Finding sanskaar.... a swasan story epilogue up pg17 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Amazing update waiting for the swasan meeting. N thanks for pm update asap😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
shit they were almost there
nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Hi Harshu,😊
Nice update.👏
Yeh kya? SwaSan milte milte mil nahi paye.😭
Sahil!! Oh god!! Full psycho!!😡🤢
Update soon dear and thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Awesome update..
Poor sanskar and swara...
The destiny is playing a cruel game.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Harshita dear...
Amazing update..soo swasan are soo close yet far...that cosmic connection between them...loved it.waiting for more...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Part-5


Hi all thanks for your beautiful comments and replys on the 4th part here continue with the 5th part. Also I am Sorry for not replying again.. n as earlier I still have guests at home so could hardly manage to update.. pls do leave ur comments.. they are precious.. thanks for reading hope u like the update...


Raglak took swara with them to the doctor for checkup.. in the same Hospital .. he suggested her to rest.. swara was weak.. she managed to walk with the support of ragini n Laksh .. sanskaar who saw her was worried.. he tried moving his legs but in vain.. he wanted atleast shout her name.. he tried moving his lips but couldn't.. there swara was pleadings raglak to let her just once meet that patient..
SW-pls laksh.. ragini hum ek baar usse milte h bas..kya pata woh Sanskaar ho..
R-chup swara bahut ho gaya.. I won't listen anything challo..
SW-laksh..
L-ragini is r8 swara...
When they both denied.. swara broke down... she was crying while walking.. n then again her head was spinning n raglak took her out of the place.. there sanskaar who was struggling to speak with great struggle moved his lips but couldn't speak... tears made their way out.. he wanted to know what happened to her y was she so weak..

Sanskaar was angry at his condition he hated himself.. he was continuously trying to move various body Parts .. again n again.. he tried to speak again n again but the attempts lead to a failure n nothing else..


In the hotel room, manali-
Swara had fought with ragini n Laksh for taking her back... but then they calmed her.. n soon then laksh said he was coming back n ragini left for a shower.. swara was in the room alone... she was talking to sanskaar's picture again.. n then she clutched it close to her heart..

Sanskaar was feeling good till then .. he was exhausted by this efforts.to move his body n hence .. he was lying on the bed with closed eyes as if listening to swara... but then suddenly he felt restless.. the same as last night and again he was trying to make his body move ..

There in the room.. the door opened swara expected it to be laksh but to her surprise it wasn't him... the person was sahil ... he locked the door and then moved towards swara..
SW- sahil tum..
Sahil - haan mein..
SWARA was about to speak more when he kept his finger on her lips..
Sahil-u know what swara, humare beech ka akhri problem sanskaar ab he is dead .. n now just his kid is there but we will think about it tomorrow.. today to let's celebrate sanskaar's death.. n I think u r also ready see u still put vermilion... wear mangalsutra n shakha pola I think that's for me I suppose..

Swara slapped him tight..

SW- shut up u bas***d.. u know what my sanskaar is alive n he is some problem otherwise woh mere pas aa jata .. n all this vermilion n all its for him n his name because he is alive..

Sahil- how dare you slap me now I will show u...

Hearing the commotion ragini quickly dressed up... she was shocked to listen to sahil.. she came out asap..

R-sahil tumhari himmat...

Sahil slapped her n pushed her into the washroom.. ragini's leg sliped n her head hit the taps resulting into bleeding from her head...

Sw- sahil how dare u...

She walked to washroom but sahil pulled her towards him.. he pushed her on the bed...
Sahil- swara today I will make u mine saying this he tried to force her ... swara tried freeing herself continuously...
Meanwhile laksh came back n he rang the bell but the door didn't open even after 5 minutes . He got worried n asked the manager for opening the door..

Sahil in the meantime.. tried coming over swara sure pushed him.. n got off the bed .. sahil pulled her back.. he slapped her n then pushed her on the bed he this time tore her blouse.. swara was protesting but then she fell in conscious.. there sahil was so happy.. he moved close to her lips..

Ragini was continuously pleading from the washroom... but in vain.. just tyen laksh all tensed opened the door.. he ran in n saw an unconscious swara along sahil on top of her... he heard ragini pleading from sahil to leave swara...

Laksh moved to sahil pulled him up n slapped him hard n beat him.. the manager called the police.. at this sahil ran away laksh n manager tried to grab him but in vain.. manger called the doctor n Laksh took ragini out of the washroom she ran to swara laksh covered her with his blazer.. he then saw ragini blood on head n finger marks on cheeks... n swara her condition was now shifted from bad to worse..

Meanwhile in the hospital sanskaar's restlessness reduced but not his efforts he slept only after the nurse added some medicine in his drip..

In the hotel room - swara had gained conscious.. ragini made her change.. swaragini were sitting on the bed n Laksh packed bags .. swara was resting her head on ragini's shoulder..

She was all tears because laksh had explained y he wanted swara to go back with them.. it had been a long debate but this time swara lost...

SW( monologue) - nahi I won't go back without sanskaar...

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Swara left for the hospital without informing raglak.. she reached there n again enquired he was under the medicine effect until swara entered.. he woke up n saw her standing next to him.. swara hugged him... after sooo long they met again...
They both were beyond happy sanskaar tried n successfully kept his hand on her back as if hugging her back...

She told him everything how no one believes her n how sahil attached her .. sanskaar wanted to kill him n then she disclosed about junior Maheshwari...

His happiness knew no bounds... he tried n in a husky tone spoke up.. pulling her ear close to her mouth..
Sa- thank u Mrs swara sanskaar Maheshwari... n I am sorry for giving you...

Sw- shhh no sorry n no thank you..

They shared some more moments together but then she said she needs to inform raglak n had not brought her phone.. also she had to take the car back .. sanskaar held hand a if urging to stay but she moved out saying she will come back in a few hours...

Aftet few hours -
SW- what?? Where is he...
Receptionist- his relative Mr. Sahil sengupta took him...

SW- what??
Recp- yes ma'am..

Swara n raglak were now more tensed..
Just then Laksh received a phone call n they all left tensed...



Where is sanskaar... y had sahil taken him.. what he wants...will they find him... is it the beginning of another struggle in 'finding sanskaar'...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
Omg yaar..awsun..loved it..finally SwaSan Met bt dat Stupid Sahil.hw dare he touch Swars arghh..hope swara.finds Sanskaar agn..continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Awesome update 👏
Sahil 🤬
Poor swasan
Phir se sahil 🤬
Sanskar a
Ab kya hoga 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
harshita maybe i am not an ardent reader of your story .. but i am a great fan of yours ..
you are awesome writer ..
sahil!!! i hate him
ab SwaSan ka kya hoga ?
update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Wow!!! Loved it.
This jahil thing is getting in my nerves. Huh! Poor swasan.

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