SwaSan OS - A Love Like None Other - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: The.Lannister

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Wonderful OS Nyna👏 This was brilliant.

Thank you☺️☺️☺️

Swara is lucky to have met her soulmate within the first 3 hours of her life😳😆 That was such a super cute moment in the hospital when she opened her eyes & brushed her tiny fist against his face. A total soul connect moment if ever there was one😳

Yes, three hours is good enough, and I so desperately wanted a deep soul connect, especially now that the CV's seem to have completely butchered it in the serial

Loved all the special moments SwaSan shared here...all the seemingly normal moments which now have turned precious for Swara because she has finally realized their worth as also of the man with whom she spent them😳

It is quite true in real life too, we never realise the value of a moment till it becomes a memory, and the memory becomes a treasure when we lose the person who made that memory for us. Swara needed a close encounter with death to realise what she was pushing away.

That charm bracelet was a wonderful idea to gift her, especially with the infinity symbol. Something which only a person as deep as Sanskaar could come up with. Though the last charm did break my heart to a zillion pieces. A man so sincere doesn't deserve such a terrible heartbreak. In the initial parts I was so scared of how far would Swara go in order to prove to herself that she didn't love Sanskaar...of how much she would hurt him in the process & then of how much it would affect their relationship eventually. But that truck driver must have been God in disguise I guess😆 finally after some much needed retrospection she understands her true feelings for this wonderful, wonderful man who is so much hers ❤️

Only Sanskaar could think up of an idea that symbolic - double infinity is two eights, which is what sixteen is. Added to that was his promise that he would always be there for her.
That last note he wrote, made me misty eyed too.
The truck driver was either God in disguise or...must have been incited by her guardian angel, who must have been despairing at her foolishness.😉It was high time she realised how much she was hurting him and herself too.

This story also left me with a lot of questions?" What if Sanskaar had not kissed her? How would she have reacted to his gift then? How would their story have shaped up had she opened each gift each year😳 Ahh! Stupid girl you wasted so many days...but chalo better late than never😳

Considering that it is Swara whom we are talking about, it would not have made much difference. She is great at collating facts but lacks the perspective to seek the truth from them. She always needs a jolt to see the truth from the facts. So I guess if she had opened each gift as she received them she would have liked them but might not have truly appreciated them.
But then as you said, better late than never.😊



Dear Shruti,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Zephyr8

Beautiful and heartfelt. Truly loved this one 😊


Thank you Sagarika, I have not seen you on the Forum lately. Great to hear from you.

love
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nyna

I still have tears in my eyes wen I am.typing this. The writers in this forum never ceases to surprise me and I am happy to be a member here amongst such talents.
That was really beautiful especially sanskars POV reminiscing his child hood with swara. And those words he ad written on her last bday with the double SS, made me so sad that I am not able to forgive swara yet.
Once again thanks for the wonderful OS
Veena


Dear Veena,

Thank you so much for reading and liking my story. As to your observation about the writers in this forum, truer words have never been written. The talent that these writers display is amazing (and you should count your story amongst them) that I feel blessed to be a part of this forum.

Swara - still not able to forgive her, maybe you should, after all, Sanskaar has forgiven her😉

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya_86

Thanks for the PM😊

Very well written and portrayed.
Writing comes to you naturally 😊


Dear Priya,

Those words from one whose writing I admire make me ☺️

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: prerulalli

Lovely OS

thanks for the PM
Love,
Prerana 😊

It clearly depicts the unconditional love that sanskaar pours on swara😊
And as usual ----our swara----Tubelight in this case----Always had been running from her own feelings...Sahil...urgh...Iam hating this guy already...Donno what will he do in the serial in the upcoming episodes!!!!!


Dear Prerana,

Sanskaar's does love unconditionally, does he not. And Swara, I guess she was overwhelmed by everyone being sure that she belonged to Sanskaar. Sahil, that was my attempt to make him a positive character (he loved her but did not force himself) and was so difficult for me to write as I simply hate him in the serial.
We need all the help and support we can give each other in the next few weeks.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Hi Nayna,

This is our first meeting. I loved your story. Cvs has spoilt the intensity, spontaneity of swasan relationship. There is a gap between what is and what will be -----as always. You have lessoned my disappointment. Thanks 😳
Aparna 😊


Dear Aparna,

Lovely to meet you too, I am so happy that you loved my story. I wrote it, rather, reworked the rough sketch I had, only to get out my anger and disappointment and frustration and...all similar feelings at the CVs. And this is my state in spite of not watching the episodes, I rely on Sakura's writings, which somewhat lessens the pain but it was not enough.
So I am doubly glad that my rambling story lessened some of your disappointment.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on turning gold dearie, in case you did not notice I unresed on page 2 :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

Congrats on turning gold dearie, in case you did not notice I unresed on page 2 :)


Thanking you - I am reading that comment for, like the fifth time, and will revert after I have read it to my heart's content (maybe a couple of times more at least☺️)

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
@Nyna,
I do the same thing to comments I adore. Read them till the page refuse to load, or computer sleeps. It's alright. Continue gazing at it lovingly if you must, I was worried you missed it. Reply whenever you find yourself full of its sight.
Love,
Saku
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thank you so much for the PM
The OS was really fabulous
Such a beautifully written story!!!! couldn't stop reading!!!
Osmmm work
Would love to read lots and lots more from you!!!
Love,
Supriya

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