Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Saku🤗
Good to see u back on beautiful scars ..a soothing balm on torture ml track induced ...I loved swars here ..these days I really find it hard,in fact impossible to connect with her ..but here her concern for sanskaar .. Willing to give their marriage a chance and her convo with sahil ..⭐️ but I loved sujata over here a bit more being someone showing swara mirror of her actions and I loved the bit of how Annapurna gave a thought of being in shoes of sujju..I always find ap double standarded..when it comes to her son's and sunny ..

So is swara ..going to sign divorce papers as punishment inflicted on self ..

👏👏 loved it 😳

Love
Lucky

NAHI ! !!!!!!

I wouldn't have her signing those papers again. One track of those mistakenly signed papers gave me enough headaches for a life time.

Will be back with more Lucky dearest loved that you loved it.

Love,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Darling Saku,
I love it, only a quick read and I am lost, as usual.

Hey dearest,
I always adore your comments no matter in whatever length you offer them for both their wit and sweet nature. So first of all thanks a ton for dropping by 🤗
Quickly, though the gentle letting down of Swara's barriers was nice, what I liked, scratch that, loved is Sujata, I so love her here, the way she breaks down in front of Annapurna and even Annapurna's reaction - I so love the anticipation of wanting to know what they have planned and what Sahil is going to get.

I'm placing my money on Sujata too. It was fun writing her outburst. I think you're a wear that I'm normally rather fairly disposed towards her while I'm annoyed at AP most of the time. here I gAve them both a nudge towards what I want to see from them rather than what they make me sit through. As for Sahil he is in for trouble...
Swara genuinely deciding to give her marriage a chance without remembering anything much and her very curt remarks to Sahil.

In my opinion that should have been the whole point of the ML track. falling in love once more, highlighting the Kismet connection which was lost in the original. glad you like it.
And then Swara's realisation, the she had hurt him so many times, (I first thought that it would be nice if she overhead the whole conversation, but no then she might decide to help Sahil) she cannot remember and that it is not fair that she does not. Beautiful scar indeed.
That is indeed the case here. I knew you would agree with Swara. After all this is what we were screaming about during the ML track.

Will be back - this is instead of the that three lettered word that I have removed from my dictionary.😉

loads of love,
Nyna

Replied in blue above. Thank you so much for bringing joy to my day with this.

Loads of love and a bunch of hugs,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Saku🤗
Good to see u back on beautiful scars ..a soothing balm on torture ml track induced ...I loved swars here ..these days I really find it hard,in fact impossible to connect with her ..but here her concern for sanskaar .. Willing to give their marriage a chance and her convo with sahil ..⭐️ but I loved sujata over here a bit more being someone showing swara mirror of her actions and I loved the bit of how Annapurna gave a thought of being in shoes of sujju..I always find ap double standarded..when it comes to her son's and sunny ..

So is swara ..going to sign divorce papers as punishment inflicted on self ..

👏👏 loved it 😳

Love
Lucky

Lucky deatest🤗

I've been planning since long to retrieve Beautiful Scars just couldn't produce the chapter exactly the way I wanted. I know right...Swara on screen is a lostrich case for me...I couldn't connect with her since ages now and I'm not even complaining anymore. instead my Sujata does!

Oh yeah, AP invented double standarded and owns the patent for it as well. But here Sujata was genuine and it shook her momentarily. I so want this woman to step up to her full potential don't you?

AS I said in my short revert before Swara won't be signing Divorce Papers, you can let that worry go.

Thanks a bunch for this lovely input dearest.

Love,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#264

Discovery of the day, my auto correction has an imagination of its own. All the credit of any strange words in the above replies goes to that imagination.

Finished individual replies so far. sorry if I missed anyone.

LOVE you loads,

Sakura

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#265

Sakura dear...

Wonderful update...after so long u updated this..im very happie...

It is still fresh in our mind...no need to reread again...it is an enchanting tale...

Chapter 6 was a delight...i soo imagined a wonderful scene regarding swasan after 5th cliffhanger..which we got indeed ...it was bliss...i was not expecting sahil...acting like a parasite...stuck to swara...but was overwhelmed with swara's response to him...but as usual sujju listened half...n understood none...n exaggerated it twice...AP gave her some piece of advice..which she understood but why ?? Why swara eavesdrops...oh my God..im sooo annoyed..what decision is she going to take...??? No... do not leave sanky plzzz...im worried now..plzzz update soon...

Oh i forgot u got exam..all the best...work hard..study more..u will pass with flying colours...InshaAllah...

Talia

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res 😈😈

I know I am terribly late to Un res, Saku dear. Its been a bit of a turmoil this past week/ 10 days. But I am in the process of typing out my comment and here is my spot where I shall be unresing this afternoon. 😊

Loads and Loads of Love,

----Viji

Un-Resss (at last) 😳 😈

Saku dear...I had already told you how much I loved this chapter. It was a lovely interpretation of the ML track the way it could have been shown, the way it should have been taken forward. Instead of the rather half baked/ unbaked alternative which we actually got. 😕 😭

I was so happy for the fact that we had Swara here listening to her heart; giving Sanskaar the benefit of thinking that perhaps, her fragmentary memory of him pulling the trigger was not the reality after all. Not the complete reality, at least. In the previous chapters, you had shown us how Sanskaar told her to just give their friendship, in a sense, a chance. He had given her the divorce papers if she really wanted them, because he knew that for Swara, the fact that she felt tied to him when her mind was not convinced about his bona fides, would be an intolerable pressure. That one act by Sanskaar really went a long way in giving Swara a sense of comfort didn't it? Adding to the ever present, silent voice within her that kept repeating that he meant something special to her, even if she didn't quite remember.

I liked the way she showed so much concern for Sanskaar's ill health. She was really protective and caring, and Sujju's one liners there were priceless! 😆

You had given me a hint earlier that Sahil would be at his needy, clingy, obsessive worst here, and boy, that creep certainly was. 🤢 Imagine so coolly questioning a person---even if she is a friend---about her decision not to go in for an impulsive divorce. He so desperately wants her to end her marriage, it is quite clear that his emotions are far from being that of a supportive friend. And thank God, the Swara in your fic realizes this. While she is grateful to him for having saved her life, and would like to consider him a friend provided Sahil remains within his bounds; she is very clear that he does not have a right to interfere in decisions that are the exclusive domain of Sanskaar and herself. A marriage is like that, after all. Friends can offer some counsel from time to time---but ultimately, they cannot and should not intervene between the couple.
Kudos to Swara for taking this rational, considered decision here.

But unfortunately, Sujju was so supremely annoyed with Sahil's visit to see her, that she couldn't help but let off steam to Annapurna about how Swara had always taken Sanskaar for granted. How she had caused him anguish in the past (I presume she meant with her suspicions of his culpability in Ragini's kidnapping), and now again, when he had just come out of the depths of despair thinking she was dead, she had come back only to again doubt him.

It is not too difficult to understand Sujju's concerns as a mother---any mother would always see her child's side of things, no matter if the child is 2 or 27! But the point is, what is Swara going to make of the conversation she overheard between Sujju and AP. 😕 Knowing her, and her extremely well intentioned motives which often blunder into major mishaps----she is going to feel that Sanskaar is better off without the hurt which she always causes him. I can so see her now, trying to distance herself from Sanskaar, 'for his own good'. Without realizing, that this action of hers will tear his heart asunder; make him feel utterly anguished. God, I hope she effects a course correction soon. Am I right in presuming we have hardly seen the last of Sahil, BTW? He is sure to make a re entry to further fan the flames of temporary misunderstanding, no? Or rather, not misunderstanding----but he would surely crow and whoop and Sanskaar's pain. 😭

Looking forward to the next chapter eagerly, my dear. 🤗🤗

Loads of Love.

----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 9 years ago