Finding sanskaar.... a swasan story epilogue up pg17

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Hi all this us another short.. very short story.. don't worry I will update all my stories simultaneously .. pls do read the prologue n leave ur comments.. they matter a lot.. thanks for reading in advance



Prologue - she was standing numb at the entrance of the grand and lively Maheshwari mansion.. wasn't a normal day... the mansion wasn't lively it was dead.. only the sound of crying echoed through the corridors of the mansion... she still couldn't believe it.. there in the center was his picture framed with a garland hung around.. he had a content smile on his face in the photo... further there was a diya lit in front.. there were females of her family .. mom his 'mom' was crying badly.. she was continuously moaning his name.. "sanskaar.. mahra chora.." .. as if urging him to come back... sujata leaned on a shoulder it was AP .. she couldn't even console thus mother.. she then looked at dad .. Ram Prasad Maheshwari... he was standing like a statue.. just breathing but not alive... he didn't speak a word but was starting at his photo as if questioning him why he left? Y he left his mom? Y ? Can't he see the pain in everyone's eyes..?...

Dad too cried .. he had tears flowing out... he didn't speak yet was crying...

They all were dressed in white.. they were all teary eyed.. she also could see her sister.. her mother.. her dadi... her father all standing teary eyed.. it was then when ragini n sharmishta saw her.. she was the odd one out.. she wore her mangalsutra.. her Shaka pola.. her vermilion was still in her partition... a red bindi on the forehead..

"Swara" her mother called hwr out of affection as well as shock .. all eyes turned towards the enterance.. ragini n sharmishta moved towards her teary eyed n bring her down they made her sit in front of his picture..

Ragini forwarded her hand for removing the vermilion..pari took her hands in hers.. n broke a few bangles in her hand..it was then when she all of the sudden jerked them.. she pushed them n took a few steps back...
" Are u mad??" She shouted.. " what u all r doing? Y r u all doing this.??.."...
" Shona come back beta n accept the reality" said her mother almost Breaking down..
" Which reality Maa ?? ".. she shouted again..
" Kuch nahi swara u just come here".. ragini spoke controlling the situation
" Noo" was her only reply..." I know what u all are doing.. but I know my sanskaar isn't dead he is alive.. he us there..!!"

"Haan swara " it was her badi Maa..." u come n sit beta.."..

"Noo .. I ..I won't.. I will never.. " she replied irritated... " and all this.." she continued pointing to his picture n diya.. " thus is wrong.. u can do it with a live man.. "

She ran n threw the diya on the ground.. she threw the garland .. n clutched his photo close..

"Swara" it was laksh.. he tried moving close when she shouted..
"Nahi.. pas mat ana mere..." she said n moved a few steps back..." kuch nahi hua h usse.. mere sanskaar zinda h.."

" Zinda h woh.." she again repeated her words louder..

She moved few more steps back..but then lost her conscious n fell down..

All rushed to her n she was still moaning his name.." sanskaar tum hona yanhan.. sanskaar.. sans-kaar..."...
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Part-1

Hi all this the 1 st part.. thanks for ur great response on the prologue.. hope u will like the 1st part..pls do reply it matters a lot.. thanks for reading in advanced...

Flashback-

It has been 3 years to their marriage.. life was like a dream.. beautiful.. it had happiness n smiles.. Sanskaar Maheshwari n Mrs swara sanskaar Maheshwari..( they way he likes to address her.. ) were 2 people deeply n madly in love..

"Swara" a sound echoed in MM it was her birthday.. he was back from office with something to show her.. " aayi sanskaar..". She replied from the kitchen...

Soon she came n he sat on his knees in the hall.. she smiled.. he then forwarded an envelope containing something..
"Yeh kya h ??" She question...
"Aaj ka akhri surprise.." he replied..
She was smiling n looking in his eyes she opened the gift.. there were 2 tickets to manali
She smiled even more.." pasand aya!! " He questioned.."yes .. bahut pasand".. she replied...

" So Mrs Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari.. will u come with me on a second honeymoon..all the way to manali" ..she blushed n nodded in a yes..

" Woh Bhai ... ek sawal h tu kab ja raha h.." laksh questioned..
As soon as sanskaar got up from his knees..
" 11, 12, 13" he replied.." kyun kya hua tujhe laksh.."

"Woh main aur ragini bhi ja rahe h .. 13,14,15 ko" laksh replied..
"Oh so np.. u want us to join or vice versa".. he questioned..
"both of u go together.. ek ek karke kyun ja rahe ho.. come together back .. wese bhi kewal do Jano ka jana is risky saath rahoge toh it's better in case of any emergency.. " DP suggested.. n family supported.. hence swasan n raglak were on a joint trip cum second honeymoon..

"Sorry Bhai woh tera plan.." laksh said while walking back to their room... " Pagal h tu..sorry kyun bol raha h .. it's better Na hum dono ne bhi little time SE sa saath nahi ghuma h chal acha h .. " sanskaar said n comforted his brother about the decision...

10th April .. all 4left for manali...
They reached on 10 night n 11 th mrng they started their trip.. they visited gardens parks n other places..

At night in swasan room sanskaar entered n saw her she was standing in front of the mirror n she opened her shoes..
He red shining shawl slipped n her deep back blouse revealed her milky smooth skin.. he removed his blazer and move towards her.. "swara " he said in a husky tone touching her back sensuously... "hmm " she replied responding to his touch..

He turned her towards him.. n pecked her cheeks romantically.. turning them all red..



Iss tarah se khudse aa mujhko jod tu
Thoda bhi mujhme na mujhko chhod tu
Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Dariya tu khaali kar de
Mujhme saara tu bhar de
Tujhko aa main pee jaaun, pyaas bujha do..

Laana kuch baadal laana
Unko mujh par barsaana
Boondein teri ho jinme, unse bhigaa do...


He lifted her up.. "were u going for a shower.." he asked..n she simply nodded.. he went into the washroom n switched it on.. she hugged him tight .. hiding her face under his chest.. he too wrapped his arms around her.. soon they broke the hug n she turned the other side.. he brushed his lips on her shoulder n his fingers crawled down her arm... he then pecked her earlobe.. n opened her hair... he then unpinned her sari..

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
Aa tujhko odh loon main

Katra katra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun

Khud se khaali ho jaaun
Aaja tujhse bhar jaaun
Tinka tinka jal jaaun
Aise jalaa do.. ho..

Tarun main tan pe tere
Thehrun angon pe tere
Gehari jo khawahish teri
Unme duba do..


She ran out due to shyness.. followed by him .. she stood in front of the mirror he came n stood behind her .. he came close to her pecked her earlobe again n removed her earings.. he then slowly opened the dori of her blouse.. water was dripping from his hair.. on her skin it caused burning.. he again lifted her n placed on the bed.. he came close.. she smiled..

They kissed n she responded back.. he removed her sari... n then her blouse..

She too pecked his chest n removed his shirt.. soon their clothes were on the floor..

they were kissing passionately n hungry..

He rolled over n again took control.. he made her moan in pain n pleasure...

They consummatd their love once again all over again..

Na yaad teri tujhko
Na yaad mujhe hoon main
Aa mujhko pehan le tu
tujhko odh loon main

Qatra qatra main girun
Jism pe tere theharun
Katra katra main girun
Tujh mein hi kahin reh lun





Next mrng- they woke up all cuddled with each other .. his hands were on her waist... she tried waking up but he pulled her back to him..
" U r going nk where Mrs. Sanskaar Maheshwari"
" And what about the trip Mr Maheshwari"
" Let it go.. "
"Shut up my sisy is waiting for me we will shop together"
" No way.. don't worry she won't be waiting my bro is with her.."😉

She then picked up a pillow n started beating him he held her hand n pulled her close he then pulled her close n claimed her lips..
She responded with passion n they were celebrating their love again this mrng...


Later- the same day all 4 went to see the snow... it was slippery there but no less enjoyable.. swasan n raglak were going hand in hand when all of the sudden her leg sliped n he was about to fall.. he pulled her up back but then his Own leg sliped n he fell down.. in a moment her world was destroyed.. she shouted -" SANSKAAR..." but no use he had fallen down the hill..into the river.. all her happiness shattered in that moment n she was shocked... shocked beyond limits..she wanted to jump with him but raglak held her

POLICE n the escort team came they searched all over but couldn't find him..
The trip turned into a nightmare.. raglak brought her back home .. but she was emotion less... next to dead..

Sharmishta came to meet her she tried to talk but she didn't even responded once..


Present -
After a week, the police handed over his belongings to the family.. saying he is dead n they couldn't find him .. they were closing the case .. this was the 1st time she spoke up ..
She shouted on them pleaded to them.. begged but in vain..

As the police van left she lost her conscious...
After an hour when she gained her conscious she saw all her family down stairs in the hall
she was standing numb at the entrance of the grand and lively Maheshwari mansion.. wasn't a normal day... the mansion wasn't lively it was dead.. only the sound of crying echoed through the corridors of the mansion... she still couldn't believe it.. there in the center was his picture framed with a garland hung around.. he had a content smile on his face in the photo... further there was a diya lit in front.. there were females of her family .. mom his 'mom' was crying badly.. she was continuously moaning his name.. "sanskaar.. mahra chora.." .. as if urging him to come back... sujata leaned on a shoulder it was AP .. she couldn't even console thus mother.. she then looked at dad .. Ram Prasad Maheshwari... he was standing like a statue.. just breathing but not alive... he didn't speak a word but was starting at his photo as if questioning him why he left? Y he left his mom? Y ? Can't he see the pain in everyone's eyes..?...

Dad too cried .. he had tears flowing out... he didn't speak yet was crying...

They all were dressed in white.. they were all teary eyed.. she also could see her sister.. her mother.. her dadi... her father all standing teary eyed.. it was then when ragini n sharmishta saw her.. she was the odd one out.. she wore her mangalsutra.. her Shaka pola.. her vermilion was still in her partition... a red bindi on the forehead..

"Swara" her mother called hwr out of affection as well as shock .. all eyes turned towards the enterance.. ragini n sharmishta moved towards her teary eyed n bring her down they made her sit in front of his picture..

Ragini forwarded her hand for removing the vermilion..pari took her hands in hers.. n broke a few bangles in her hand..it was then when she all of the sudden jerked them.. she pushed them n took a few steps back...
" Are u mad??" She shouted.. " what u all r doing? Y r u all doing this.??.."...
" Shona come back beta n accept the reality" said her mother almost Breaking down..
" Which reality Maa ?? ".. she shouted again..
" Kuch nahi swara u just come here".. ragini spoke controlling the situation
" Noo" was her only reply..." I know what u all are doing.. but I know my sanskaar isn't dead he is alive.. he us there..!!"

"Haan swara " it was her badi Maa..." u come n sit beta.."..

"Noo .. I ..I won't.. I will never.. " she replied irritated... " and all this.." she continued pointing to his picture n diya.. " thus is wrong.. u can do it with a live man.. "

She ran n threw the diya on the ground.. she threw the garland .. n clutched his photo close..

"Swara" it was laksh.. he tried moving close when she shouted..
"Nahi.. pas mat ana mere..." she said n moved a few steps back..." kuch nahi hua h usse.. mere sanskaar zinda h.."

" Zinda h woh.." she again repeated her words louder..

She moved few more steps back..but then lost her conscious n fell down..

All rushed to her n she was still moaning his name.." sanskaar tum hona yanhan.. sanskaar.. sans-kaar..."...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Index-
Prologue - above pg1
Part-1- above pg1
Part-2 pg6
Part-3 pg9
part-4 pg12
Part-5 pg14
Part6 pg15
Epilogue pg17
Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heartbreaking prologue..
But seriously I always wanted to read a story where I could see Swara pining for Sanskar..its always him who is after Swara..I really wanted to see Swara desperately madly searching for her Sanskar..
I always thought that in this Sahil scenario somewhere Sahil will hurt him and Swara memories will come back but it will be too late because Sanskar would have been hur..alive yes but not with her..
You're story somewhat relate to that..
What happened with Sanskar..eagerly waiting to read more of it..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg!!! thisis heart breaking
nice prologue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heart touching prologue..
What happened to Sanskar...
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue. Something new and interesting. Waiting for part 1 n want to know what had happened to sanky. Can u plz pm me next part😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshita...
I cried just reading prologue..never do this to sansku plzzz...hoping he is fine just like swara...

Overall nicely written... heart touching...waitingfor more...

Dear how are u managing sooo many stories...?????

Update kidnapp groom too..

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshita yeh kya hai
Poor swara 😭
But awesomely written 👏
Please bring sanskar soon nahi toh you will get sahil in your dream 😉 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: svg98

Heartbreaking prologue..
But seriously I always wanted to read a story where I could see Swara pining for Sanskar..its always him who is after Swara..I really wanted to see Swara desperately madly searching for her Sanskar..
I always thought that in this Sahil scenario somewhere Sahil will hurt him and Swara memories will come back but it will be too late because Sanskar would have been hur..alive yes but not with her..
You're story somewhat relate to that..
What happened with Sanskar..eagerly waiting to read more of it..
Update soon..


True said dear..
Well the story doesn't include sahil but still u will be able to read what you want like me.
Well the sahil plot u suggested is one of my wishes as well

I will update asap


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