SwaSan OS: 'The Sweet Scent of Petrichor' - Page 3

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

I just read ur UN and I'm like go dude, post Res!! Read it, and unresing just now!!😃
Btw, welcome back!!

Thanks yaar. 🤗🤗

I so desperately wanted to come back to writing regularly dude. But literally had no energy for it. Had a severe Vitamin B12 deficiency, and to top that, came down with a bad case of the flu.

I used to do most of my writing late into the night, after putting my kid to bed. But for the past 2--3 months, I was so exhausted with my illness and then handling all the piled up work, that I used to fall asleep with my daughter while I read her her bed time tales. 😆 My poor Hubby had to literally shake me awake and carry me to bed. 😳 😉

So writing was on an enforced and very unwilling hiatus. But now I'm back---and hopefully for good! 😊

Love Ya

---Viji

Beautiful os..
Sanskar's way of making Swara realize his love and recreating the memories was beautiful.. Would want to as the same in the show as well..
Why Swara can't read Sanskar..I know she is hurt but still can't she realize the bullet never hit her and she can see hate in his eyes in the memory but can't see so much love and pain when he is standing is front of her..he appears to be like a drowning man barely holding on..
Sahil is such a pain..Swara would have almost remembered.. Truly he didn't knw whom he is just declared the war with..Sanskar is tiger and that too wounded..Sahil will never een know what hit him..this Sanskar is so intense and icy..had shivers reading this look of his..

The recreation of memory was beautiful..could see it right in front of my eyes happening once again and those dialogues are so very beautiful..have power to touch one's soul chord..

Last scene was beautiful..the rain..the pond..the flower.. And Swara and Sanskar gazing into each other's eyes and she blushing..must have drenched Sanskar's barren heart when Swara smiled at him..can't wait to see these kinds on screen too..

Amazing story..u write beautifully..and welcome back..and that too with such ana awesome piece of heart touching story..
Can't wait to read more of ur soul searing stories..

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Superb one

Res
Vijji i really missed u nd ur unique greek words u knw na i like ur unique titles alot,actually thought to pm u for os but i was busy wid exams so didn't do..glad finally u back dear res for now v'l unres later:)

Unres:
Hello vijji wow ur description of swasan is massive,how sanskar felt whn swara accused him as muderer,then there flashback convo during fake marriage how sanskar showerd his support to her..But nothing had ever hurt him as much as that mistrust and fear in Swara's eyes towards himself killing him inside,then he took a vow not to lose hope to get his love back " Tu ab himmat nahi har sakta, Sanskaar " perfectly writen..now coming to swakis sanskar/kissan trying hard to remember there blissful journey of swasan..umm as in ur os how sanskar have doubt on sahil hope in show too sanskar get to knw sahil's real intention..nd swara right now her mind is ruling over heart atlast in ur os she think she is some whr wrong.hope she remember there lovely journey soon.over al peaceful os loved it!!!!!