Res Unres:
Dearest Viji🤗,
Welcome back! Hope you are well now. I know how much reality just keeps butting into our amazing SwaSan land. 😛 I have been waiting for all you fabulous writer's take and stories on this memory loss track. And voila amazing stories have been flowing in this week. 😉
Petrichor - Another one of those fabulous words that you keep a record of? Beautiful.
Part A: Trade Winds
I think I have mentioned this before but I will say it again, I absolutely adore you for the way you describe the simplest of things of life so very beautifully. The description of the heat before the anticipated rains, the gathering of rain clouds and final relief of downpour to not only humans but to animals, birds and insects as well. Really, really beautiful! 😊
Sanskaar sitting all melancholy on the balcony while it is all grey and pouring outside,, this is such a picturesque scene. So rightly put that the first rains bring sign of new hope, new life and new beginnings and yet Sanskaar is stuck in such a phase of his life where his Life, his Hope and his New beginning has forgotten all about him. *sigh*. That memory, yaar Viji, this whole end of Part A had me almost tear up. That despondent way he is giving himself a pep talk. Ah god Viji, the agony here. 👏
Part B: Summer Lighting
Okay, I have to admit that the whole Kissan subterfuge on the show has me cringing. VK in that get up was really weird. But your description of the possibility of all the crazy things that could take place between Swara and Kissan is something worth looking forward to. (If something of that sort actually happens on the show) Swara Partner? Reference to 'Rab Ne Bana Di Jodi'? Haha..😆
I really liked the possibility of Sanskaar trying to bring back Swara's memories with similar songs and decorations and such. Loved your song selection. Damn, she almost realised. The feelings here reminded me so much of the whole falling off the cliff scene. He almost had her in his grasp and she fell anyways. *sigh*
Well, well, Viji. I can safely say you most definitely do not like Sahil. I could literally feel your contempt for this character.😆
Part C: Red Earth and Pouring Rain
I am so glad that Sanskaar has got some inlkling about the shit that is going to hit the fan. Sahil's obsessiveness is going to be such a pain.. Atleast the CVs should have shown a time frame of when he had the chance to fall in love with Swara. She was unconscious most of the time they were together and the remaining time I dont see how he could have fallen in love? Does he do that to every female he stumbles upon? or is he mentally ill? I could go on and on. Anyways, I absolutely loved how you showed that she gave him no bhaav at all and was very busy in her thoughts. That was so laugh worthy.
Ah... Sanskaar feeling little jealous and possessive? I don't mind at all. Not one iota. 😛
Okay, I have to give you credit. I sooo loved that feril smile that came across Sanskaar's face in response to the slip of emotions by Sahil. I was like finally! The Sanskaar I have been waiting for. The calculating, devious Sanskaar that I fell for during those days of May and July. That feeling of happiness on seeing Sanskaar, even if it is chotta-sa glimpse is like a water in desert. tahnk you sooo much! ❤️
Awww... Swara realising that MAYBE she is wrong. Loads and loads of hugs. I really loved how you ended this OS. No sudden memory coming back and such. A end that leaves a lot to imagine.
I have absolutely loved this comeback piece of writing of yours. Please do write more. You have readers waiting to devour it.😉
Love,
V❤️
Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago
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