Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05) - Page 18

Originally posted by: lucky.m

saku ..🤗🤗

This piece of cake is double yummy😳😳 eyes of sanskaar ..god ..I fell in love with them again with your SS..that was so so beautifully done 👏.👏.he can encompass all emotions and evoke them without a single word ..those eyes ..ahh ..❤️

.I love this SS yaar ..I love how it makes me relive all those moments .How come I didn't figure out prasad and swara and the connection😆 blame on you again lady .Your first part made me all hazy that my heart took over mind and I love it 😳..swasan ki case main its always heart .na😳

Tum mere upar ho swara, that confession while not in conscious state ..that lines of sanskaar ..god ..I love this man ..I want him now and I cant tell you How I am feeling right now ..I couldnt get over yesterdays eyes of sanskaar ..utter worship for swara, that hope, that light and spark looking at her and now this comes .I love your words they are magic and enchanting you know that which cast a spell

One more step towards healing the scars .Waiting for next treat 😉

Love

Lucky

PS; U down with Flu 😕..Get well soon sweet heart🤗

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

It is official - brown is now my next favourite color - despite the woody-ness recall of one shade of this color!

And unbaked cake batter brings back childhood memories of mom baking and my brother always wanting to lick the mixing bowl clean, of aroma of freshly baking cake and the taste of it fresh from the oven - a heavenly memory just as your chapter is. Will give a detailed comment too.

Love,

Nyna

PS: which emoticon is going to match this chapter

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Like it? I LOVE it!

So beautifully written.

I love how you started off with colors and then wrapped it up in Sanskars Brown eyes and woodsy cologne.

Brown seems very fitting to him for Brown associates with earth and he is as patient and as nurturing.

My heart just broke to tiny bits when Swara told him to leave. Even when he was hurt all he seemed to care about was her and to have his concern be slighted and to be shunned by her would have been a huge blow on him.

His pain is heartbreaking to even read and those dialogues,...Sakura you've done an amazing job. Again.

Swara has come along way I guess. From calling him a khooni and running away from him to sharing space with him and trying to reason with him, she has progressed quite a lot.

I really loved that bit Sanskar laughs at her determination to prove him wrong, perhaps he too hopes she'll remember him by trying to prove him wrong.

I half expected Swara to use the typical Swaragini drug, the one that makes you repeat what's been told, but then again she's Swara so she will do it the 'right' way. I didn't quite understand her motive behind the use of a sedative though. But the outcome was splendid.

I do expect Swara to have the sense to know that not many people can lie when inebriated and so I think she has believed at least a part of his confession.

It is terrible that despite of everything he still blame himself for everything that has happened.

Honestly if Swara doesn't remember him it's really her loss. But I sure hope she will.

I loved the update so much.

And thank you so mcuh for sending me a pm.

Love

Nandini