SwaSan OS: 'The Sweet Scent of Petrichor'

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Good to see you back Viji :)

With a beautiful piece of our SwaSan!

Ramadan Mubarak :)

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Anusha62
Res
Vijji i really missed u nd ur unique greek words u knw na i like ur unique titles alot,actually thought to pm u for os but i was busy wid exam so didn't do..glad finally u back dear res for now v'l unres later:)

Thanks so much Anusha 🤗 🤗

So glad to know you loved the title and chapter headings. I do spend quite some time on them. 😉😊

Look forward eagerly to your feedback after you finish reading, dear.

Loads of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Good to see you back Viji :)
With a beautiful piece of our SwaSan!

Ramadan Mubarak :)

Thanks so very much Nupur sweetheart 🤗 🤗

So very happy to hear that you loved this OS.

Ramadan Mubarak to you too!

Love ya

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

@ Lucky 🤗 🤗

Dear, your comment just made me feel on top of the world, literally. Floating among those lovely rain bearing clouds, no less. 😊

Shall reply in detail tomorrow dear. Need to hit bed soon, quite exhausted with the whirlwind of functions the past few days.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

@ svg98 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton for your very lovely comment. Made me feel very touched and blessed, truly. So happy to have such amazing and motivating feedback.

I shall revert in detail tomorrow. Do let me know your name if that's OK, so I'll know how to address you.

Loads of Love

Viji

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Viji...my friend

After a long interval Iam reading your story.i was super excited to read it.

As a fan of swasan it was a beautiful gift for us.

I always found a common factor in your stories.The nature will play a major role in it.The rain,wind etc are really interelated to our life.

The concept of story was beautiful.Sanskar's love for swara is eternal.his love for her never change.

In the story the thoughts of Sanskar was beautifully portrayed.sanskar is facing a biggest challenge in his life.because without Swara he is a lifeless body.his soul is far away from him.The pain of Sanskar was seen in all the words.

And for swara she lost her memory .she is in a shock.no one can convince her.the destiny played a cruel game.but Sanskar was not ready to loss his soul.he tried all the possible ways to regain her memory.for that he became kissan for her.

The love of swasan...it is eternal.a love that will never change.

The ray of hope is there.

Thanks for the this beautiful os

With lots of love

Shamina

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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piccola1

@piccola1

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Oh what a lovely little interlude, Viji..! 😃

Sheer delight to read. 👏

The flashbacks of those much loved tent days😳, the blossoming trust and love ❤️...to the present day harsh realities...But then again the determined Sanskaar aka Kissan 😛doing all he can to jog his Swara's memory.⭐️ Rebuilding the evocative moments of togetherness with a finesse of perfect love !😳

The near misses of Swara are beautiful..you are fuelling impatience 😕in us as much as Sanskaar's😆.

I loved that your Sanskaar catches out Saahil's malintent.😡.and the view to the sharp and smart Sanskaar of old ! How I wish for his return ...sigh.😃

But the best part ⭐️ was that moment between our golden couple..😳when he poured out his adoration for her in his look at her..and she returned it with a half smile 😊..oh to see it on screen !! A vivid imagination driven by your masterly script works wonders ...A perfect moment suspended in time !😳😳😳

Do keep writing in, as much as you can, Viji..its sheer delight ..even if I have to repeat myself !

Love ya, 🤗 Pic.

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Res...5 pages of comments already...
M so late...

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Viji 🤗 So you are back to writing then. This track has brought back so many to the forum😳

Petrichor is such a beautiful word...as beautiful as the smell of the rain soaked earth it describes. One of my favourite words of all time. It becomes all the more special as I wait for the rains in this mad heat here😭

Kisan is yet to make an entry & he has already got everyone writing about him 😆😆 The song you selected, especially those lines are so perfect ❤️ And her 'almost remembering' but not quite...ahh very painful Sanskaar recreating all those beautiful memories was a good touch. Such slow & steady reminders are bound to have their effect on her mind more than any force can.

It pleased me no end to see cracks developing between the fabled fraanship of Swara & sahil🤢😈 but of course nothing can be more satisfying that Sanskaar finding a little sukoon towards the end when Swara smiles at him