SwaSan OS - A Love Like None Other

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Beautiful and heartfelt. Truly loved this one 😊

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nyna

I still have tears in my eyes wen I am.typing this. The writers in this forum never ceases to surprise me and I am happy to be a member here amongst such talents.

That was really beautiful especially sanskars POV reminiscing his child hood with swara. And those words he ad written on her last bday with the double SS, made me so sad that I am not able to forgive swara yet.

Once again thanks for the wonderful OS

Veena

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Vianna

@BookWormV

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Res. That was beautiful. I could feel the love in each word written. ❤️

Unres:

Dear Nyna,

This is one absolutely beautiful OS.❤️ To fit the whole series of emotions and life of SwaSan in such a captivating and alluring way is a tremendously impressive feat. You managed to put their life right from Swara being 3 hours old to the present time. Hats off to you.!👏

I have always, always liked Sanskaar more than I liked Swara. Maybe its the female part of me or just the fact this character has such depth, but I have always liked Sanskaar tons more than Swara. Guiltily, I also seem to like Ragini's character (before they butchered her with showing her innocent all over again) more than Swara too But your Sanskaar here took my breath away. To love so unconditionally is so courageous and at the same time so, so painful. And to top it off, the person you are in love with is down right rude to you. It is all the more heart breaking. The quotes you put at the start of each part were so apt and full of meaning to what was being felt by the characters and me as a reader.

The emotional portrayal of Swara, Sanskaar, hell even the family members was fabulous. It is obvious when your name is linked to a childhood friend you want to get away from their shadow. Swara was literally in a corner with the constant teasing and her own feeling regarding Sanskaar and the kiss on her 16th birthday along with the 'I love you' must have caused her to lash out finally and react as any teenager would. I really loved the realism here. And still after all this, she had to seek out Sanskaar whenever something happened in her life.

Sahil was the perfect person to fall for., the perfect substitute - the idea of falling in love with whom provided Swara with the much needed diversion from Sanskaar's love and her confused feelings. A special thanks for no unnecessary drama with respect to this weird character (who it seems is going to turn out to be a brilliant villain in the show).

Nyna, I really want to bow down to you for the whole Swara scene when she reaches home and finally opens the gifts given by Sanskaar. My heart was literally crying right along side Swara. What a poignantly worded part that was.!👏

This OS is going to safely find its place right alongside some other beautiful writings on this forum.

Waiting for some more beautiful writings from you. Are you planning for anything on the memory loss track? Would love to read it.

Love ,

V😊

Edited by BookWormV - 9 years ago

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priya_86

@priya_86

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Thanks for the PM😊

Very well written and portrayed.

Writing comes to you naturally 😊

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nyna, you bowled me over & out!

I don't know what to say!

Res: Off to go to read again, and then maybe again!

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res 🤗 🤗

❤️ X 1000 for the dedication. 😊

for the lovely SwaSan romance, Sanskaar's unconditional, selfless, potent adoration for Swara, and Swara's realization that she loves him 'equivalently'. 😳 And what a beautiful, profound realization that was. 👏

Blue, especially cerulean being Sanskaar's favorite color... it's mine, too. 😉

And those quotes by Rumi... sigh...

Will be back for more tomorrow. Loved it. 👏

Loads of Love

Viji

Viji, 🤗

You deserve that dedication. And blue - my favourite too (all the shades from midnight blue to icy silver tones. Will wait .

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Dedicated to me! Res!!! Will read it now :)

🤗 Will wait!

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome Os.. 😊

Thanks, Sneha

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Prerana

@prerulalli

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Lovely OS

thanks for the PM

Love,

Prerana 😊

It clearly depicts the unconditional love that sanskaar pours on swara😊

And as usual ----our swara----Tubelight in this case----Always had been running from her own feelings...Sahil...urgh...Iam hating this guy already...Donno what will he do in the serial in the upcoming episodes!!!!!