sw- ab hum kanhan jaayenge...

Raglak - interpreted the place as the place where sahil must be n left with swara for that place...it was from where Sanskaar 1st time fell


They reached there n sahil was as expected there only.. raglak made swara in the car n they came out but sahil shot Laksh's leg even before one can understand... he hit ragini's leg as well

Sahil-swara sanskaar ko zinda dekhna h tho come out...

Sahil then saw swara out he pulled her n showed sanskaar n his condition .. sahil babbled nonsense about him n Swara slapped him..her slapped her back n she fell down at sanskaar's feet..

Sanskaar's body was shaking due to anger n rage ... he was trying to move his for long but wasn't successful...

Then came the police n surrounded sahil they said he is under assets .. sahil lost his control n taking a gun pointed at swara..

Sahil-swara agar tum meri nahi hua toh kisiki nahi ho Sakti I will kill you.. swara was standing in front of sanskaar.. sahil pulled the trigger n there was a loud noise ..

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

The bullet was supposed to hit Swara but sanskaar finally got up.. his one leg started to respond n he immediately covered swara who felt his wait over her body... he fell on the icey ground... it Turned red due to his blood ..

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Swara + raglak - sanskaar...
Sa- swara is bar don't wait for me .. just take care of junior Maheshwari samjhi.
Raglak too crawled to sanskaar with their injured feet...
Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)
Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan saga

Swara fell on the ground.. she was sitting next to sanskaar...
Sw- nahi sanskaar agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh i will die with u but won't leave u


Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

Saying this sanskaar closed his eyes ... taking last glimps of his beloved swara..

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani.. (x2)
Pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jayega
Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega

SW- SANSKAAR...
Nahi u cannot go like this... nooo...
Nooo ..
Jhuk gaya aasmaan
Mill gaye do jahaan
Har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliya hain saji, khushbuein har kahin
Padhne aaya Khuda khud yahaan..
When sanskaar closed his eyes swara held his hand tight n then she fell life less to next to him...

Maybe a complete solemate connection.. both together Everytime .. everywhere...
Hamari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)



Will this story be completed in heaven.. had both swasan died ... is this the tragic end of their beautiful love story...


spatika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
awesome update
continue soon.
thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
nice updates
arghhh this sahil
hope swasan will b fine
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Yeh kya hogaya 😭
Swasan 😭
Sahil 😡
Awesome update
Update super soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm crying... 😭
How can they die so easily.. You can't do that bro. 😕
I want swasan sahi salaamat at the end with their baby. It's a request.
Awesome update harshitha.
Eagerly waiting for the epilogue.

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