Finding sanskaar.... a swasan story epilogue up pg17 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional...swansan cannot die it's just not fair...
Loved the action packed episode...wow update the final part soon...

Hope you are having fun with relatives...

Take care...

Raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
What!!!!!!!! They died, just like that😭😭.
Love the episode. They are indeed soulmate.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg..u will really nake me brust out into bucket of tears...
Wat an epj..loved jt..bt plzz dnt kill SwaSan Plzz want an Happy Ending Plzz n continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heart touching update..
Sahil i hate him..he is a cruel person.
But sanskar he saved his swara from death...
There love for each other is unconditional
But they can't die.there love story will never get a tragic ending
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice one..
Plz update fast...waiting for it.ll.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Harshita...great job...
OMG...it was shocking...plzzz dont give sad ending...nowadays already upset seeing sahil...want some happiness here...want swasan together...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb story
All chptrs r awsome & full of emotions
feel bad for both swasan
hope both r safe & live
loved it ...

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Epilogue -



Hi all thanks for ur great response through out the story. Thanks to my buddy Goldie again for sharing this story on her page. I apologize was not replying earlier bit since today this is the last part I will try my best to reply. I am sorry to make u cry here in this ss, but I hope the epilogue will make u smile again. Hope you enjoy reading. Please do read and leave ur replys, I am egar to read them.

❤️
Harshita




"Mamma"... a voice came from behind a lady turned to her..."Haan Sanskriti" ..
"Mamma challo Na meri bed time story k liye"
"Bas abhi .. ayi" n she left the room...


It has been 3years today to that incidence...n still those moments were fresh in her mind as if just yesterday she had returned...


Fb--

Swasan were lying lifelessly on the ice .. raglak crawled n managed to reach there..
L-inspector urgently call the ambulance...
Just then he saw ragini getting unconscious...
L- ragini...utho ...
But she didn't respond ...

Laksh slowly broke down n soon he too fell down holding ragini in his arms tightly ..

In the hospital -
Laksh n ragini were given medication... laksh 1st gained conscious...
L-ragini kesi h ..
Doc- much better .. still unconscious..
L-aur Bhai aur swara
Doc- no they are serious... Mr Maheshwari jas just waken up from comma n Mrs Maheshwari she had taken loads of stress in this condition..

Laksh had informed the family already .. they came running n taking flights n every possible way to reach there asap..

Laksh sat outside..he was broken when soon the MF arrived they consoled him.. when swaragini gained conscious..
On knowing Sanskaar's condition swara went inside his room..
SW-SANSKAAR... pls sunno Na .. utho Na ... pls for this baby..
She was crying inconsolably.. when sujata came there she consoled her..
Su-Na swara jab thare liye maut SE ladke aaya h toh ab pakka ayega ..
Sujata was beyond happy when she saw sanskaar alive..
Next mrng- swara had not eaten a single bite.. she was just sitting next to sanskaar...
Sanskaar gained conscious..
Sa-princess...
sw-sanskaar
N she hugged him n cried her heart out...
Sa-bas kitta roogi my junior Maheshwari will be ...
SW-tumhe junior ki padi h aur mera Jo roo roo k bura hal ho gaya h..
Sanskaar pecked her tears...

Sujata came too n Hugged sanskaar...
She was also crying..
Sa-bas mom mujhe feel karegi kya..

Su-bas kar pagal.. mahre mein Kante h k Jo mein thare gale Na lagsakti..
At sanskaar clutched her close...
Sa-love u Maa...
Su-love u too sansku...

Sa-(teasing) mom aapko pata h u look just 16 even today... look at my wife I am so worried kahin yeh meri cute si tinde jesi wife .. gol gol kaddu Na ban jaye...
SW- kya kya kya... tinda kaddu.. what nonsense.. I hate u Mr Maheshwari .. u get lost... I don't want to talk to you...
Sa- but I love u baby.. n I want to tease u until we grow 1000 years...

They were playing when ap complained to sanskaar ...
AP - sanskaar u know what ur beloved wife had not even eaten a bite since yesterday ...
Sa- what y
AP - waiting for u to get up ..n feed her...
Saying this she forwarded a plate to sanskaar.. it had breakfast.. the with his working hand feed her...

Sa- Mrs Maheshwari now don't be so careless n eat property got it..
She nodded...

Fb ends...

"Swara..." ..a voice called her... "aayegi sanskaar..." wrapping a blanket around her 3 years old daughter she left...

Sanskaar was waiting for her..
Sa- challenge sone..
Sw- k let's go..
Sa- hmm come on...

Fb -------------
Swara's moodswings were on full swingn sanskaar had to suffer a lot ...
Mid night -
Sw- sanskaar...
Sa- hmm
SW- prince mujhe Na ice cream khani h chocolate wali
Sa- swara.. princess iss waqat.. abhi 2hrs pehle hi vanilla khaya tha Na..
SW- par sanskaar I want it..
Sa- ok..
He gets up... and bring the ice cream..
Sa- yeh lo..
SW- k..
Sa- ahh ab few days more bas uske baad I will sleep full night...
SW- nahi Mr Maheshwari.. apki aane wale baby ka dhyan bhi aapko hi rakhna hoga...
Sa- yeah .. pehle pati Shoshan aur ab baby Shoshan..
Swara soon finished the ice cream he took the bowl n left for the kitchen.. as soon as he arrived.. he found swara suffering from some pain...
Sa- swara r u ok
SW- noo I think... AAhhh...
Sa- oh god.. at this hour.. wait I will take u to the hospital...
He asked swara to come with him they were walking down but swara was moaning in pain continuously..
In b/w the stairs..
SW- SANSKAAR..ahhh .. I ..I .. cannot walk more
She said panting..
Sa- okay.. he lifted her up..
Hearing her cries the MF woke up ..
Su- k hua sanskaar...
Sa- mom it's time... I ..
Su- go fast we will join u..
In the hospital sanskaar requested the doctor to enter the operation theatre.. he stood by swara's side all the time..
Doc- Mrs. Maheshwari push ..push..
SW- aaahh...ahhh...
Sa- swara r u k.. pls try a bit...
Swara was almost tiered by then .. she again tried to push the baby ... Sanskaar held her hand supportively...
Sa- don't worry nothing will happen...
N that was it .. the delivery was successful...
SW- almost lost her conscious by then..
Doc- congratulations Mr. And Mrs. Maheshwari it's a girl..
Sanskaar was overwhelmed.. he hugged swara..she too responded.. back...

Doctors took Swara to ward room.. she rested there when all were around her..
Su- hayi kiti pyari h mahri poti...
AP - Hann dekhiye ji..
DP - bilkul..
RP - sujata mahri bhi toh poti h Na wa..
Su- par pehle mein dekh toh lun ...
RP- je dadi h toh sanskaar pooch ya SE ki mein Na Dada hoon mahre ko Na dekhne degi..waiting puhdankni si h khud hi bachi lagti h mahre ko...
Su- bas karo ji je lo .. Na ladoo chahiye good mein toh boldo ese sab k samne...
RP- toh bina bole tu deti hi Na mahre ko ...
N RP started playing with the baby girl along with sujata... the others waited egarly...
Su- acha mahre ko bata ki ragini aur lux k honge mahri poti k masi masa ya cha-cha chachi..
Raglak - pata nahi... Jo bhi h she soo cute just like sanskaar...
Sa- Aree ..
SW-(teasing)- haan both sanskaar and...
Su- Sanskriti.
SW- haan Sanskriti are soo cute...
Sa- swara...stop calling me that ..cute...
SW- par u r cute .. cute.. n very cute...
And they share some family moments

Fb ends -------



Sanskaar n swara entered their room...


And another event stuck her mind...

Fb--
They 1st time entered in their room with the baby girl.. they named her Sanskriti... papa ki laadli..

It was the night and she was continuously crying not letting her sleep...
Sa- swara u rest I will take her..
Sanskaar took her in his embrace n tried to calm her down... n there he was she slept within a few seconds..
Sw- truly she is ur laadli... always likes u around..
Sa- like her mother..
SW- yes...
They smiled n slept...

Fb ends ------


Sanskaar chalein princess..
SW- hmm...
Swara was about to go when he pulled her close..
SW- what now..
Sanskaar rested his chin on her shoulder...
Sa- princess mein sooch raha tha ki ..
SW- ki
Sa- ki Sanskriti is so alone.. Na ..
SW- toh..
Sa- uska ek Bhai ya behen ...
Sw- ane wala h Na... I hope u know ragini is expecting...
Sa- hmm k ...nice point...

He pecked her neck sensuously..
He turned her towards him.. n moved towards her lips...
Sa- ek meri laadli h.. ek tumhare bhi laadla hona chahiye Na..
SW- nice idea Mr Maheshwari..
Sa- I knew it I am very smart..
SW- I see...
N they kissed...
He lifted her up .. n placed her on the bed..
Soon they were under a single blanket .. celebrating their love all over again...

Next mrng- Sanskaar n swara were under a single blanket when there was knock at the door..
Sanskriti - muma
In the room..
SW- SANSKAAR wake up woh..
Sa- okay..
She wrapped herself n went for a shower he immediately his shirt n cleaned the room..

N opened the door...
Sans- papaaaj humein ghoomne jana tha do it remember...
Sa- yes baby princess...
Sans- acha theek h u get ready ...
Sa- u too come...
Sans- okay papa..
Sanskaar took his about to be 3 years old princess n helped her dress up...

Soon the 3of them left for the outing... gardens ..parks.. amusement parks.. lunch . Movies.. n then he drove by the banks of the river...
He stopped n the 3 of them sat under the jewelled night sky... he was observing the beauty of the sky.. n then saw both his princesses feel safe n comfortable in his embrace... this was the best feeling a person can ever experience he thought...


Gar firdaus, bar-eu-e-zameenast
Hamin-asto, hamin-asto (hamin-asto..)
Meri jaan rooh dil se wa-basht
Hamin-asto, hamin-asto (hamin-asto..) (x2)

Ho.. khamosh darkhton ke saaye
Yeh khauf hai soya saa
O.. kuch khoya khoya humne bhi
Yeh chehra hai roya saa

Murjhate gulon ne jhuk ke kaha
Hume aadat hai hameen-asto (hameen-asto..)
Chalte lamhon ne ruk ke kaha
Inaayat hai hameen-asto (hameen-asto..)

Yeh veerane, yeh sannate
Kya bol rahe hain, aate jaate
Aate jaate, ho...

Panchhi saare udd gaye kahin
Bas ghonsley hai hamin-asto (hamin-asto..)
Gar jannat hai zameen pe kahin
Yahin pe hai hamin-asto, hamin-asto
(Hamin-asto...)

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Ms.Musibat thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb... But you end it too soon yaar... Come back with a new story...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ms.Musibat

Superb... But you end it too soon yaar... Come back with a new story...

Thanks for the reading
Well this story was supposed to be very short one as I mentioned in the beginning...
Well I have 2 on going once...
I will try to be quick in finishing them and coming up with something new...

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