Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05)

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chandanagimsy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Hey di..feeling like installment part...very small for me...but amazing..again swara drugged sanskaar ...aww...please let her fall gradually in love with sanskaar..yes sanskaar doesnt need pity love but true swara's love...continue soon...loved it di

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
Hey di..feeling like installment part...very small for me...but amazing..again swara drugged sanskaar ...aww...please let her fall gradually in love with sanskaar..yes sanskaar doesnt need pity love but true swara's love...continue soon...loved it di

Thanks dear.

Had to end it there, it felt fitting for the title to do so😊

She will not fall in love instantly, at least the doubt is gone for some extent now. I will continue soon, glad you loved it.

Love,

Sakura

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Lucky!🤗

saku ..🤗🤗

This piece of cake is double yummy😳😳 eyes of sanskaar ..god ..I fell in love with them again with your SS..that was so so beautifully done 👏.👏.he can encompass all emotions and evoke them without a single word ..those eyes ..ahh ..❤️

.I love this SS yaar ..I love how it makes me relive all those moments .How come I didn't figure out prasad and swara and the connection😆 blame on you again lady .Your first part made me all hazy that my heart took over mind and I love it 😳..swasan ki case main its always heart .na😳

Tum mere upar ho swara, that confession while not in conscious state ..that lines of sanskaar ..god ..I love this man ..I want him now and I cant tell you How I am feeling right now ..I couldnt get over yesterdays eyes of sanskaar ..utter worship for swara, that hope, that light and spark looking at her and now this comes .I love your words they are magic and enchanting you know that which cast a spell

One more step towards healing the scars .Waiting for next treat 😉

Love

Lucky

PS; U down with Flu 😕..Get well soon sweet heart🤗

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Nyna,
welcome dear🤗
This one is unbaked cake batter, do tell me how it tastes like😳

It is official - brown is now my next favourite color - despite the woody-ness recall of one shade of this color!

And unbaked cake batter brings back childhood memories of mom baking and my brother always wanting to lick the mixing bowl clean, of aroma of freshly baking cake and the taste of it fresh from the oven - a heavenly memory just as your chapter is. Will give a detailed comment too.

Love,

Nyna

PS: which emoticon is going to match this chapter

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Res 2 😊

Unres:

Dear Sakura,

Apologies for this late unres.

What a peaceful start to this chapter. Your description of the various shades of colours blue and brown was very alluring. I haven't given much thought to colours as such, so this was very very pretty. Add to that the use of these colours to describe Sanskaar....

Doubts about Sanskaar creeping into Swara's mind. Loved this inner monologue so so much. But ofcourse you had to bring us readers back to reality from our SwaSan land. Truly, every time Swara has said 'Stay away from me', 'murderer' 'khooni' it has been hurting my heart thinking about Sanskaar's hurt, so obviously this sort of made me flinch. Fabulously written scene.

The sedated prasad and its wonders - Ah... Sakura, you spin words so so magnificently. My heart is literally bursting with love for Sanskaar. This man, gosh! I think he has literally ruined all the men for most of us fangirls😆. The plan definitely backfired, but to backfire so awesomely. Loads and loads of hugs for this whole scene🤗. You've managed to bring out so many emotions in me while reading this, I don't know how to express them. Give yourself a treat for writing this. 👏 Tum mere upar ho, phir se! Goodness, I want to screech like a 15 year old seeing her celebrity crush face to face, which is saying something because I never do that. 😆 'So very Swara Bose of you.!' Mahn! How do you come up with such lines?Don't even get me started on the emotional ones. ❤️ Only one thing to say - Yes Swara, he is as amazing, if not more, as he sounds!😉

The next part was so well thought out. It is so glaringly obvious that Swara cannot be the same Swara because of memory loss and loving Sanskaar now would truly be an obligaion. Everything has to start anew. Brilliant monologue here. Loved how you concluded this chapter.

Your writing is fabulous as usual. 😊

Love,

Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Like it? I LOVE it!

So beautifully written.

I love how you started off with colors and then wrapped it up in Sanskars Brown eyes and woodsy cologne.

Brown seems very fitting to him for Brown associates with earth and he is as patient and as nurturing.

My heart just broke to tiny bits when Swara told him to leave. Even when he was hurt all he seemed to care about was her and to have his concern be slighted and to be shunned by her would have been a huge blow on him.

His pain is heartbreaking to even read and those dialogues,...Sakura you've done an amazing job. Again.

Swara has come along way I guess. From calling him a khooni and running away from him to sharing space with him and trying to reason with him, she has progressed quite a lot.

I really loved that bit Sanskar laughs at her determination to prove him wrong, perhaps he too hopes she'll remember him by trying to prove him wrong.

I half expected Swara to use the typical Swaragini drug, the one that makes you repeat what's been told, but then again she's Swara so she will do it the 'right' way. I didn't quite understand her motive behind the use of a sedative though. But the outcome was splendid.

I do expect Swara to have the sense to know that not many people can lie when inebriated and so I think she has believed at least a part of his confession.

It is terrible that despite of everything he still blame himself for everything that has happened.

Honestly if Swara doesn't remember him it's really her loss. But I sure hope she will.

I loved the update so much.

And thank you so mcuh for sending me a pm.

Love

Nandini

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Res. Will unres when I get time dear.😳

Unresed.
Hi Sakura dear,😊
Read all the parts together.😳 Awesome updates dear.👏 Each and every part was exceptionally beautiful.😃 Loved each and every SwaSan moments.😳 Sanskar's pain and longing for Swara's love and Swara's inner turmoil is nicely portrayed.😳 Plzz update soon. And thanks for the pm dear.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 9 years ago

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

hey sakura,

what a beautiful chapter it was...! first of all I hate brown color...despite having darkest brown as my eye color...but right now I m loving it...!

swara getting lost in those eyes... you described her confusion and contradictory emotions so well...and she did it again, drugging sanskar maheswari...something never changes... so many throw backs swara drugging sanskar , falling on couch and tum mere upar ho phir se...I m just loving it...!

sanskar says most perfect things when he is not in his senses as we know... he loves her so so much...and now she knows it and now she has different kind of confusion and fear far more scary and realistic from previous one.( for me)but just like before sanskar's uncondition love will help her to fight those demons and she will fall for him...phir se.😳

and I have few lines to share again...sorry if its irritating...[embarrassed smile] this one is from sanskar's pov...

I'm wasted away.
I made a million mistakes.
Am I too late?oh yeah
There's a storm in my head
it rains on my bed
when you're not here,
oh I'm not afraid of dying,
but I am afraid of losing you.

lots of love,
Helee.

Edited by Helee - 9 years ago

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Part 2 also awesome sakura.

Like it? No loved it dear.

Eagerly waiting for the nxt part.

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Dear

After the first chapter iwas hoping for some lovely moments between them since he was taking her to thrir bedroom. But what unfolded in this chapter is beyond my expectations.There was passion but the underlying pain made it more beautiful.How much can a man endure in love?.Also i loved your opening paragraph. Reading the first line i was confused ki did i miss something in the last chapter. But when the description turned from blue to brown I understood how wonderfully who had laid it out.

Waiting anxiously for next chapter

Veena

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