SS: One More Time. (Part 2 updt. pg. 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimi 🤗
Looking forward to your take on the current track and such an interesting start to the story! Cannot promise to comment as often as I should and would like to but will definitely be reading around work and own writing commitments and am sure like all your stories it will be fab!

Liked how you created the palpable aura around the boxing ring and brought out Sanskaar's real resilience and "fighter" capabilities out. I so miss the "badass" Sanskaar too:)

Love,

Shru x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi nimmi🤗
👏👏👏 it was way too awesome. Dude its a treat to read such beautiful piece. And you deserve to inflated ego ( as you say).
This is simply sanskar THE DARK FORCE that none can stop. Love to see him back.
Excited to read further parts..😛
Loads of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when Sanskaar starts fighting he doesn't pull back punches. Be it in professional field of business or boxing... or life. sanskar the dark knight... loved it...loved it and once again just loved it...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow ..SS ..nimmo .. I am so so looking forward to it darlin..super excited I am🥳 ..and fighter sanskaar ..uff ..hot I loved that part of pouring water on his face and shaking off water droplets after fight ..I can so totally imagine how would he look .. 😳 waiting to fall in love with fighter sanskaar again😉 and fight was rocking . no body messes with my darlin😆😳
Love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh this was amazing..
Always wanted to Sanskar this way..strong and passionate..fighting..no literally killing attitude..Swara is so gonna fall in love with him..She herself won't be able to stop herself from falling in love with this Sanskar..he is so intense..
Amazing start..He was killing..speechless..it was so cold and nerve tickling when he said in his icy tone my turn..he could have taken the opponent's life..just by his words..his voice so intense..
Swara is going to burn in the fire called love..
Can't wait to read more..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Nimmi🤗,
Thank you so very much for starting this SS. Truthfully, the thought of VK in that ridiculous wig had me cringing when I first saw the picture on the forum. Was it truly necessary to give him a whole new avatar to win back HIS Swara? I think not. But I guess there is going to be some comic relief with this 'Kissan' - accent and language, so I am in two minds. I would definitely rather prefer the amazing Sanskaar back, who pretended to be mad to avenge his love, to win Swara back without this Kissan subterfuge. So I am so freaking grateful to read your introductory post itself! 😆

Coming to the Chapter - *sigh* I was so drooling while reading this amazing chapter on Sanskaar (Why are there no real guys like him?? why?!!😭). Well, he has definitely found an outlet for his agony by getting punched and an outlet for his resulting rage by pummeling his opponent. Nakul Mehta - now this guy is like Aman from IPKKND, but atleast we have seen his face in SwaRagini. Loved how this chapter was partly from his POV, giving me as a reader insight of only what an outsider will determine from the scenario. Absolutely brilliant Chapter.!

Gosh, you write so well.! Every time I read something written by you I cannot stop wondering how can someone write so well! Man, hats off!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Don't keep me waiting tooo long.

Love,
V❤️

Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nimi superb start
Please do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yayyy! A treat on it's way. Will comment fully once I unpack and have my mind wrapped around this thing. At the moment words have been knocked out of me. So AWESOME!!!
Res.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimmi, you have no idea how much I love you lady!
Thank you so much for making it a SS & giving the Dark Knight Sanskaar Maheshwari back!
Bt if you keep changing the title & don't send PM, how am I going to keep track & find that you updated?
Not done Nim *Pout*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nimmi...
Thank u dear for strtng a ss... Happy to see it...
Loved Sanskar character a lottt... U nailed it as usual...
Amazing update... Waiting for the nxt part...
Cont soon...

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