SS: One More Time. (Part 2 updt. pg. 5)

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Amazing update...

Loved Sanskar here..

Waiting for the nxt part..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Helee
when Sanskaar starts fighting he doesn't pull back punches. Be it in professional field of business or boxing... or life. sanskar the dark knight... loved it...loved it and once again just loved it...!

Thank you SO much Helee🤗.

@bold.
that's our Sanskaar.
wish they would give him back to us.

thanks again dear.

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: lucky.m
wow ..SS ..nimmo .. I am so so looking forward to it darlin..super excited I am🥳 ..and fighter sanskaar ..uff ..hot I loved that part of pouring water on his face and shaking off water droplets after fight ..I can so totally imagine how would he look .. 😳 waiting to fall in love with fighter sanskaar again😉 and fight was rocking . no body messes with my darlin😆😳
Love
Lucky

Lucky..
🤗

Nunnu na darling ra.

yup.. though I wrote that water droplets part myself; visualizing it made it look so hot☺️😆.

aww thanks dear. hope you will fall in love with our Sanskaar again.
thank you for reading and liking the beginning.

Lots and lots of love.

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Annie

@ANfan_1810

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Dear Nimmi,

Awesome ... loving your ML track ... thanks for writing it. :)

pl update soon ...

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anuja

@princess2791

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

1st a very big sorry for late comment for your awesome work. now comes to this amazing plot it was mindblowing.. just like you me also messing our old sansakar who is strong headed ruthless clever and for swara he is clam but cvs distroy his character make him cute. a very big thanks to bring back our sanskar and i am loveing this plot so much and our hotty as a boxing champion sansakar hyeee mai mar java

and sasan meeting is awesome. waiting for next update and our sansakars action please update soon waiting for next

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

BIKER Sanskar?

That too on a Harley!!?

*faints*

Never in all my SwaSan obsessed days have I imagined him on a bike. But really, the mental image is amazing. ☺️

I absolutely love this man.

I loved Sanskar and Nakuls conversation so much.

Like how sanky says he called to report there's nothing to report? Gosh 😆

Sanskars innner conflict between the Prince and the dark knight is wonderful. He's trying so hard to balance both.

All the dialogue and monologues were simply amazing.👏

And Swara! Now she wants him to be sweet!? Sanskar is right, his wife is indeed crazy. 😳

That dramatic entry and the drunkard running away at the mere sight of Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari😆 isn't this the sanskar we live and adore. *sigh*

The last bit really caught me off guard. I did NOT expect that. I'd really like to see the next chapter now!

What is ' may be' ?!

Amazing work dear. I really like your writing style. There's humor there's drama there's romance there's everything. Perfect.

Please do update soon. 😳

Love

Nandini.🤗

PS: no pm policy? Chalo koini I've bookmarked this story. 😉

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wow this is really interesting story the dialogue of the detective being nakul's wife cracked me up😆🤣 I love your stories I had many imaginations regarding sanskar and one of it was bike you mind reading power

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Ginny potter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

awesome chapter...sarcastic sanskar...oh how much I missed those sarcasm filled dialogues of his... poor nakul...but I m glad that there is someone who is taking care of sanskar.

oh god how much I loved his thoughts and future plans regarding sahil...😈 hope the day come soon when he can execute his plans...

I was laughing like crazy when sanskar called that detective and nakul a married couple...🤣

and they met... he is with her...he is always with her, its just that swara doesn't accept that she can throw her out of her house but from her life and from herself...never.

and she calls him bigger thug...🤣 and after throwing him out of their house she wants to go with him to his house... well this swara for us.

exactly that prince mode had done no good to sanskar maheswari...he is a born Knight as u said. oh god how much I loved his explanation of maybe...😎 awesome chapter once again.

lots of love,
Helee.

Edited by Helee - 9 years ago